Okay people sorry I haven't been able to update in a while but currently there is construction going on roughly a mile from the entrance from my neighborhood, which is making it difficult to update. Mostly because they are messing around with the phone lines. Here is the next chapter and I hope you enjoy it just as much as I have.
New Beginning's ch. 5
Silently everyone sat in the limo as Kyouko drove them before Tsukune started to talk with his cousin and Lady Akashiya just pulled out a romance novel and began to read. Moka and Kira on the other hand just watched the others before Moka began to feel uncomfortable.
"Um…Kira-san, Tsukune mentioned that he trained you. Could you be a little bit more precise on what he taught you?" Asked Moka while Tsukune was busy catching up with his cousin and her mom was drinking a small wine glass filled with blood and reading her book.
"Well…Tsukune's training is hard. Everyday we ran until we fell onto our faces, then we'd do pushups until we couldn't move our arms, we then rolled onto our backs and did sit-ups until we were unable to do any more. After that we would meditate for two to three hours to expand our ability to think and control our yokai. We would then finish the day up with us fighting against one another in both our human form and our demon form. After training we would usually go out to eat and then do random jobs for the sailors on the docks. At night we would go hunting for gang members, kill them, eat their souls, and take anything of value from their bodies. We always hung onto the clothes but we usually sold their watches, rings, or any other jewelry." Said Kira while she smiled fondly at the memories.
"You seriously did all that in one day?" Asked Moka in shock and disbelief.
"Yep but we also wear weights making it harder for us. You on the other hand will start off not wearing weights until you can do thirty laps, five hundred pushups, and five hundred sit-ups without passing out. Although for starters you will run as many laps as you can until you pass out. It will be the same for the rest of the things. After that I will tell you what you need to do." Said Tsukune as he broke away from his conversation.
"You can't be serious." Said Moka as she looked in shock at Tsukune who held a calm look on his face.
"Moka I'm always serious about training. Sadly your physical training will have to wait. You and Kira will be going on a special training trip starting next week. I'll tell you more about it later right now just focus on enjoying your free time." Said Tsukune before he returned to his earlier conversation while Moka and Kira both gulped.
"Um…anyway Kira why weren't you shocked at seeing your teammates being killed right in front of you?" Asked Moka as she turned the conversation away from the training.
"Well I guess it was mostly because we weren't really teammates. In fact every time we had a job they would begin to argue or complain about the job we got stuck with. Outside of that we never saw one another and if we did we ignored one another. Most of the times I saw them outside of a job they were hanging around some slut and getting a job done. So to tell you the truth I'm happy that they're gone along with the rest of the gang." Said Kira coldly while she looked at the ground.
"What happened to the rest of the gang?" Asked Moka before she began to think of all the different things she could say.
"You're just full of questions aren't you, but anyway to answer your question I asked Tsukune if we could finish off the rest of the gang. He agreed of course so one night we went in and slaughtered everyone in there until no one was left. After that we began to slaughter any gang we came across that was causing problems from the locals." Said Kira while Moka made a mental note to never piss off either Tsukune or Kira.
"But didn't killing all of those people go against one if not more of the rules that Tsukune told you about?" Asked Moka while Tsukune just chuckled lightly at that.
"Yes what we did was against the rules but even we have to make exceptions about who we kill. Quite honestly my parents were planning on taking me into assassinate the former group she worked for under orders of Amateratsu-dono. I decided to go through with it mostly so I could work out some of my emotional issues." Said Tsukune as he rolled the pink diamond in between his fingers.
"That's not the only reason though you also wanted to try new ideas for killing so that way whenever you came across who ever killed your parents you could make it as painful as you needed." Said Kira while she quickly slid over to the left seat of Tsukune. She then quietly wrapped her arms around him while resting her head on top of his.
"And when I do find him I'll make certain no one ever has to go through what I went through." Silently whispered Tsukune while his knuckles' turned white from him gripping his hands so tight.
"Um not to be rude or anything but everyone we've arrived at Monoroke Arcade." Called back Kyouko just as she pulled the car/limo into a parking space and Lady Akashiya finished off the rest of her blood and placed her book away. Kyouko then got out of the limo before she opened the side door.
Slowly everyone got of the limo before Tsukune proceeded to stretch his body out while releasing a sigh of happiness once his body once again relaxed. Everyone then turned their attention to the building that stood less then twenty feet away.
The building itself looked to be an extremely large church that covered a good portion of the land. The church was designed in an Old Catholic style and it had appeared to have under gone several renovations since then and making it look more like a gothic mansion. All the windows were still intact and depicted several different monsters types that still existed in the world and others were of monsters that had long since died out weather to disease, humans, hunted until extinction, or killed for their land. The church itself was made entirely of white marble. Where the doors once stood was now completely open making it seem more like an open market.
"Welcome to Monoroke Arcade the only place where monsters can actually shop for everything they need without being judged by humans." Said Lady Akashiya with a smile while Kira still looked at the building in shock.
"My Lady if you don't mind I would be willing to watch over your daughter, my cousin, and his friend so that you will be free to take care of any private business." Suggested Kyouko while Lady Akashiya seemed to ponder over the idea for a few moments.
"I don't see a problem in that. Though once you're done with shopping head to food court and wait for me." Said Lady Akashiya before she walked off towards the mall and disappeared beyond the open door way.
"Well what should we go shopping for first?" Asked Kyouko to the others.
"Definitely clothes. Then after that I suggest we just wander around for a few minutes." Said everyone while Kyouko just nodded at their response.
"Okay then now that we have a plan lets go." Said Kyouko with enthusiasm before she took off towards the mall with a burst of speed while Tsukune just muttered about fixing his cousin's diet once they returned home.
"Come on we better go find her." Muttered out Tsukune before he walked off towards the mall with Moka and Kira following after.
"Hey Tsukune do you have any idea as to where your cousin may have gone?" Asked Kira in hopes of getting some sort of clue so they knew where to begin searching while they continued to walk towards the mall.
"If I had to guess I would say that she ran off to a candy store." Said Tsukune just as they passed through the door way and he walked over to a map of the mall. He then proceeded to look through the list of clothing, vehicle, toy, electronics, and food stores before he took notice of the number of candy stores.
"Gah…by the fuckin' holly name of the Christian god." Muttered out Moka as she took notice of the number of candy stores.
"It's going to take us hours to find her with this many candy stores." Growled out Kira while she started to memorize all the locations of the stores in the mall.
"Well then luckily for us my family had quite a bit of money locked away. Now then lets see here…" Started Tsukune as he once more went through the list before he smiled in triumph.
