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Annabeths POV

I thought all night, and even this morning about what Percy said, " 'I will help you.' " What did he mean by that? I mean he didn't know, no one did. It's not like he could even help me. I thought about this while I showered. Right before I put on my sweats I looked in the mirror.I could see my arm bones. My, ankle bones. I could see half of my rib bones. But that wasn't the scary part. My shoulder and hip bones came to a point.

I started hyperventilating. Aparently very loudly too. My father knocked on my door,"Annabeth? Whats wrong?" "Nothing," I lied. " Just remembered that we have a test in Science, and I forgot to study for it." I may have said it pretty quickly, but he didn't question me." Oh ok," he said.

As I walked onto the campus, Percy ran up tp me. "Hey,"he said.I didn't say anything. "Listen, I said I was going to help you and I am, bu-" "No you won't,"I snapped at him."Or more like you can't. So why don't you just leave me alone, because you can never help me." I ran past him all the way to class.

I kept runnning all the way to the field out behind the school. Then the whole football field, and beyond that. I told my body to stop running, but it wasn't listening. So, I ran into a wall to stop myself. I was so thirsty and hungry, that before I even realized what I was doing, I took a huge gulp of water and ate an old granola bar from my backpack. I waited a few minutes, and nothing was comeing up, so I walked back to school.

I was gone a whole half hour. I missed Advisory. No one even noticed me when I sat down in the back of the room. For the first half of the day, I didn't do anything. I didn't talk, or eat, or anything but walk. I didn't go to lunch. I just sat in the hallway, staring at the wall. A group of boys were walking my way."Uh oh guys,"one of them said."Look out its Hobo freak, shes crazy!" They all laughed. Another one said, "Hey guys, we better run, we might die from garbage girl's steanch!" That set them busted out laughing. I just stood up, about to leave.

One of them pushed me down, hard."Sit down, freak," he said to me. The whole left side of my body hurt. I tried to stand up again, but he pushed me down again. I heard a gurgaling sound in the pit of my stomach."Oh no," I said. "What did you say?"one said.I managed to get out one word before all hell broke loose."Help," I said. I vomited all over the floor. My body shook violently. The boys were long gone. Even if I ate a small amount of food and water, I still vomited for 20 minutes. It took away so much of my energy that I passed out. Before I slipped into darkness, I saw someone was lifting me into his arms and taking me away from here. All I saw was his hair color. It was jet black.

Good?Bad? Sorry it took so long, but I accidentally deleted it, so I had to re-type it.