well here is the next chapter of Naruto: Rewind. first off i want to address a few things, first Deathmvp, the reason is because it was just supposed to be a warm up, not actual training, i thought i made that clear, but if not im sorry for the confusion. next Narjiro, again im thankful for your review, and i did try to explain it a little more in this chapter. and i didnt make naruto a hanyou because its done wayyy to much, and i wanted to make this story original. next meech macko, the reason he can shape shift is because of the kyuubi being in him, and all foxes can shapeshift, the reason he doesnt stay the same is he doesnt want to reveal himself. and no, im almost sure he wont shape shift into a girl, mabey later in the story for a mission, but thats it also from now on there will probably be no bashing, and sasuke wasnt meant ot seem as nice as he does in that chapter, mabey he was just put in an unsually good mood at not being pestered for a date all day.
well on to the story, i dont own naruto.
Naruto was keeping a similar height to Sasuke, so as not to give away his strength.
On her second try Sakura made it to the top, "Hey Kakashi sensei I made it!" she said.
Kakashi looked up and, "Good job Sakura, now run up and down it to improve your stamina."
Sakura nodded, "Ok." she replied and started.
In a couple hours, Sasuke and Naruto had gotten tree climbing down, so they went and took a couple d-rank missions then left for the day.
After getting back to her house, all Sakura felt like doing was sleeping, but she new she had to train, so she settled for getting something to eat and a little break before she started her training. She did the same as the previous day. After finishing her workout, she practiced on building up her stamina and reserves by running up and down a tree. After she finished all this, it was around seven o-clock, so she went inside and took a shower, then collapsed on her bed, and was asleep in seconds.
Meanwhile
Sasuke had come home, or at least to where he lived, in a slightly better mood, from not having to deal with Sakura pestering him for a date all day. He then proceeded to do his normal workout. 120 pushups, 100 squats, 100 pull-ups, and ten laps around the Uchiha training grounds. After that, he decided he wanted to learn a new jutsu, so he went to the Uchiha library.
After searching through the files of various fire jutsu, and a few lightning jutsu, he came across a technique called, 'god of fire' it was a fire technique (obviously) that created a ring of chakra around the user, then rapidly expanding it, killing anyone in a 300 yard radius. Sasuke liked the sound of that, but after reading over the instructions, he also found out it was an S-rank jutsu. Now he wasn't one to say no to a challenge, but trying to perform an S-rank jutsu, and killing yourself from using all your chakra, was not the way he wanted to spend his evening.
So after searching through a few more jutsu, he came across a C-rank lightning jutsu, it allowed the user to charge up a ball of lightning in his/her hand, then launch it at an opponent in a bolt of lightning. He memorized the handsigns, and then went to the training field to practice.
The first time he tried it, he sent 500 volts of electricity through his body, paralyzing him for a few minutes. After recovering from that attempt, he tried again, this time going much slower, and more carefully, then a orb of lightning started to form in his hand, after reaching about baseball size, he aimed his hand at a tree about 50 yards away, then the lightning bolt shot from his hand, but only made it about 10 yards, before fizzling out.
He growled in frustration, but went through the handsigns again. After forming a slightly larger lightning ball in his hand, he shot again, making it about 15 yards.
Time skip 2 hours later
After two hours of practicing, and a chakra and food pill, he had managed to get it to go the full fifty yards he had been targeting. Tomorrow he was going to try to get the full distance that it had stated in the instructions, of 150 yards.
Meanwhile
Naruto, after Kakashi had dismissed them, he had went to training ground 44 to practice so he wouldn't be disturbed, the only person he knew that was in these woods a lot was Anko, and he could sense her, or anyone else for that matter in time to escape.
He then came out of his henge, (I'm just going to say henge, but when I do I mean he is shapshifed.) and made several hundred clones. As soon as they came into existence they got to work, some on chakra control, some on jutsu, some on physical exorcise.
He then started his own training, and noticed several changes to his body, so he stopped his training so he could go visit Kyuubi and find out what exactly he did to his body. He sat down in lotus position and concentrated.
Mindscape
Naruto appeared in his mindscape, and made his way across all the winding paths untill he eventually found Kyuubi, who was sleeping. "Seriously, is all you do sleep?" Naruto asked accusingly.
"Well if I had something else to do in here, I might not sleep all the time!" Kyuubi replied. "Well, what is the reason that you graced me with your presence?" Kyuubi said sarcastically.
"I just wanted to know what all exactly you did to my body?" Naruto asked, as he took a seat o a chair that rose out of the ground.
"Ahh I see. Well where do I begin, I altered your muscles, making them much denser, making them learn muscle memory faster, as well as not atrophy. I altered your eyes and nose to be of that on par with an Inazuka's, and your eyesight, during the day will match anyone's, and at night only someone with a very powerful sharingan could beat you. Iv increased your reflexes to be nearly on par with someone with a sharingan. I doubled your healing ability you already had. Iv also altered your chakra network, so as opposed to being able to handle five tails of my power before your chakra network collapsed, you can now handle all nine, though it will require a week or two of recuperation after doing so. But I do not see you ever needing to use my power again, but I figured while I was at, why not." Kyuubi said with a smirk. As the blond ninja hadn't used his chakra in over three years.
"Also iv made your bones denser, making them nearly impossible to break for anyone under kage level. Iv also increased your field of vision slightly, but nothing really noticeable." the Kyuubi replied, clearly happy with his work.
"Oh is that all?" Naruto deadpanned, he clearly did not expect Kyuubi to change so much. "So you really did increase my body to the limits?" he asked curiously.
"Yes I did, and one more thing, if you have any children, this will pass on to them, although over generations, it will get weaker." the Kyuubi replied offhandedly.
"So it will be passed on like a bloodline?" the blond shinobi asked curiously.
"Yes, but unlike a bloodline, of which you only really need basic ninja abilities, which makes clans like the Hyuuga and Uchiha rely on them so much, your abilities will only be a small aid in battle, compared to others, much like the Nara's 'shadow' bloodline, it is nothing without shinobi skills to match it."
"Great, I like it, it also prevents my descendants from coming to rely on it like the Hyuuga or Uchiha. Well that's all I wanted Kyuubi." Naruto said as he turned around and was about to leave, "By the way, thanks kyuu." Naruto said as he left.
"Your welcome….Naruto." the Kyuubi said as he drifted off to sleep. When Naruto woke up, he looked around and saw it was already 8 o-clock, so he had his shadow clones, and chakra clones dispel in small groups, while he made his way back to his apartment.
here is the votes.
anko: 11
tenten: 1
fem haku: 4
temari: 3
kurinai: 9
hinata: 3
hana: 5
yugao: 3
samui: 4 (will be OOC)
ino: 1
tsume: 1
konan: 2
yugito: 1ooc
mei: 1 ooc
fem kyuubi: 2
sakura: 0 (not going to happen unless she gets an outrageous number of votes.
harem: 4
tell the hokage he is from the future: 2
not tell the hokage he is from the future: 2
also, if you have any other suggestions, fell free to tell me and i will ad them to the list.
also special thanks to narjiro, for not missing a chapter yet. and a special thanks to xNamikazeKyuubix it means alot from coming from another writer, especially after reading a couple of your fics and seeing how good they were.
also, yes this chapter was short, and yes it was a filler, but i thought, and apparently so did a few of you, the story was progressing to fast.
well read...well you already did that...so review and tell me what you think, or how i can improve the story.