"Okay I know where we need to go." Said Tsukune before he grabbed both girls and ran off into the crowd just as his cousin came out of the bathroom. Instead of her drivers uniform she was now wearing a black skirt that reached just slightly past her thighs, a white shirt, and a red jacket.
"That's odd I could have sworn I heard Tsukune, Moka, and Kira out here a moment ago." Said Kyouko as she looked around before she approached the map. She then proceeded to take in a breath while closing her eyes and slowly released it. Slowly she reopened her eyes while her finger was pointing at store number 658.
"Now then lets see her store number 656-Seken Irui no, 657-Oni Kishu no, 658-Kin Ryu Dote. Tsukune why are you going to a bank unless you're…" Started Kyouko before she realized what Tsukune might have thought she had done. Almost immediately after she took off in the same direction that Tsukune had taken off in earlier.
'Gah I was so stupid I should have told him I was going to change into my civilian clothing.' Mentally berated Kyouko as she weaved in and out of the passing crowds before she stopped in front of her destination. Standing in a rather long line of people were Tsukune and the others and they were half way towards the front.
'Shit.' Quickly thought Kyouko before she into the closest store not even bothering to notice the sign and ran straight into a man causing her to fall onto her ass.
"Oww..." Said Kyouko while she rubbed her ass before a shadow fell over her. Quickly she looked up to see the same man that she ran into.
The man stood 6' 2", was bald, had a pencil mustache along with a goatee, and black eyes. He was wearing a red sleeveless shirt, black pants that were slightly lose, and he was wearing typical black tennis shoes. He also had tattoos on the left side of his head and on both of his shoulders and extended half way down his upper arms.
"Well what do we have here?" Asked the man under his breath while he looked Kyouko up and down while he subconsciously licked his lips. He then extended his right hand out to Kyouko only for her to slap it away.
"I can get up myself." Hotly stated Kyouko as she quickly jumped to her feet and walked back towards the bank before she felt a hand wrap around her wrist.
"Hey where you going? I'm certain that whatever you need done you can do...later." said the man while he gave her knowing grin.
"Let go of me." Said Kyouko with restrained rage while she looked at the ground.
"Oh come now we haven't even got to know one another." Said the man once more while he pulled her closer to him so he was looking her directly in the eyes.
Kyouko's quick response was stomping onto his foot allowing her to remover herself from his grip before she delivered a backhand to his face sending him flying towards a shop window and through it. She then proceeded to turn on her heal and immediately walked back towards the bank just as Tsukune, Kira, and Moka were leaving.
"Man Tsukune I thought my parents were rich but your account is incredible." Said Moka in awe.
"Actually all that was from my grandparents before they passed away. I still have to retrieve whatever my parents left for me in their will just like Kyouko." Said Tsukune with a small sad smile on his face.
"You should be grateful Tsukune for what you currently have. I only knew my family for five years before they were killed and I was taken in by gang after gang." Said Kira before she noticed Kyouko out of the corner of her eye. She then proceeded to turn around to call her over before she noticed someone about to strike her from behind.
"Kyouko behind you!" Shouted Kira causing Tsukune and Moka to look at the same location of Kira and Kyouko to turn around only to receive a right hook to her face sending her flying towards Tsukune and the others.
Acting on reflexes alone Tsukune caught Kyouko in the air before he landed on the ground in a crouch with Kyouko in his arms bridal style.
"You okay?" Asked Tsukune while Kyouko nodded in an okay fashion before he set her back onto her feet and jumped back into the crowd that was steadily forming around them.
"You know that actually hurt." Said Kyouko while she rubbed her jaw before she smirked. She then proceeded to crouch low to the ground before she took off towards the man with a burst of speed. She then gave him a quick punch to his stomach before she grabbed his shirt collar and proceeded to punch him in the stomach and finished up with a kick to the right side of his head sending him flying. After that she lightly dusted her hands off before she turned back towards her cousin and friends.
"I see you haven't lost your touch Kyouko." Said Tsukune while Kyouko gave him a quick smirk before it changed into a frown when she felt an uneven weight being placed onto her left shoulder.
Slowly she released a growl before she quickly wrapped her hands around the person's wrist, flipped the person over her shoulder and delivered an ax kick to the person's crotch. The effects were immediate all the older men covered their second head while all the women smiled and nodded their heads in approval while Kyouko looked at who attempted to grab her. Laying their on the ground was once again the same man from before. Kyouko could clearly felt rage flow through her blood while she grabbed a rather sharp knife from nowhere.
"Don't you ever touch me again you filthy lesser being." Growled out Kyouko before she stabbed a knife very close to his second head driving the point home. All the man could do was nod his head in confirmation before he passed out from a combination of fear and pain.
"Good." Stated Kyouko before she walked back towards Tsukune, Moka, and Kira.
"Kyouko, don't you think that was possibly a tad-bit brutal?" Asked Tsukune while he kept his eyes on the man almost anticipating him to get back up and attempt to take advantage of her.
"No not really but now let me ask you this Tsukune how much did you take out of your account?" Asked Kyouko while she led them all away from the seen just in time as a cop approached the downed man.
"Well I took out 94,692.31 yen." Said Tsukune causing Kyouko to turn to him with shock written all over her face.
"Why did you take out that much?" Asked Kyouko in a hushed whisper.
"For starters I'm not the only one who has to get new clothes. I also want to be able to be able to buy some motorcycle parts since I would like to enter in some underground racing whenever I don't have much going on." Replied Tsukune as the group made their way through some minor crowds.
"Kira, did you happen to take notice of any clothing stores when we were looking at the map earlier?" Asked Tsukune as he redirected the conversation.
"Yeah I did. Only two really stood out though the first was Seken Irui and the other was more of a feminine store called Junsui Naiteki Fujin." Said Kira while Tsukune just nodded.
"Tsukune if you don't mind why don't we go to Seken Irui since it's in our current vicinity." Suggested Moka while she pointed to the store which was right in front of them.
Everyone just looked at one another before they nodded in an acceptable fashion and walked into the store never noticing two men glaring at them. As they stepped into the store they couldn't help but allow their eyes to wander.
The store was rather large and could have been easily mistaken for a supermarket store if not for the fact that there was no food. The store was split down the center with the left side being a male section while the left was made for females. Both sides had five changing rooms so they could try clothes on. There were also six registers three on each side by the doors.
"Kyouko take Moka and Kira with you. I'll do my own cloth shopping." Said Tsukune while he silently handed half of the money he withdrew to Kyouko. He then proceeded to walk off before he completely disappeared in between clothing racks.
"Come on let's get started." Said Kyouko as she lead them into the female section of the store and began to look around.
"Hey Kira do you think you could help me find suitable clothing for when we begin training?" Asked Moka as she watched Kira look through typical blue jeans.
