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Annabeths POV
I walked through the front gates of my school, Yancy Acedemy. As usual, people who were remotly close to me, moved away. They all thought I was a freak. They'd said it to my face multiple times before. I ignore'd them, and walked to my class. When I sat down for Advisory, the person sitting next to me leaned so far away from me he fell of his chair. I just looked at the board, feeling bored.
The first half of the day inched by, after 4th period the bell rand, signaling it was time for lunch. As I was walking to the cafeteria, I heard someone say that there was a new kid coming to our school tommorow. Not, that I even cared at all. I got my lunch and sat at my usual table, where nobody sat at all. I mabey got through half of my sandwich, when I felt something gurgle in the pit of my stomach. I rushed to the bathroom, and threw up what I just ate. When I was done, I sat on the floor and cried. There was nothing I could do. Nothing to do. After about 5 minutes, I got up and smoothed my hair, flushed the toilet, and looked in the mirror. You would just be able to see the outline of my ribcage. It was scary lookin. But, I just put on a sweatshirt and walked out of the bathrom.
I knew it was coming,"God Annabeth, you're such a FREAK!" Another one, "You are the worst, most desgusting thing I have ever seen." The next one hit me hard in the gut, " Why don't you just crawl in a hole and DIE, so we don't have to see you anymore." I didn't stop, I just grabbed my backpack, and bolted out the door, leaving my half eaten sandwich on the table. I ran to he front of the school and threw up again. My stomach was empty, so this was just vile. I wiped my mouth off with my sleeve. The bell rang, finnaly lunch was over. I picked myself up, and went to 6th period.
When I got home, I was greeted by my father, "Hey sweetie, I just made a batch of cookies, want one?" "No thanks,i'm not hungry."I replied "Really?he asked You're lunch was at 11:45, and its 4:00,thats a lo-" "I'm not hungry!" I snapped. He looked at me with a hurt expression. I never snaped at him." Thanks though," I said in a calm voice. With that, I hurried upstairs.
It was 7:00, I was doing my homework when a knock came from my door. My father said quietly,"Annabeth? Dinners ready, if want to come down." "Sure, be down in a sec," I replied. Downstairs, my father was putting a pot of spaghetti on the table. He scooped me one spoon and put it in my bowl. We said grace and started eating. He tried to make small talk but we mostly ate in silence. I had a bowl and felt fine. So, I had another bowl. I got that down too. I thought, mabey it's gone. I had another bowl. I got that down too. I thought am I free? I thought too soon. I felt a HUGE gurgle in the pit of my stomach, I didn't say anything to my father, I bolted down the hallway, slammed the door, and hurled so hard and so long, my body ached all over, I 'd been crying the whole time. But, once I finished, I cried so hard, that I became dehydrated and tired. I didn't get a glass of water or anything, I just said goodnight to my father, who was extremely confused, and climed into my bed.
Before I drifted off to sleep, I remembered that a new student was coming tommorow. Great, just another person to hate me.
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