Obituary

so it's been a while. Yeah no kidding, it's been what, nearly 3 years since I even touched this story. Look I'll explain what happened exams began up and with revision and all this sort of fell by the wayside, plus I lost all enthusiasm to do these type of stories. Ok so first thing I re read the story recently and I'll keep it real the hell do you lot see in this. This is awful. When you write fanfiction you think you're not going to write one of those infamously bad fanfiction stories full of bad tropes. but turns out when you're 15 you tend to be a shit writer. First thing the story is edgy to a point of self parody. The whole deku being tortured by a secret government agency is ridiculous now looking at it. When I wrote I thought it was cool and gave depth to deku, really it's just edgy but in the sense that it's trying too hard. Also the plot is full of wholes, why is subject 10 sent to fight the nomu when he's ment to be a covert agent yet he's dropped into a situation with multiple heros and witnesses in a public building and it's not even his point he shouldn't be fighting these type of threats. I know this was back before we knew anything about nomus or that the one at UJS was the first one created. The character act completely out of character or act in ways that no human would ever think of doing. Either that or their emotional state flip flops like crazy, how much deku stutters is apparently decided on a chapter by chapter basis. Deku suddenly being accepted by UA management makes no sense, he should be in prison for assaulting all those pros and why do they put the mental Ill person who has killed for a living in with all their students. Uraraka apparently has it out for a psycho shes only know for at most 2 minutes. Mightnight being deku's adopted mum is plot point I stole from other fanfics and make no sense in this universe and also deku is pretty accepting of her despite being mentally tourtured by the government. Also why is he going to UA it states he's never been to school so how's he going to do any of the work, what you can teach 15 years of education in 5 days god why was I stupid, also my dyslexia never got picked up those days so the gramma is a mess. Safe to say I have some regrets. By the way I'll tell you now your never getting another part, I'm guessing you could tell but sorry I don't write stuff like this cause my autistic ass can't write a series without being distracted by a new story idea. I stick to one shot now or shorts cause I can finish those. Also just in general most fanfiction one shots are better cause the writer generally knows not to write a rambling under cooked mess that actually explores characters. So yeah, I've no point I'm just typing this as a go. Hey you remember how this way a generation Rex cross over yeah I just stole the powers and the bit about nanits I think every thing else is my idea which is why there shit. So ok I now it's the end but I feel I own at least a semi finally to the first thing I ever wrote for other people so as it's the requiem I'll tell what would happen in the story consider it a what could have been or just closure.

So deku gos and fights in the tournament. No shit he destroys everyone else cause he's the only one with combat training he takes down both Mina and shino a lot of the details with the cavalry battle and shoto are the same I think deku was trying to convince shoto that their alway a way to continue and too keep fighting but unlike in canon Deku actually wins and moves to fight bakugo however soon into the match a massive swarm of FEO attack sent by sprit to attack subject 10 deku goes on the offensive to save people from them in a big power fantasy and goes full psycho, I think the heros were incapacitated by spirit goons or that they had hostages I think the emp was to prevent other heroes finding out about the assault on the coliseum. I think spirits hit squad did attack deku and had the upper hand until the rest of the heros showed and they retreated away anyway people still have issues with deku thinking he's nothing more that a killer due to the bloody fight with the FEOs. Look I'll keep it real I've forgotten what happens next. I think spirt becomes the main villain having eliminated the league of villains, got to remember my villain academia or overlord was yet to come out so a lot of those plot details weren't in the story. The story basically becomes deku trying to prove he can become a hero to other while spirit sends their endless resources to stopping him. Not sure why the secret government organisation is putting this much effort into these types of plans their the ones who attack the camp in this timeline. Eventually it all comes to head in the second year where spirt launch an all out attack on deku to recapture him and you know big power of friendship moment happens spirt is defeated, oh and uraraka and deku couple up cause this is a fanfiction at the end of the day. Yeah that's all I can remember.

honestly re-reading this made me think how far mha has changed since the end of season 3. All the theories and excitement leading into season 4 god it was a different time. Early mha fanfiction was wild man, lots of izuku power fantasies out their probably still are. And then there was Wattpad, ah what a piece of shit that site is some much trash on their, stopped using that site when I lost my login details to hackers so yeah that izuku x uraraka lemon was not worth it. Honestly feels like a lifetime ago. I guess stuff changes, doesn't it always. I still like mha I keep up with the manga but the feel of early mha is an impossible feeling to capture, it feels like it's slipped away a sence of youth and wonder at a new manga Titan that might rise fells much more hollow now that the series is a massive Titan of shonen. Back in season 3 everything was possible now I read the manga and I feel we're going through the motions. I don't, maybe I'm just mad but yeah.

So that's my obituary to his series and maybe this era of mha fanfiction all those poorly written and slightly edgy power fantasy stories. They were terrible terrible but I'm guessing all the writers who wrote those wanted was to spread their joy of this series. So yeah. I guess all I ask is you read my 40K fanfiction( yeah I got into warhammer) if your interested, I got two up so far. I think their ten times better than this but you be the judge. But I think that all and hey if you really want a better ending to his fanfiction you can write it yourself it not like I can take you to court or anything.

anyway goodbye all I hope your doing well, until next time.