"I don't see why not." Said Kira before she grabbed several pairs of blue jeans and a couple of white shirts. She then proceeded to push Moka into one of the changing rooms along with the clothes.
"Go ahead and change into the smallest pair of pants I grabbed along with the smallest shirt. Once they are on come on out." Said Kira as she leaned against a nearby wall while she looked over at Kyouko who was busy looking through pants and shirts.
"This is beyond troublesome. Here I am, a former gang member, reduced to nearly babysitting. There is no way my life can get any worse than this." Simply stated Kira before the changing room door opened and Moka stepped out meanwhile on the other side of the store Tsukune couldn't help but smirk at how wrong Kira was.
The first shirt that Moka was wearing went slightly past her waist and the first pair of pants reached to her ankles.
"Well we at least know what size you need. Did you try on the other clothes I handed to you?" Asked Kira
"No. I only tried on what you asked for me to try on." Said Moka as she looked down at the ground.
"Okay now go change back into your original clothing and I'll go grab another couple pairs of this outfit." Said Kira while she ruffled her head lightly before she walked through the store grabbing three to four of the shirts and pants.
Silently Moka reentered the changing room while she wondered what Tsukune was up to. She then turned her back and only caught a faint glimpse of him walking through the men section of the store before she lost him as he disappeared behind a clothing rack. Slowly a sigh left her lips before she closed the door behind her.
(With Tsukune)
"Now let's see here…" Whispered Tsukune under his breath as he started to look through clothes rack after clothes rack. He then proceeded to take out a couple pairs of black cargo pants and shorts before he held them up to his waist. Slowly he nodded his head in a negative fashion and replaced the pants and shorts before he resumed his search.
'Now I remember why I usually didn't buy too many clothes.' Thought Tsukune as he pulled out another pair of pants only to glare at them since the legs were to long and the waist was to large for his frame.
'Most undoubtedly both humans' and monsters have grown a tad-bit to comfortable with the leisurely life style.' Thought Tsukune bitterly as he set the pants back onto the rack before he once again started to look through another clothing rack. Silently he pushed aside several clothes looking at the pants and shorts before he finally pulled out one pair of jeans and held them to his waist. Calmly he nodded his head in an acceptable fashion before he began to look through the clothing rack for any others that were the same size. He of course was only able to find another two pairs of pants which luckily for him were cargo and four pairs of shorts.
"Now for some shirts." Whispered Tsukune as he walked over to a rack of shirts. Silently he looked through the shirts before he would pull out an occasional white or black t-shirt. He would then replace it back onto the rack keeping only a few that fit him before he moved onto sleeveless shirts and picked up two more of the shirts.
"This should be enough. I mean I still have several other clothes I haven't worn yet still sealed away." Muttered Tsukune as he approached one of the cashiers and set the clothing on top of the counter before he turned to see how his cousin, Moka, and Kira were doing not even noticing a young female appearing right behind the counter.
"Hello." Stated the young female causing Tsukune to jump in shock before he turned around gripping his heart.
"Jesus Christ woman don't scare me like that." Said Tsukune as he got to look at her.
The woman looked no older than at least twenty, had brilliant silver hair with sapphire blue and emerald streaks running through it, light blue eyes with a green pupil, and she stood 5' 10". She was wearing a light green Kimono with blue trim running along the bottom of the kimono and the sleeves of the kimono. It hugged her body lightly but it was still tight enough to tell that she had a G-cup. On the kimono was a white wolf that had a red tattoo design on its right eye while its tail gently waved in the back ground drawing the sun with rays coming off it.
"I'm sorry." She said lightly while she started to ring up his purchase.
"No I'm sorry I shouldn't have reacted like I did." Apologized Tsukune as he felt his heart rate finally drop down to normal standards only to notice that the girl had finished adding up his purchase.
"Okay that will be 3,125.21 yen." Said the girl while Tsukune just nodded his head while he pulled out the proper amount before he placed it on the counter and grabbed his bag. He then nodded to the girl before he walked out of the store and sat out side with the bag next to his leg. Faintly out of the corner of his right eye he could clearly see a scroll in his bag. Calmly he looked around before he bent down and picked it up and broke the seal. Slowly he unraveled the scroll and read it over.
Tsukune-san,
I wish I could talk to you under better terms but currently that is not an option. You're possibly wondering who I am so I'll start with that. My name is Nel and I'm one of several daughters of Amaterasu. You have mostly definitely already met one if not several of my many other sisters.
Now then onto business, first off my mother and I would like to formally congratulate you for making certain that the peace treaty signing went off without to much of an incident. Secondly once more my mother and I would also like to congratulate you on a second job well done when you and Kira-san eliminated that gang.
My mother is also aware of the fact that you turned Kira-san into a soul eater as well. She is also aware of the seal on her and has a warning; if Kira starts to have stronger feelings towards you the seal will change into a marriage seal though this shouldn't be too much of a problem though seeing as your race is a personal assassin for higher for us.
Now then I must wish you a good day and before I forget you and the rest of your gang are being watched. I suggest you watch you back's and on that note I wish you a good day.
Signed,
Nel
'Were being watched but by who?' Wondered Tsukune as he discreetly looked around before his eyes settled onto a pair of men watching him from across the mall but because they were in the shadows he wasn't able to make them out. Silently he entered a somewhat meditative state before a small little black snake slithered out from underneath him and disappeared into the crowd. Patently Tsukune remained in his meditative state for a minute or two before the snake came slithering back underneath Tsukune. Slowly Tsukune's eyes refocused to the realm of reality while he thought over what the snake heard.
(Short flashback)
"I can see why the boss wanted to have a round with the girl." Whispered one of the two men to his buddy while the snake silently listened to the conversation.
"Heh...sadly he got his ass handed to him by the same girl but maybe well have better luck stopping her together." Chuckled out the other.
"Yeah and by the looks of things with the second girl we can both be having fun." Said the first while a blush lighted up his face. Slowly the snakes eyes leaned into a look of disgust before it slithered out of there as fast as it body could move.
(End of Short Flashback)
"Man this was supposed to be a simple shopping trip and now it looks like it will turn it a brawl." Sighed out Tsukune while he instinctively reached for his cigarettes before he stopped remembering that he was in a public facility. A scowl formed on his face while he released a sigh and groaned under his breath.
'Maybe I should pick up a different habit just in case I can't smoke.' Thought Tsukune as he looked through the stain glass windows just watching the clouds wander by without a care for his problems.
"Man what a drag." Said Tsukune without much thought before he noticed a bookstore across from them.
'Well I wanted a way to end my boredom.' Thought Tsukune as he stood up while grabbing his bag of new clothes and walked over to the bookstore with one hand in a pocket and his body slightly slouched.
