ok so after reading over some of my reviews, particularly the ones from str8up, darksol666, and astearic i saw what i had done, i took out anko, the person with the most votes for the pairing, because while i was writing i thought of a really cool idea to bring hinata up to naruto's age. but i completely ignored what you all were telling me because i didnt think about the results from the poll, so this is how its going to be, its probably going to be anko, and she will be naruto's age, but it could also be one of the rookie nine girls, or someone that is his age from the first time he lived through his life, i do have a way to bring them back in time. now after saying all that i am terribly sorry that i was just going to go with whatever i wanted. so now here are your options, you can have him paired up with somone from the future in the next month or so, or you can wait for anko until he reveals himself. i will probably wait on anko though. that is all
i dont own naruto
He looked behind him and saw that darts coming after him, he would never make it to the window in time, and they were spread over to big an area to dodge, so he made a couple handsigns "Earthstyle earth encampment wall!" he said.
As he said those words a rock wall raced upwards, through the floors below them, Naruto felt it coming and increased the speed of his water darts. They were mere feet from the man, when a rock wall sprang up from the floor. The darts imbedded themselves into the wall, and penetrated the other side. They kept moving, they were about to hit the man, then they stopped, inches from his face.
Then man looked, and sighed in relief as the darts fell into a puddle on the ground. "I need to end this fast, I'm drawing to much attention, and this building cant take much more." Naruto thought as he tried to think of a way to end this quickly, without leveling the building and anything else around it.
After gathering himself the man stepped out from behind the rock wall, and looked around for Naruto, he spotted him, standing on the other side of the room. He walked out, confused he had given plenty of time for his opponent to hide, but he was just standing there.
Deciding not to dwell on it anymore he flashed through handsigns, "Earthstyle earth spears." he said and four foot long spears of rock formed out of the wall behind him, then sped towards Naruto. Naruto saw them coming. Just as they hit him, he dispersed in a cloud of smoke.
His eyes widened, "Shadow clone!" he searched for the real Naruto but couldn't find him. He reached out his senses but something was blocking them. Then Naruto jumped out from behind a wall and moved his hand towards him, sending several waves of fire towards him.
He couldn't dodge as they were wide spread, so he did a few hand signs and rock from the wall he called up earlier moved under the floor, then came up in front of him, blocking the fire, although they were slightly melted.
He stepped out from behind the rock and Naruto was gone again, he growled he was having a lot of trouble even surviving, much less winning.
Then he saw Naruto jump up through a hole in the floor and he immediately charged, he swung low, but Naruto dodged to the side, he kick, but it was dodged. After a brief tiajustu encounter, he jumped back and made a handsign, rock started moving off the wall he had created and onto his hands and feet.
He then charged again, he swung a backhand fist at Naruto, but Naruto ducked then rolled out of the way. His fist went all the way through the wall, making a hole two feet wide. He then moved and spun into a kick, which Naruto jumped back away from. "His movements are just as fast as before he put all that weight on, he must be using chakra to control where the rock goes, so it doesn't slow him down." Naruto thought to himself.
The man smirked, "So like my armor." he said as rock spread out to cover most of his body, leaving only cracks at the joints so he could move, and no helmet.
"He wants to use armor? Time to show him a real armor." said then made a handsign, and formed his wind armor.
He felt a chakra spike but nothing happened, he could feel a steady output of chakra coming from Naruto, but he couldn't tell what it was doing. He didn't seem like the kind of opponent to waste chakra to intimidate an opponent. But before he had time to ponder on it, Naruto charged forward, a lot faster then he was before.
He ducked under a roundhouse kick, but wasn't able to dodge kick that came afterwards. As he flew back he noticed he had a few small cuts on his armor. "I wonder where those came from?" he wondered, but just ignored it.
When he landed, he got up, but as soon as he did Naruto was on him, he dodged a few punches, but couldn't dodge one to the face, as he reeled back from it, ho noticed something drip into is eyes. He reached up and touched it, then looked at it, "Blood?". he then ducked under a snap kick, and rolled out of the way of an axe kick. When he stood back up, he saw Naruto's foot heading for his side, he couldn't dodge it was moving to fast, this was going to hurt.
Naruto smirked, this was it, he added a large burst of chakra to his wind armor. When his foot met the rock it went straight through, and hit his flesh, opening several large gashes in his side. Naruto then spun the opposite way and kicked him in the other side. Producing the same effect. He ducked and tripped his with a fast powerful low kick, severing one of his Achilles tendon, and nearly severing the other.
He was in extreme pain, and couldn't walk to get to a hospital even if he could get away from this ninja. He had several large gashes over his body, one of his ankles was nearly destroyed all except for the bone, and the other was damaged, he was nearly out of chakra, and was at the mercy of the nin in front of him.
Naruto drew a kunai, and placed it at the mans neck, the sliced all the way threw, killing him instantly, he sealed his head into a scroll, which he sealed into a storage seal on his upped arm. He then shun shined outside of the building, he went through a long serious of handsigns and called on a large amount of chakra, "Lightningstyle limelight!" he said and pointed his hand at the building, several hundred lightning blts shot down from the sky all at once, obscuring his vision of the building, when the light cleared there was nothing left of the building except for a few smoldering ashes. He then shun shined out of the town.
He pulled a scroll out of his pouch and opened it up, then laid it on the ground and sent chakra to it. All of the dirt that was on him and his clothes was sucked into the scroll. After rolling it back up and putting it away, he henged into his younger self. "I really like that instant shower seal I designed, although it was originally just for when I was late for a date, but it has great mission applications to." Naruto though as he went to find his clone so he could replace it.
Unknown location
A man was kneeling before someone on a throne, "Sir, out base in stone country has been destroyed. And everyone but myself eliminated." he said to the man in front of him.
"Completely destroyed? How can that be it had some of our best ninja there, the force must have been very large, I wonder how we did not detect such a large force? How many were there?" the man asked, or more of demanded.
The man gulped, "Umm, sir there w-was only o-one."
"Hmm, say that again, I thought I heard you say there was only one." the man said, hopeful that he had heard wrong.
"Y-yes sir, t-that's what I said." the man sputtered out.
"I see. Put all our bases on high alert, I don't want a repeat!" the leader said sharply.
"H-hai!" he said, then got up and walked out.
" I wonder what kind of shinobi could take out a base of that size alone, even with the element of surprise?" he tried to think of several ninja that had a grudge against him, but none were powerful enough to do such a thing, except one, but he disappeared years ago.
ok so as there is no longer a pole for pairing, i want to say thanks to all my reviewers, and a special thanks tostr8up, for telling me what i did wrong by ignoring the poll. thanks.
but after saying i will probably choose anko, here is another thing to think about, naruto and anko could be more of friends and pranking buddies, and as they have a similar past they could confide in one another. i wouldnt have thought about this had BTB not brought it to my attention.
narjiro, i really get your point, hinata is a little creepy, but i have a way around them instantly falling in love and her stalking him. as explained earlier, i can bring her from the future so she wont stalk him ,will already be over her shyness, and will already be strong, therefor avoiding alot of the reasons most hinataxnaruto stories are terrable.
i know its short bu i ran out of time today, so here it is. constructive criticism is welcome, if you spot a problem, i want to know about it so i can fix it.