I'm very sorry if this sounds like cheesy crap, this is my first romantic Fan-fiction and it might suck. I honesty don't like the ending but I'm to lazy to rewrite it and can't think of a better ending. So…here it is. Please don't outright hate, if your gonna say it sucked please give constructive criticism, not just 'this sucked'. Thanks.
Mal Fallon
He knew she was gone, that she would no longer stroll out to the his car again. That she would never look at a case with him, fitting the pieces together that he couldn't. He wouldn't tease her playfully, she wouldn't have a witty comeback. But in a way he gained something from this, he hadn't come out and said it, but she knew. She knew he had cared for her as much as, maybe even more than anyone, and he had learned the feeling was mutual. She had accepted it, had wordlessly said it back. Now it was out, before it was really to late. And he knew that it wouldn't be hard for her because he wasn't her partner. He knew if it had happened before she would always be partially haunted by her past, painful memories every time she saw him. He had known long ago she had picked up the pieces of her past, but her ghost had never quite left. Now she was gone, leaving behind painful and wonderful memories alike, but had not left behind Mal. He drove back to the station, conflicted about recent events. He walked in to tell Amy he had caught her, that it had not been to late to 'say goodbyes'. But as he walked downstairs he found he didn't need to tell her. Natara was there, smiling from Amy's computer screen, obviously just telling Amy what had happened.
Natara Williams
She had just said goodbye to Mal, but had a long plane ride. She may not see him every day, but wanted it to be as close as possible. She turned on Skype on her computer, and Amy responded on her computer, even though it was for work. She told her what had happened, and Amy had smiled all through the story. Mal had then walked in as if on cue. His face showed utter shock at her appearance at Amy's computer screen. She then knew, they could make this work. That they didn't need to say goodbye.
The End...OR IS IT? I'm planning on writing a sequel, I don't know if I'm gonna post it yet, so tell me if you think I should. I'm planning on putting some action in it, but don't plan on deaths. It's gonna be about if Mal and Natara can maintain their relationship, even after something HUGE I'm planning happens. Let me know if you think I should do it.
Thanks for reading!
-But I Have Promises To Keep.