(Back with the girls)
"Okay does everyone have everything?" Asked Kyouko while she held seven shirts, five pairs of pants, and three packages of socks in her arms. In Kira's arms she held ten new shirts, eight pairs of pants, and five packages of socks. Moka on the other hand had sixteen new shirts eight that would fit her and eight for when she grew, eight pairs of pants four for her current size and four for when she grew, and four packages of socks. Quickly Moka and Kira nodded in a positive fashion.
"Good now let's check out." Said Kyouko once more as she walked off towards the checkout counter with the others following her. Once they got there they placed their clothes onto the counter before the same woman who helped Tsukune appeared from behind the counter causing a few raised eyebrows.
"Hello were you able to find everything you were looking for?" Asked the woman as she smiled at them before she started to scan everything.
"Uh...yeah although I don't see Tsukune-san." Said Kira as she looked back towards the boys department only to be disappointed at not seeing him.
"Oh...if you don't mind me asking what this boy looks like?" Asked the woman as she paused her scanning for a moment.
"Um...no. Uh...he's roughly an inch taller than me, has dark brown hair, and chocolate brown eyes." Said Moka while she rested her head on her right hand.
"Well then you're in luck I actually checked him out a few minutes ago. He then went over to the bookstore across the way." Said the woman as she finished scanning the last item.
"Now your total price is 10,975.13 yen." Said the woman with a small smile while Kyouko just muttered under her breath about inflated prices.
Calmly with a disgruntled expression she pulled out the proper amount before she set it on the counter, grabbed the bags, and left the store with the others following after. Quickly they crossed over to the bookstore before they entered and stopped. The store was bigger than the clothing store. Every corner of the store walls was covered by books ranging from basic school books to fantasy.
"Great this is going to take forever." Stated Moka as she groaned into her hands.
"Actually I think I already know where he is." Said Kira with a perplexed expression on her face.
"Hm it might be a minor side effect of the seal." Stated Kyouko while she pondered on how it was physically possible.
"It might also have something to do with the fact that it was Tsukune's power that changed you. Think about it Tsukune physically transferred some of his yokai through your blood. Your body had to adapt to the power and while it was doing that it may have altered some of your brain functions. It's also possible that it created a form of telepathy in between the two of you." Said Moka while the other two looked at her in shock.
"Uh... that is most certainly a possibility and not out of the realm of possibilities but how did you come up with that?" Asked Kira while internally she was worried especially if Tsukune had seen those fantasies.
"Well I kind of figured that your relationship was the almost the same thing for when vampires have a familiar. A bond of trust or maybe it's something entirely different but I'm certain that Tsukune would know." Replied Moka while her eyes scanned over some of the books.
"I agree with Moka on this one Kira we should find Tsukune as soon as possible. I've already lost my parents, my aunt and uncle, and I thought I had lost my cousin. I don't need that last one to become a reality." Said Kyouko as she placed her hand lightly on top of Kira's shoulder.
"Of course." Said Kira before she closed her eyes, took in a deep breath, and released it. Shortly after she snapped her eyes open before she ran off towards the center of the store leaving behind Moka and Kyouko.
Silently Moka and Kyouko shared a 'what-the-fuck' look before they ran after her. It didn't really take too long for them to find her since she was stopped by a worker.
"I'm sorry mam but I can't allow you to go any further." Said the worker while he held Kira arms length away from him.
"Care to explain why the fuck I can't go any further?" Growled out Kira as she was both physically and mentally restraining herself from attacking the man in front of her.
"I'm sorry but I'm not allowed to disclose any details to customers by my boss's orders." Said the man without any hesitation before he was finding it very hard to breath. Slowly he looked down to see a clawed hand holding him by the throat before he looked up to see a pair of pure black eyes with a yellow slit in the center.
"You're going to let us through or I'm going to tear out your vocal box. I will then proceed to remove your spine through your throat before I use it to cut off your balls and dick then force feed them to you. I will then proceed use your spine to remove both your eyes and your tongue. Once those have been removed I'll force feed those to you before I finish it off with stabbing you in the heart, brain, larynx, lungs, liver, jugular, arteries, and kidneys with your spine as well. But if you're a good boy and allow us through I won't hurt you...much." Said Kira with a sadistic smile before she licked her lips at the possible bloodshed.
"On second thought I think I'll let you go on ahead." Said the worker while he backed away from the psychopathic teen.
"Thank you." Said Kira in a giddy tone before she walked by and kicked him in the ankle causing him to fall to the ground.
Moka and Kyouko of course just walked over the man while they followed Kira up until she stopped. Sitting in the center of the room were several tables with six chairs around them. Sitting at one of the tables was Tsukune who had several different books around him. Most of the books were about motorcycle parts and how they connected, but among those were several different Manga.
Calmly they approached Tsukune while Moka picked up a few of the manga.
"Dance in the Vampire Bund, Record of a Fallen Vampire, Vampire Kisses: Blood Relatives, and Chibi Vampire." Said Moka as she flipped through just a few of the manga causing Tsukune to look up.
"Oh you're here." Said Tsukune as he looked at everyone before he closed his book which was titled 'One Thousand Ways to Torture and Kill Your Enemy'.
"Uh…we would have been here earlier if we hadn't been stopped by a worker who wouldn't let us pass." Said Kyouko while she along with everyone else added a mental note to never anger Tsukune.
"Oh him. Well take a seat I have some bad news." Said Tsukune while he pushed the books to a side of the table while he pulled the scroll, from Nel, out. He then proceeded to unroll it before he laid it out for the others to see. Silently Tsukune sat there as he watched the girls' expressions change from curiosity to shock.
"Tsukune are you certain that what this Nel person said is true?" Asked Kyouko as she reread the scroll while Moka looked slightly angry and Kira was supporting a mild blush.
"I believe her about the information about us being followed since I was able to confirm that but I don't think she is a daughter of Amaterasu-dono. Even if she is why would she be down here?" Answered Tsukune while he grabbed the scroll and rerolled it and placed it away.
"Um Tsukune Nel mentioned in the scroll that it may be possible for the seal that binds us to change from soul to marriage. Is it possible that it may have changed when I didn't see you for those three days?" Asked Kira slightly worried and excited while Moka glared at her.
"It's possible but I would have to physically inspect the seal. Although I'm curious as to why you're concerned about this now?" Asked Tsukune while Kira held out her arm allowing the seal to be seen.
The seal had changed. Instead of the normal circle with the kanji for soul in the center there was a solid black circle with a brown diamond in the center. Inside the center of the diamond was the Kanji for spiritual. The band that went around her wrist now had a white center with the edges being a light blue tint. Written in the white band with black ink was the phrase 'Usus Magister Est Optimus'.
