K: well this is the return of this story.
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Chapter 2: Marlene's danger
3rd person's pov
Skipper listened as the knights foot-steps grew louder with each minute. He went over what he could do to get out of her. Why was he in here in the first place? Oh right he saw that shiny metal thing in here. He thought it belonged to Marlene because she was wearing it the day she got captured. But then his head hurt really bad…
1 year ago today
Marlene walked along with the crowd as they trudged through the swamps. She saw something very shiny in the mud swamp. She picked it up, and it was a locket. Skipper came over to her. "What do you have there" skipper asked her. "It's a locket I found" Marlene answered staring at it intently.
"Well then can I see it for a sec" skipper asked. "Sure" Marlene answered while giving him the locket. He put in something that he pulled out of his backpack. "Here" skipper said as he handed her it back. Marlene opened it, and saw two pictures.
One had her, skipper, and private together. Private was giving skipper bunny ears while skipper laughed with his coffee mug. Marlene was smiling while hugging private.
The second one had her, Kowalski, and rico. Rico was the one giving Kowalski bunny ears. Kowalski had a chemical in his hands since skipper took the picture in the lab. Marlene had her arm firmly around Rico's neck.
She looked back up, but skipper was ahead of the crowd now.
She walked along them, but then the clouds turned dark. The rivers near them rushed even faster than before. A huge amount of wind knocked them over onto their backs.
Marlene felt something grab her. She looked behind her, and saw a knight. The knight had a diamond belt.
Out in the real world
Skipper gasped at the vision. He hadn't noticed that knight before. All the knights he met wore dark black belts, not diamond ones.
Vision again
Marlene struggled from the diamond belt knights grasp. But she could not get free. She yelled loudly for skipper. "Marlene" skipper said as he turned, and rushed to rescue her. He attacks the knight with much force so he could free her. Marlene tried pulling as skipper kept attacking. Marlene's locket dangled like a fallen leaf in the middle of fall. She couldn't last in a prison with the knights. Skipper used one final attempt to attack the knight, but the knight drew a sword, and blocked it.
The knight started up his rocket boots, and flew off. "Marlene I'll come for you" he yelled loudly to the skies. The skies beckoned him as they released rain upon him. "One day I'll be back for you" skipper said under his shaken breath.
End of vision
Skipper fell to the ground in a hump. He silently cried under all the pressure he's been through. Everyone he lost was all because of him. He caused their imprisonment and death. And now he wants payback.
Starting with one person at a time…
K: what do you think? Pretty interesting right?