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Penelope sat down in her chair her heart beating faster and faster. "What kind of problem?" She said hoping it was just a mistake. She could hear Derek breathing over the head set. " The dangerous kind." The man behind him chuckled. "Yeah the dangerous kind SO listen here What ever your name is I want access outta here or your pretty boy wont be so pretty anymore." Penelope sighed. "what kind of accsess I don't have that power." Penelopes phone rang again. "Garcia?." "Hotch, Hotch it Derek and.." Hotch stopped her " I know I know right now you are our only connection. So you need to tell me everything that is going on." Penlope took a deep breath. " he wants an exit or he'll kill him." She could here hotch silently debating with the team. " ask morgan if he's in a position to Negotiate." Penloep nodded and switched lines " Hotch asked if you can negotiate anything to give your elf some wriggle room?" Derek Looked up into the eyes of the unsub. " Not at the moment maybe if there was time but most likley NO." The man gave derek a weird look. " No what? No to my escape outta here?" He yanked the headset from dereks ear.
" Hello," Penlope's eyes got wide. " Where's derek?" She coaxed."Well dont you ahve the most angelic voice. Don't worry about you boy here he's fine but listne doll I need a way outta here." Penelope rolled her eyes, " Negotiating with a creep like you... isn't on my schedule." She instantly regretted it as the man's voice significantly change. " Listen you ingrate Bitch I'm getting outta here in one of two ways, With you agent here alive in tact and me off scott free or.. You agen t here with a hole the size of my fist in his head and my ams in cuffs now see in both scenarios I'm alive anyway but not you agent so... Make up your mind smart mouthed tramp... you have 1 hour." The head set went dead. Penelope had tears in her eyes. she quickly switched over to Hotch. " He wants and escape and.. theres no room for nego.. negotiations...we have a hour Hotch... an hour. " She stammered Hotch let out a large breath of air. " Prentis let P.D know this just became a hostage situation." Hotch informed as reid ran in. " We just got a call form the diner...He wants Garcia to escort him out." Hotch ran into the other room. " Garland... Garland is that you?" Hoch heard a significant laugh over the speaker " Yeah its me... as I told the other Agent so Kindly I want the sweet mouthed angel on the other side of the headset to come and walk me to my gettaway" Penelope wailed in hotch's ear " NO.. NO freakin way ." Hotch hung up d set.."Deal but our agent comes out unharmed as well as Mrs. Garcia you understand?" The man Laughed " We'll see" The line went dead." Have an escort team get Garcia Now."
Penelope was scared and beyond pissed off she didn't give permission to escort a maniac to his get a way where he could kill her or kid nap her. She stepped out of the car with a scowl on her face. " Penelope ts short notice but we promise nothing will happen to you. Derek is in danger if this is what we need to do the keep him from being harmed we have to do it not to mention there is at least 25 more hostages in there." Penelope's face softened a bit and she nodded. "Just tell me what I have to do." Hotch patted her on her back. " We have snipers at every angle in 15 minutes we'll send you in a car unmarked and rigged with an explosive that will dead the tires as soon as you are out of there. The doors with also automatically lock we will have him trapped and you and Derek safe. Penelope took a deep breath something in her system said it wouldn't play out as smoothly.
"How long have you been with her?" Garland was sitting now with a stop watch and Derek on the ground beside him. Derek didn't answer. " How Long dammit?" He cocked the gun and pressed harder against his neck. " Easy man Easy we aren't together anymore haven't been for a long time." Garland laughed " What did you do to screw it up? and Don't tell me any bull shit Like we grew apart or we weren't in love anymore. because trust me its never that simple." Derek sighed. " WE were... High school lovers and um... he thought she was pregnant... and she told me but I um... I didn't want to here it." Derek didn't here anything for a while. " Well aren't you a lucky son of a bitch? She still is helping you after the way you treated her. She must be ugly...". Derek's fists clenched a this side. "Is she I bet shes a ugly muppet looking ..." Derek banged his fist on the ground " Shut the fuck up." He turned around to face the man. He just held the barrel of the gun to his heart. " You must love her... how much do you think you'll love her if I blew your heart out. Sit the fuck down you don't run anything right now. You see these people? Cowering in the corners? They understand that I am the ruler in this bitch I am god I control life and death You FBI agent with your training you've gotta know that i'd blow you brains out right here.. she must be special for you to risk death... I sure will enjoy meeting her." Derek's jaw ticked. " I bet shes soft and smells nice... WOOO just gives me shivers thinking about it." He looked down at Derek's Fist. " Do you wanna hit me Hit me big shot hit Me COME ON HIT ME !" He screamed in Derek's face. and then retreated when he saw he wasn't going to do anything. " Sit the fuck down you have no control here so wait and hope they send me my ride and your girl."
Penlope walked up to the door of the diner goiving one final look back. She looke ddown at her out fit and wished she had worn pants. She knocked at the diner door.
" That must be her...time to go Pretty Boy." he jerked Derek's arm up and led him to the door. He opened it and looked into Penelope's eyes. Garland let out a Low whistle... " Damn that girl is thick you know how to pick um I give you that... Damn and he treated her like you did you have every right to hate yourself you lost a good piece of ass come but enough flatteries Come on e darlin' wheres my ride?" He pushed Derek in front of him. Penelope took a breath. " Its Just behind me black unmarked and everything..." The man laughed " good then lets go?" Penelope panicked Z" aren't you going to let him go first?" The man stopped. " I never agreed to that darlin' so lets keep moving shall we I'd hate for some one to get hurt." Penelope nodded and turned around to walk to the car Derek and Garland behind her " Damn Its even better to watch her leave." Penelope bit her tongue and kept a steady pace to the the car. " Pretty boy you drive and you little lady your riding with me he grabbed onto her arm and pulled her into the car as Derek slowly made his way around the side. " This is going to be a fun ride." Garland said as he rubbed the barrel of the shot gun down the length of Penelope's body.
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