"I'm just concerned. I mean seriously you only know so much and for all we know this seal could kill the both of us." Said Kira while Tsukune began to observe the seal with a look of confusion.
'That's odd the seal has in all retrospect changed but the changes are mostly because of element spirits. Then the kanji has also changed but aren't soul and spiritual the same thing.' Thought Tsukune before he suddenly began to notice the seal changing once more. The black sphere began to open up to be a black rose with small dots of red on the petals. In the center of the rose the kanji for family appeared in a deep crimson red. The diamond that was once in the rose completely disappeared only to reform around the rose. The band that wrapped around her wrist changed to have a white center with a blue and green double helix wrapping around it. The only thing that never changed was the phrase 'Usus Magister Est Optimus'.
"Tsukune. Are you alright?" Asked Moka as she waved her hand in front of his face.
"Kira...your seal has changed. If you remember the first seal was pretty simple a simple circle with the kanji for soul and a black band wrapping around your wrist. It changed from that to a complete black circle with a brown diamond in the center and the kanji for spiritual in the center. The band had changed to having a white center and the sides being a blue color. And just recently it changed again. The sphere is now a black rose with the kanji for family in the center. The brown diamond now surrounds the rose and the band is still white only it now has a blue and green double helix going through the center. There was a also a phrase written in the band 'Usus Magister Est Optimus'." Said Tsukune while he placed his head into his hands and released a groan.
"But what does it mean?" Asked Kira as she looked over the new seal.
"Well the first seal possibly stood for you rebirth. The second one symbolized the fact you were coming into contact with your spiritual guide. The last one though is possibly because you see me and Kyouko as family. The odd thing is that seals shouldn't be able to change this quickly unless they're drawing yokai from another sou..." Said Tsukune before he stopped in mid sentence with a look of shock and disbelief on his face.
"Oh shit. I think your drawing power from me." Whispered Tsukune while Kira looked shocked, Moka was also shocked, but Kyouko was in more of a combination of disbelief and shock.
"I'm...I'm...taking you power." Said Kira with shock and disbelief coating her voice like a bad taste.
"No it's more like Tsukune's power is trying to equal itself out in between you two." Said Kyouko as she looked at the two.
"But why?" Asked Moka as she looked at Tsukune for some form of an answer.
"That's an answer that will have to wait until later tonight. Besides we still have shopping to get done. Let me go ahead and buy these books and you can wait for me outside the shop. Once I'm out I'll let you take me into any store you want." Compromised Tsukune while the girl looked at one another before Kyouko and Kira shared a grin.
"Deal." Quickly said Kyouko and Kira before they grabbed Moka while Tsukune grabbed his books and walked towards the front of the store and exited leaving Tsukune and Moka to pay for the books. Shortly after Tsukune and Moka exited the store and regrouped with Kyouko and Kira before they lead Tsukune to the upper level of the mall.
Silently Tsukune and Moka just followed behind the two older females before they entered a store. Tsukune of course wasn't paying too much attention while his anei was. Slowly his anei released an evil laugh which caused Tsukune to snap back into attention.
'What's so funny?' Asked Tsukune as he sent a mental glare to his anei.
'You'll see.' Was his anei's simple response before he fell into absolute silence.
'Man I swear my anei is far too much trouble.' Mentally grumbled Tsukune as he was forced to sit in front of two changing rooms with everyone's current purchases around him. Moka was also sitting by him while he grumbled under his breath about useless cousins and student/friend before he was stopped by the sound of the changing room doors opening.
Calmly he looked up only to immediately have his face light up similar to a red christmas light bulb. Standing there in front of him were his cousin and student/friend. Now normally this wouldn't be a problem but this time it was. Instead of their normal clothing they were wearing black lingerie that left very little to the imagination. Faintly he could feel blood starting to dribble out of his nose. Quickly Tsukune turned away from the two girls while he held the edge of his shirt against his nose steaming the flow of blood.
Slowly both Kira and Kyouko shared a quick grin before they flattened out their expressions and sauntered over to Tsukune. Once they were both behind him Kyouko silently wrapped her arms around Tsukune's waist before she set her head down on top of Tsukune's left shoulder.
"What's the matter Tsukune don't you find me attractive?" Asked Kyouko while feigning sadness and pressing her body into Tsukune's back. She was of course rewarded with Tsukune's blush brightening.
"Uh...um..." Started Tsukune only to be stopped once Kira sat on his lap and wrapped her arms around Tsukune's neck while she pressed her forehead against his.
Try as Tsukune might he couldn't stop his eyes from wandering down to Kira's cleavage before he mentally slapped himself and attempted to look anywhere but at Kira's face or other things only to fail as Kira gently grabbed his chin and equaled their gazes.
"Come now Tsukune certainly you can tell us." Whispered Kira causing Tsukune to blush a new found color of red.
"Uh...well...uh...you'r..." Stuttered out Tsukune before he was stopped by Kyouko lightly licking his ear lobe before she bit it lightly. Quickly Tsukune bit down onto his lower lip so he could restrain a groan while a faint trail of blood trickled down his chin and onto Kira's hand.
Silently Tsukune continued to sit there while Kira removed her hand and looked at the blood with curiosity as it remained on her index finger before she lightly licked it. She then proceeded to lick her finger before she wrapped her tongue around finger and continued to lick it. She then released it showing no sign of blood on her finger but it was coated in a thin layer of her saliva before she trailed her finger down her body making certain that Tsukune was watching before she stopped a few inches shy of the lingerie's waist band.
That was of course the last straw for Tsukune. Quickly Tsukune literally fell through the floor causing the two girls to fall on one another. Not a moment later Tsukune reappeared a few feet away looking away from the two of them.
"I'm he-heading to th- the food cou-court." Stuttered out Tsukune with the blush still coating his face as he left the store with his bags, which no one could figure out how he got.
"Damn. I was hoping he would faint." Whispered Kira as she pouted.
"You're not the only one." Growled out Kyouko in displeasure before she stormed off to the changing room once more while Kira did the same. Moka on the other hand could only stare in confusion at what happened before she shrugged her shoulders and just knocked it off to something that she would learn about later in life.
A few moments later Kyouko and Kira walked back out with their normal clothing on before they grabbed a few more pieces of lingerie and checked out. They then proceeded towards the food court carrying their bags. When they were less than a few feet from the food court they were able to smell and hear the sounds of sizzling meat, vegetables, and many other things they couldn't place.
"I don't know about you but all of a sudden I'm really hungry." Said Kira as a smile little drop of drool trickled down her chin before she wiped it away.
