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Chapter 4: The aftermath

"Dean?" Sam called weakly as he regained consciousness. He tried to roll over but the pain was unbearable. "Dean? Are you all right?" There was no answer.

Sam looked around at where he was but it was like looking at a scene through a funhouse mirror. Everything was distorted and wrong. Sam twisted his head as much as he could and saw the unconscious form of Dean bleeding next to him. Dean wasn't moving and was barely breathing.

Sam tried to reach in his pocket for his cell phone, but he couldn't find it anywhere. He sighed and tried for Dean's cell phone, but without facing him he couldn't reach. Sam sucked in his breath and slowly rolled over, grimacing from the pain. He finally rolled over enough so he could reach Dean's cell phone and dialed 911.

"Hello? 911 how may I help you?" the operator asked in a friendly voice.

"I've been in a car accident." Sam gasped as pain shot through his legs.

"You'll have to be a little louder sir." she said seriously, the cheer gone from her voice. "I can barely hear you."

"I've been in a car accident." Sam said louder. "My brother's seriously injured and I can't move my legs."

"Just hold on, do you know where you are?" she asked as she called the ambulances on the police radio.

"I think I'm on Gibbon's Road heading south." he said as his legs started going numb.

"Okay, the ambulances are on their way." she said as she called in his location. "Stay with me here, what's your name?"

Sam thought about it for a moment. He didn't know what the names for the credit cards were or the health insurance.

"Are you still with me?" the operator asked. Sam groaned loudly so the operator would hear him and hung up. He sighed and looked over at Dean who still wasn't moving.

"Hang on Dean." he whispered to his brother. "You're going to be all right." Sam looked up as he heard the first sirens in the distance and then passed out from pain next to Dean.

Megan gasped as life rushed back into her body. The endless torture of dieing and living was getting real old real fast. She sat up and looked around the clearing. She knew if she could only get outside of the demon's circle than she would be safe and reconnected with Sam.

She looked around and began crawling away from the clearing when she began the cycle of dieing again. She gasped for air and stopped moving until the life rushed back into her again. She took some deep breaths and than began crawling again.

"Where do you think you're going, Megan?" the demon asked from behind her. Megan turned around only to be thrust back down on the ground, knocking the wind out of her. The demon smiled and thrust Megan back into the center of the clearing. Megan continued gasping for breath as the cycle started up again. The demon laughed as he watched her die and come back to life gasping.

"I'm going to watch you all die." he said mockingly. "And no one is going to stop me."