Thank you for all the wonderful reveiws my darlings! (Creepy…) Anyhow I have a lot of review and because of that I will update! Oh and for the reader ( Blazingstar of ThunderClan) I will TRY to get a beta reader…I traied last night and it didn't work for me. The reason why the last chapter was so crappy with the battle was because I wrote that at 5:00 in the morning and finished it at 9:00 because of long breaks. (Distractions by my dog Bella wella!) I do not own this.
Jayfeathers P.O.V
"Whitewing. Tell me." Jayfeather softly pressured her.
"It's Birchfall! He's the father!" Whitewing lied. Jayfeather could tell by the waves of guilt and shock from her.
"No he isn't. don't lie to me," Jayfeather hissed. "Now tell he who he is and tell me what happened,"
Whitewing tried to argue but said nothing. She mutterd a name so low even Jayfeather couldn't hear it.
"What?" he said.
"Blackstar…Blackstars the father."
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Jayfeather sighed as he looked through the bushes for some more poppy seeds for Ivypaw. So Whitewing and Blackstar hooked up right before she was with Birchfall and broke up because of the tension in the clans. Then when she and Birchfall became mates she found out that she was having his kits. She never got to tell him because he wouldn't listen. She had Ivykit first behind the nursery when Birchfall went on the journey and then she had Dovepaw who was Birchfalls father. Ivypaws pelt came from Blackstars coat and the silver from Firestars mother. Thankfully her eyes came from Whitewings.
"Now I wonder what Blackstar would think if he found out he was a father. Also that he hurt his own kit." Jayfeather said in a cruel humor.
Ivypaws P.O.V
Ow…that hurt/ W- what the. Where am I? Ivypaw looked around and saw herself in Jayfathers den. that's right. I almost beat Blackstar and got hurt by him. Ivypaw's chest puffed up with pride. She almost beat a clan leader!
"You did well Ivypaw." Ivypaw turned around and saw Hawkfrost and Lionblaze who were sitting a few heartbeats away from her.
"Thanks Hawkfrost." she said purring at her other mentors praise. But…why was Lionblaze here?
"Thank Starclan you're awake!" Cinderheart said padding in and purring at her apprentice. "You fought so well! I knew you would be a great fighter from the start!" She praised her some more.
"Yes Ivypaw that fighting you did against Blackstar was spectacular."
"Any who. You have got the whole clan talking about it!" Cinderheart said proudly.
"Yes. Even Firestar was bragging about making you're sister and you a warrior." Lionblaze said. He kept staring at her with this strange look in his eyes. What was it?
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here under the high rock for a clan meeting!" Firestars Yowl rang out through the clearing. Ivypaw looked around. What was happening? Were Molekit and Cherrykit getting their warrior names? No there only three moons old. Who could-dear Starclan! She was getting her warrior name today.
"Here we gather to a see new warriors of Thunderclan being made. Ivypaw and Dovepaw please come here." Firestar continued. Ivypaw dragged herself out of her soft nest and walked out meeting the warm and proud stares of her clan mates. Dovepaw was there too her white pelt was walking proudly across the clearing and every head turned to her. What the! She was the one who almost defeated the Shadowclan leader! But, still she saved the clan from a falling tree. But, that doesn't mean she should get all the attention! Even on their warrior ceremony!
" You both have shown great courage and strength and courage in that battle yesterday. Lionblaze is Dovepaw ready to become a wariro?" He asked the golden tom.
"Yes. Yes she is." he said. His voice cracking in pride."
"Cinderheart is Ivypaw ready to become a warrior?" he asked the dark grey she-cat.
"Yes Firestar." she told him. He looked down at the two excited apprentices.
"Dovepaw, Ivypaw do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend this clan, even at the cost f your own lives?" He said looking at Dovepaw. Figures.
"Ido." Answered Dovepaw.
"I do." Ivypaw also told him.
"Then by the powers of Starclan I give you your warro names: Dovepaw, from this moment on you will be known as Dovewing. Starclan honors your Keen senses and Loyalty." Dovepa-Dovewingraised her head proudly and then looked away at the mention of Loyalty. What was she hiding? Thunderclan is proud to have you as a warrior now Dovewing. Make me proud.
"Ivypaw, from this moment on you will be known as Ivysoul. Starclan honors your bravery and determination. Without you and your fighting skills Thunderclan wouldn't have been able to have that advantage with Blackstar."
"Dovewing! Ivysoul! Dovewing! Ivysoul!"
Hawkfrost and all the others yowled her name the loudest. Along with Lionblaze. He kept looking at her with this weird look in his eyes. And now that weird look was their all the time. What did he want from her? Cinderheart looked as proud as any mentor would for their apprentice. Hawkfrost. The neame sent chills down her spine. Not cold weird chills. But, nice warm ones. All the others were looking at him suspiciously but, kept on cheering.
-X-
Ivysoul yawned and looked at Dovepaw. She was streaching and waiting for the sun to rise up. It was their vigil. The moment of silnce for all new wariors. Only then till a piece of the sun came out and they saw Brambleclaw and all the other cats come out for their tasks for the day. Lionblaze and Cinderheart came out of the den and walked towards them.
"Dovewing. It's over. You can talk now." Lionblaze said,
"You too Ivysoul you're both done." she said with a smile. "Oh and you two can stay inn camp for the day. Besides after that long vigil you two would be very tired." she said purring. Lionblaze only nodded and walked off towards Brambleclaw. When Cinderheart left they both started to talk.
"So what's with you and Hawkfrost?" Dovewing asked.
"Oh. Nothing." Ivysoul lied.
"Oh because yesterday he was calling out your name and the day before that he was sitting near you in Jayfeathers den throughout the whole night and you and him were talking. You also called him Hawkpaw." Dovepaw told her
'Oh. That was nothing. Now can we just go. I'm so tired if Shadowclan started to attck again I'd miss it!" she joked and her sister purred. Maybe she was just overreacting. Just because her sister was special friends with Firestar and the others didn't mean she had to ignore her.
Hawkfrost's dream
"So has she gotten her warrior name?" Tigerstar asked his son.
"Yes father." Hawkfrost replied.
"What is it?" Tigerstar asked his amber eyes glowing red in the darkness.
"It's Ivysoul father." Hawkfrost told him.
"Impressive. Who knew that Kittypet could actually think of a name for a worthy warrior." He said. "And her battle with Blackstar was amazing. How bad was she hurt?"
"Only one cut on her ear. Not to bad. But, the blow to her head knocked her out." Hawkfrost told him.
"Perfect. Phase one is complete. Now all we have to do is wait for our 'hero' to come. Now go." Tigerstar excused him.
"Alright,"
"Oh and Hawfrost if I ever catch you sleeping next to her that close again. It's you pelt. Got it." Tigerstar growled at him. Hawkfrost nodded and walked of. Who was this hero? Then the wind whispered something: Three days…Three days? Until what?