"I know what you mean but first of all we need to find Tsukune." Said Kyouko which caused Kira to pout in disappointment.
"Fine but it better not take long." Said Kira as she looked out of the corner of her eye at Kyouko.
"When then let's get started." Said Kyouko with a smile before she started to walk into the food court with the other two following after. Slowly they weaved in between tables keeping an eye out for Tsukune's dark clothes. It was only by then did they realize how difficult that would be seeing as many other shoppers, teens, and adults were wearing dark colors. Slowly all of them could feel a sense of dread wash over them at how impossible this task would be until Moka caught sight of a smoking twelve year old.
"Kyouko I think I found him." Stated Moka as she tugged on her jacket to get her attention.
"Really where?" Asked Kyouko slightly impressed while Moka just pointed at a booth in the smoking section where they could clearly see Moka's mother talking to a boy similar looking to Tsukune smoking a cigarette.
"Oh...come now Moka there is no way that's my cousin." Said Kyouko in disappointment.
"Actually that is Tsukune. I think he forgot to mention that he started to take up smoking after his first few kills." Said Kira causing Kyouko to gain a stone face.
"When did this happen?" Asked Kyouko as her voice was devoid of any emotion.
"I believe he said he started shortly after killing my former teammates." Said Kira in a thoughtful position.
"I'll be right back." Said Kyouko as she stalked towards Tsukune. Just as she was five feet from him she had to stop at what Tsukune was talking about.
"I can't believe that my cousin and Kira did that especially in a public place. I understand that I'll have to marry her once we get older but still to flaunt her body like that in a lingerie store is inexcusable behavior." Stated Tsukune with a grim face before he took a light drag on his cigarette finishing it off and placed it into the ash tray in between him and Lady Akashiya.
"I agree such behavior is inappropriate for someone of her, Kira's, and your stature." Replied Lady Akashiya in a cool tone while Tsukune pulled out another one and stuck it in his mouth.
"Yes but she is also her own person meaning I can't tell her what to do plus she is entering her teens just like Kira meaning hormones going off the scales. I have no doubt that by the time I'm a teenager I'll have pulled off more than my fair share of stupid things. Besides despite the fact they were flaunting their bodies like that I didn't mind. After all I may be one of the few people that will ever see them like that." Said Tsukune while he talked around the cigarette with a small smile on his face while Lady Akashiya just chuckled at Tsukune. He then lit the cigarette before he took a light drag on it.
"Already planning for the future Tsukune." Chuckled out Lady Akashiya while Tsukune blushed a deep crimson red while he coughed out a few clouds of smoke.
"Sh-shut u-up." Sputtered out Tsukune with rage while his cigarette hung out of his mouth.
"Now now Tsukune I was only kidding." Said Lady Akashiya as she laughed at Tsukune's look which was a combination of anger and relaxation.
"Even still I would prefer you to not make such comments like that. But you were also right I'm planning for the future. Kyouko and I already know that we were set up in an arranged marriage for ourselves but because of the seal on Kira rapidly changing I may end up being married before I'm even twelve years old. I don't even know how Kira and Kyouko would react to that." Said Tsukune with a downcast tone while he released a stream of smoke from his nose.
"Don't worry about that for right now. You'll cross that bridge later. Now then I have one favor to ask you. When Moka reaches an appropriate age for marriage I would like for you to ask my husband for her hand in marriage." Said Lady Akashiya while Tsukune was taking a light drag on his cig. Not a moment after Tsukune began to cough as his mind finally understood what she was asking while Kyouko was doing a rather impressive expression of fish along with Kira and Moka who just so happened to walk in at the end.
"Could you please repeat that I don't think I heard you the first time?" Asked Tsukune in shock while his cigarette lay forgotten on the table top.
"Tsukune I want you to ask for my daughter's hand in marriage once she reaches an acceptable age." Said Lady Akashiya once more only this time with authority ringing in her voice.
"Not to be rude or anything but WHY!" Shouted Tsukune while he gripped the edge of the table they sat at.
"You already said it yourself you will possibly be married to Kira before your twelve birthday and you'll end up having to marry your own cousin since your parents and hers placed you into an arranged marriage. To be quite honest I also know that after I give birth to this young one I'll possibly die. I also know that my husband will attempt to trick you into an arranged marriage with Moka once she is old enough that's why I'm asking for you to do this." Said Lady Akashiya while she wrapped her arms around herself.
"Lady Akashiya I can't imagine your husband doing something like that." Said Tsukune with shock written not only in his voice but also on his face.
"Tsukune I know my husband better than anyone. Even though he seems to be a good man he isn't. When I was younger I saw him as someone who could do no wrong even after we got married I still saw that image of him. Then one night I was out taking care of some business and I had come home to see him in bed with another woman. I was so shocked, disappointed, and disgusted with the fact that I married a man like that I ran and stayed with your parents for the rest of the week I was to be gone. When I came home at the end of the week there were no traces of the fact that my husband had an affair with some wonton slut but even still I could see cracks in him. Day by day those cracks widen and I was able to see the true man I married. People act they wear masks to hide themselves behind and when someone sees the true person beneath they'll do anything to keep it quite. My husband doesn't want peace he was slavery. He wants nothing more than to enslave every single race and don't tell me I'm wrong I know my husband. He'll use you and Moka to create a virtual army before he has you killed in some form of accident, take your children in and teach them despise all other races. It wouldn't surprise me if he was behind the spirit that was controlling Ria either." Stated Lady Akashiya in a hushed whisper that was filled with sorrow. Meanwhile the three girls couldn't believe that Lady Akashiya would say that until Moka and Kyouko actually thought back to how Lord Akashiya treated others. Kira on the other hand was beyond confused.
"Lady Akashiya I can't make any promises but I'll try. Will you want me to tell Moka this once she is older?" Asked Tsukune as his bangs hide his eyes.
"Yes it would possibly be best to tell when she is old enough to understand." Said Lady Akashiya with sadness knowing that she wouldn't be there to help explain things.
"Lady Akashiya I would also like to do two more things. I would first like to give you a soul crystal so that way if you die I can give it to Moka and then you would still have a way to teach Moka. Second I would like it if you would allow me to place a spirit bug on you." Said Tsukune as he pulled out a white crystal along with an empty jar while Kyouko motioned for everyone to approach the table and act as if they didn't hear anything.
"Uh...Tsukune what's a spirit bug?" Asked Kira as the other girls gathered around the table. Not a moment later Tsukune nodded to Kyouko to explain while everyone took a seat.
"A spirit bug is simply the act of placing a small amount of spiritual energy from a soul eater into another person's body so they can track the person. This was actually used more often during the early years of feudal Japan and the spiritual energy would be contained inside a piece of jewelry." Explained Kyouko while Tsukune channeled some of his spiritual energy into the empty jar. Slowly the energy floated around in the jar before it began to solidify in the center of the jar taking the form of a parasitic organism.
