Well I'm back! And here with another update for lion king!

Chapter 12- Not one of us

The dark Jedi gathered around the dead body of Grievous in a memorial type service.

"Dooku," Mother Talzin said. "Watch over my poor Grievous." After a moment she turned to Anakin. "You!"

Mother Talzin swatted Anakin across the face with her electrowhip. Anakin cried out in pain. Anakin looked away in pain. Anakin looked away in pain, but soon turned his head, glaring at Talzin. She recoiled at the sight, shocked; he now had a scar over his right eye, like Dooku. Mother Talzin recovered quickly.

"What have you done?" She asked menacingly.

"I-I-I didn't mean to," Anakin stammered. "it-it-it wasn't my fault, I…" He then said forcefully. "I did nothing!"

"Exactly!" She said. "And in doing so, you betrayed your pride… betrayed Dooku!"

"I want nothing more to do with him," he shouted.

"You cannot escape it! Grievous is dead because of you!"

"No."

"You've killed your own brother!"

"NO!"

Anakin turned and ran out from among the pride, many of whom were growing and snarling at his departure.

"Let him go," Talzin said. "Obi-wan has hurt me for the last time… now he's corrupted Anakin! Listen to me…Obi-wan is injured and weak. Now is the time to attack! We will take his entire Kingdom…by force!"

The dark Jedi all snarled and yelled in reply.

Obi-wan slowly stirred on the bed. Satine sighed in relief and brushed back his hair.

"Daddy… it can't be true," Padme said breaking the long silence.

Before Obi-wan could reply, the door opened to reveal two young Jedi, Padme's age, both looked urgent.

"Master Kenobi," the female said. "It's Anakin."

"He's here, sir," the male said.

"Anakin!" Padme cried happily.

"Padme…enough," Obi-wan said sitting up with difficulty. "Thank you, Cayden and Sasha. Make sure he doesn't leave." (I add in my own characters!)

They bowed and left. Obi-wan got up and climbed out of bed. Both the healer and Satine tried to stop him, but he was being too stubborn. He summoned Rex and Cody to help him out. They came over and supported Obi-wan, helping him to the main balcony, where he shooed them off and walked to the rail. Padme, Satine, and the healer had followed him.

Down below, villagers moved aside to let Anakin walked toward the palace. All of them mumbled words of disgust and hatred.

"Why I oughtta," Rex said angrily. "Let me at him! Let me at him!" He looked at Cody. "Here; hold me back."

"Okay," Cody said grabbing the back of Rex's shirt.

"Let me at him! Let me at him!" Rex continued to say.

"Okay," Cody said and let go of the shirt.

Rex lurched forward. He turned back to Cody.

"I think you are missing the basic point here," he said.

"Uh…" Cody said stupidly.

The villagers continued to speak of Anakin foully.

"Why have you come back?" Obi-wan called his voice showing no sign of pain or weakness.

"Obi-wan," Anakin said apologetically. "I had nothing to do with—"

"You don't belong here," Obi-wan said.

"Please," Anakin begged. "I ask your forgiveness."

"Daddy, please," Padme urged. "Listen to him."

"Silence!" he said harshly to her. He then returned to Anakin. "When you first came here, you asked for judgment… and I pass it now." After a pause Obi-wan said it. "Exile!"

"NO!" Padme cried. "No! Anakin!"

She tried to run after him, but Sasha and Cayden held her back. Anakin was driven from Pride City. He ran out of the city, hot tears threatening to break lose.

While he ran he could hear the towns' people's words.

"And he is not one of us
He has never been one of us
He is not part of us
Not our kind"

Anakin reached a small pool and looked at his reflection to see Dooku. He splashed and ran faster, tears escaping.

"Someone once lied to us
Now we're not so blind
For we know he would do what he's done
And we know that he'll never be one of us
He is not one of us."

Yoda, sitting on a rock, watched it all.

How sad…