Ok guys I'm really sorry for the lack of updates but I've been focusing on my German GCSE recently, so my writing has been put on the back burner, but now that I have a week off school so I have decided to continue writing =)
But then this brings me to my latest problem, I am not very pleased with how the story has been written, so I am going to replace each chapter with one that I deem better and I hope that you will agree with me.
Since I have already written part of chapter 4 already you might as well read it:
Chapter 4:
When we arrive they lead us into an ordinary looking building, and guide us through a maze of rooms with various different forms of security.
"What is this place?" I ask as I examine the pure white room we have just been lead into.
"You'll see." They reply with an air of mystery. Suddenly the small room starts to shake.
"What's going on?" Tony asks sounding as confused as I am, causing Julia and Matt to smile and share a knowing look, just as they turn their gaze back to us the floor drops, and we are whizzing down into the unknown. Suddenly we stop and what we thought was a wall opens revealing some kind of secret government looking base. Tony and I just stand there gobsmacked, amazed by all the technology and completely confused about everything.
"What is this place?" I finally manage to say.
"We like to call the Institution." Julia replies as she leads us through a pair of double door into a long corridor lined with doors.
"An institution for what exactly?" Tony asks
"It all depends on who is here."Matt replies, mysteriously.
"What do you mean by that?" Tony asks starting to get a little bit frustrated.
"He means that in your cases you will be taught how to defend yourselves." Julia replies with a sigh.
"Why are you doing this?" I ask.
"Because you two have rare abilities." She continues "And no before you ask not the super power you see in comic books."
"Oh." Tony sighs slightly disappointed, "Then what are they?"
"That's for you to figure out." Julia replies.
"So helpful." I mutter under my breath, but Matt hears me and lets out a small laugh.
"I thought you would know by now that life isn't simple." Matt smirks
"Why should we even stay here?" I ask, ignoring Matt's comment.
"What do you have to lose?" says an unknown voice.
"Oh Mr Smith, we were just on our way to your office."
Ok, so what you know now is that they have been taken to some kind of secret underground government headquarters, where they will be 'trained to defend themselves', and I think you can kind of guess who their enemies are… now I'm going to stop my rambling (if that makes sense) and get to the point:
I want to include you readers in this story as much as possible, and I have seen in other stories that the authors have asked the readers if they would like to invent a character to put in their story. I think this is quite a good idea so I am inviting you to do the same, if you would like to do this please leave a review which includes this information;
Name:
Age: (preferably between 10 and 18)
Gender:
Appearance:
Talents/Skills: e.g. linguist, martial arts, sport
Weakness:
Traits/Personality: e.g. funny, cheerful, moody, brave and unpredictable
Friend/Enemy: (is a friend/enemy of Alexis/Tony)
And any other information you deem necessary =) I look forward to bringing your characters to life (even if they are random)