Almost every seemed to be repulsed by what the spiritual energy had become.
"And that's why it was usually sealed into a piece of jewelry." Stated Tsukune as he opened the jar and allowed for the bug to crawl onto his hand. He then cautiously stretched his hand out to Lady Akashiya who looked at the bug in disgust before she swallowed her disgust and held out her arm.
Slowly the bug walked onto her arm before it crawled up to her neck causing Lady Akashiya to tremble before the bug quickly and painlessly broke through her skin and disappeared into her blood stream. The only odd thing was the fact there was no form of bulge or point of forced entry.
"If you're wondering why there isn't any bulge or point of forced entry it's because one the bug is entirely made of spiritual energy meaning once it entered your body it broke into pure spirit and now flows through your blood and it also increases anyone's healing ability by 20x's." Said Tsukune as he answered the unasked question.
"Now then I think it would be best if you girls get something to eat and enjoy this meal it will be the last actual cooked meal you'll be having for a long time." Said Tsukune why the girls seemed to turn slightly green at the word of food.
"Um...Tsukune I don't know about the other's but I don't think I'll eat anything." Said Kira while the others just nodded their head in agreement.
"Let me guess still grossed out with the image of the bug going into Lady Akashiya's arm." Stated Tsukune while everyone seemed to turn another shade of green.
"Absolutely yes." Stated the three girls while Tsukune chuckled at their response and Lady Akashiya just nodded her head in a motherly way.
"Well then if you're done tormenting one another I believe that we should continue shopping that is unless you finished it all already." Stated Lady Akashiya with a small smile when she took notice of the bags.
"Actually there is one more store that I want to hit if that's alright with you." Said Tsukune while everyone just nodded to Tsukune in a positive fashion.
"Good now follow me." Said Tsukune as he jumped out of his seat and walked off into the mall leaving the girls to once again carry their own bags and follow Tsukune. There were occasionally a few times that they couldn't physically see him but Kira would be able to detect him because of their bond and they would be able to catch up. After a few minutes of this they finally stopped in front of a motorcycle shop.
"Here we are Oni Kishu. One of the few actual motorcycle shops in the whole monster realm." Said Tsukune with pride before he walked in.
Immediately after everyone looked at one another before they released a sigh and followed him. The only two who didn't seem to be down were Kira and Moka. The second they entered the shop there noses were assaulted by the scent of oil, gas, and a minor amount of sweat. Hanging on the walls were several different motorcycle parts ranging from simple hand brakes down to the most complicated pieces being the fuel lines and how they connected to the motorcycle.
Tsukune was of course looking through the currently pre-assembled motorcycles that came from a factory. Occasionally he would bend down to look closer before he would shake his head in a negative fashion while a look of disgrace covered his face. He would then proceed onto the next one only to have the same thing happen again. Although every now and then he would smile lightly and nod positively if he saw something he liked. He would then pullout a pad of paper and write down descriptions, size, and possible weight of certain parts. After about an hour he had filled out five to six pages worth of information.
"Okay I'm done." Said Tsukune as he approached everyone while he tucked the pad of paper into a pocket inside of his jacket.
"Really but all you did was look." Said Lady Akashiya while Tsukune smiled lightly.
"I know but I was actually looking at each bikes parts. I was then looking for the name of the designer. Most of these bikes are made by companies that have a very bad reputation while others are made by companies with excellent reputations. After that it was simply looking at the parts and deciding what was best. I actually had help with that though." Said Tsukune as they all started to walk out of the store.
"Where did you get the help?" Asked Moka while Kira lightly laughed into her left hand.
"I actually helped him. I didn't only teach him how to hot wire a car, I also taught him how to tell what parts are the best for building a motorcycle." Said Kira with a proud smile on her face.
"Where did you learn that?" Asked Kyouko suspiciously.
"My father used to own a motorcycle repair shop. I always helped him in the shop whenever I could. He taught me everything from how certain parts react with one another to how dangerous it could be if other parts touched one another. Those were possibly the best days of my life..." Said Kira before she slowly started to slip from reality and into her memories.
"Don't worry she'll be alright." Said Tsukune as he set a hand onto Moka's shoulder.
"You better not be lying." Said Moka as she smiled at Tsukune with her fangs lightly glinting in the light.
"You don't have to threaten him Moka after all it's natural for anyone to get lost in old memories that brought forth pure emotions. Although if the memory also has bad times it won't be very peaceful." Said Kyouko as they stepped out of the mall and walked towards the limo.
"Well, well what do we have here?" Asked someone before two people walked out from in between some of the parked cars.
The first person stood around 6', had hair that reached to his neck that was a rich light brown color, his eyes were light gray, and he looked to be at least in his early thirties. He was wearing a white dress shirt, black pants and black dress shoes.
The second person stood around 5' 11', had silver hair with a few streaks of gray mixed in that reached to his neck, his eyes were the same silver as his hair and even had a few flecks of gray mixed in, and he looked to be at least in his late twenties. He was wearing a white dress shirt, black pants, and basic tennis shoes.
'Great.' Thought Tsukune as he just marched up to the silver haired individual. When he was a couple of feet away he stared directly into the person's eyes with boredom. Slowly he released a sigh before he kicked the man from underneath his legs and a shadow spike impaled him through the chest. After the spike had impaled him a faint trickle of energy began to flow up the spike before it conjugated at the tip and formed into a ball of blue energy before it was coated over with a feint amount of shadows.
"Get lost or you can die just the same." Said Tsukune as he sent another bored look at the other man. Not a moment later the man was gone and in his place was a smoke version of himself.
"Kyouko the soul's yours if you want it." Said Tsukune as he started to walk towards the limo.
"Um...is Tsukune bi-polar?" Asked Moka while Kyouko picked the man's soul off the tip of the spike.
"You know I'm beginning to wonder that myself." Said Kyouko while she stored the soul into a small pouch.
"Only Amateratsu knows." Said Kira as she along with the others continued to walk towards the limo. When they reached the limo they noticed that Tsukune was their reading a scroll while smoking a cigarette.
"Hey Tsukune what are you reading?" Asked Moka as she approached him and the others followed close behind.
"A death order from Amateratsu." Simply stated Tsukune before he took a lighter out and lit a corner of the scroll and just watched as the fire climbed up and completely incinerated the scroll.
"For who?" Asked Lady Akashiya already having a feeling in her gut knowing that it was for her husband.
"Can't say it is against our code to give away information about possible assassinations to others that aren't a part of our family, but I'll tell you but not until later we we're in a private setting." Said Tsukune once more while he opened the limo door and got in while Lady Akashiya, Kira, and Moka followed after. Kyouko immediately shut the door behind them and went to the driver's door, got in, and shut the door behind her.
Not bothering to waste a single minute Kyouko started the ignition and drove away from the mall towards the tunnel that linked all the hidden monster lands to the human world. The drive back was absolutely quite no one was saying anything but their minds were as busy as ever.
'It has got to be my father that Amateratsu wants dead and I swear when he dies I won't shed a single tear for his ass. He cheated on mom, possibly behind the spirit that had a hold on Ria, and I know he has been trying to get me to hate other races. He may have even been behind my own kidnapping and Tsukune's family deaths.' Thought Moka with conflicting emotions before she settled onto pure untapped hatred at her own father.
'I wonder who it is that Lady Amateratsu wants killed? Maybe Lady Akashiya's husband. But why?' Wondered Kira as she took on a face of confusion and thoughtfulness.
'There is no doubt that in my heart that it is my husband that will be killed. Weather it be by my hand, Tsukune's, or Kira's it will not matter just so long as the killing isn't noticed by anyone else.' Thought Kyouko with a grim face as she noticed Tsukune deep in thought.
'I knew that this would happen someday. Now I'll finally be able to pay him back for everything he has put me through.' Thought Lady Akashiya without remorse for her soon to be dead husband.
'The crimes that have been presented against Lord Akashiya most undoubtfully warrant his execution. The only question is how? Maybe I can...' Started thinking Tsukune before his thought process was interrupted.
"Hey Tsukune...we're home." Said Moka as she lightly shook him away from his thought's.
"Oh...thanks Moka." Whispered Tsukune before everyone got out of the car. With a silence that hung over the group similar to a nose the group ascended back into the Akashiya house hold leaving behind the world in all of its hidden glory.
"Let the horror begin." Whispered a voice on the wind just before the great doors sealed shut just in time as the sky was painted a dark gray almost pitch black color.
Junsui Naiteki Fujin= True Inner Female
Seken Irui= World Clothing
Oni Kishu= Demon Riders
Kin Ryu Dote= Gold Dragon Bank
'Usus Magister Est Optimus'- This phrase is from Xenosaga 3 and translates to 'Practice makes perfect.'
Okay that is the end of chapter 5. I was originally going to attempt to but Tsukune in a dress but because of some...cough...unfortunate incidents I was unable to set this scene in but don't worry I'll still have at lest one scene where he is forced to wear a dress.
WHAT! *Tsukune shouts at me*
Oh be quite you. You aren't even real you're nothing more than a character that I'm going to tor- I mean a person who I'm going to place into many different positions of awkwardness and possible ultimate humiliation.
YOU CAN'T DO THIS! *Tsukune shouts in defiance*
Actually according to all laws and regulations of the fanfiction site anything can happen just so long as the story is properly rated. So long as I follow this I should be fine. Also this is also in accordance with Anime Law #100: Law of Anime Events- Much like wrestling, anything and everything can or will happen. So take that and shove it up your ass.
I DON'T CARE I'LL STILL KILL YOU! *Shouts Tsukune before he jumps at me*
*I jump out of the way and Tsukune goes through the wall* They never learn.
Okay now onto reviews:
GrrDraxion:
Sorry for not giving a review for the last one. I think that was a day that FF was having trouble with it's system, and I forgot to write you one afterwords. Which was a good one, just so you know. But did you borrow Ria from 'Lord of the Land of Fire' to use? That's what it seemed like to me. Anyway...
Hmm, that's quite a journey to travel 5 feet. Must be an error of distance for traveling from that tree Tsukune was sleeping in during that flashback. We talkin' bout human feet or kami feet? ^_^
So, we have another potential love interest now, do we? Seems like there's gonna be quite a lot of action around this small group, but uh, lets try and ground ourselves in the present a bit more now, shall we? Sure to get background info is all fine and good, but not so much if it happens every chapter for a good portion of it.
However, those 2 (now former) cops were entertaining. I just wonder why they were quitting the force in the first place, and what they're doing now. Of course, that murdering sexual predator still could show up and pose a minor problem, if you want another throw-away villain. But the names of those 2 cops don't exactly sound right... unless they were youkai, then it wouldn't be something that would sound so out of place in Japan.
And just a another thought that occurred to me... Just what was up with Moka getting all hot and bothered for when Tsukune questioned about who told Kyoko that Tsukune knew how to drive? I mean, I know girls around the age of 8 to 13 years old can be real perverts (I know this, because I knew a couple in my youth), but what would Moka know about the whole "getting turned on" thing? Are you secretly weaving Yukari into Moka's personality, and that was the only hint of such a thing? Surely, if she keeps that up, she won't be a virgin before she even reaches her teenage years... unless she's already reached them, which is doubtful with the way you wrote the story so far.
But not any less entertaining, but I am just a bit more surprised that Kira didn't panic being faced with the deaths of her former companions, and the one that killed them, or the fact of what Tsukune WAS, while he was arguing with his shadow. Really though, that's just straying just a bit into Peter Pan territory. But, those rules he laid down kinda had me seeing a contradiction with rule number 1 and the killing Tsukune did before that... that is, unless they were all about to die anyway, when whoever they were originally waiting for showed up.
Hmm, I guess that covers most of my thoughts on this. But hopefully this helps you to plug some of those glaring plot holes that would be sure to give the suspension of this 18-wheeler of a story some trouble.
And I'll be back for the next one... hopefully. Later.
ITD: Once more thanks for the review and pointing out some issues. I hope I was able to cover them all in this chapter if not let me Know and I'll attmept to address them later.
Weaver Chance:
Don't worry I only listen to the voices that sound sane(yes that does include the "cat voice" in my head) Mrreoww!
Anyway, Thanks for another great chapter and don't worry if you need to take a break from one of your stories(I'm following the others too after all!) I can't really blame you for that, I mean for those who look at my profile it should be obvious that I've got some of my stories on hold(for the right Mind-State) as well.
So long as you produce something!
Keep up the great work!
ITD: Thank you for being pacient with me.
josh 148513:
update soon
love story so far
when is the training starting
is this going to be a type of harem story
ITD: I have finally decided to begin the training next chapter and yes this is a Harem story with only three girls I have already decided for this story who they will be.
Wow only three reviews. YOU PEOPLE HATE!*I shout while Tsukune appears behind be before I smack him in the face sending him through the three foot thick wall behind the first wall.*
WHY? Why can't I reach one hundred reviews. *In fetal position crying while holding a knife before I randomly throw it at a dart board and hit the bulls eye. Starts laughing evilly.*