So I'm updating. Finally. I decided to make time to rewrite and/or add chapters to my stories. So they should be better now :). Short chapter. On to the story.
"So basically you went to school,went into some portal,and ended up on Shuggazoom,as robot monkeys. Then these guys came outta nowhere and attacked you?" Sprx summarized.
"Yes" Nodded Suzy. She normally would've responded to this with a sarcastic 'No,I didn't just say all that.',however she knew she should be gracious toward them. "That's what happened. I am perplexed by it as well."
"Well, you two can stay here as long as you need to." Chiro declared.
"Oh,thank you very much. Your hospitality is very much appreciated." Thanked Suzy.
"Yeah,what she said." Said Jason.
"If you wouldn't mind,I would like to do a few more tests on you to make sure you are in proper working order." Gibson said.
"Uhh,sure." They agreed and walked with him to the Med. Bay.
As soon as they left,Sprx went up to Chiro and hissed "Are you crazy? That whole story could've been made up on the spot! How do you know they aren't evil? You can't just let them stay!"
"Relax,Sprx! We don't know if they're evil or not,but either way we can't just turn them away! If they are for real,then what kinda heroes are we to make them leave? We just keep a careful watch on them,kay?" Chiro responded calmly.
"Alright..." Sprx mumbled,crossing his arms.
Gibson ran the tests quietly. After a while of silence,he said "This is very peculiar."
"What is it? Something wrong with us?" asked Jason.
"Well,no. You two seem to have no further injuries,despite what you went through. Which is very strange. " He somewhat eyed them suspiciously. "However,I was referring to there being other robot monkeys."
"We weren't like this before,y'know! In case you weren't listening,we woke up in these weird bodies!" Jason replied defensively.
"No,I heard you say that. I was talking about those three beings that attacked you." Gibson told him.
"Oh. Well, I don't know anything about them." Jason shrugged.
"Perhaps Antauri could figure out something about them. I know he must be trying..." Gibson trailed off in thought. After a moment, he shrugged and turned to them. "Well,you two do not seem to have any physical ailments,aside from a few minor cuts and scrapes,and you will probably be sore."
"Definitely sore." Groaned Suzy,but chuckled nonetheless.
So I seriously must have an issue. I had to spell check like every sentence! Lol.
BTW,I decided to add authors notes to each chapter because I read off of someone's (I do not remember who) author note that (And I quote) "Authors notes make the story a bit more personal." Yea,I like them. More entertaining.
Kelly is gonna be in the next chapter,I think next chapter will be solely hers. :)
And I find it rather easy to have Gibson in character,honestly. Its because I do have a large vocabulary,and express it all the time. And I actually know what each word means,I don't just say it to make me look smart...Even though it does. And yes,I am Suzy in the story. In case suzyq85,my username,didn't already bring you to that conclusion.
And I just realized that after each chapter in my stories,I have always said "R&R!". But that doesn't make very much sense,because that stands for Read and Review,and if this is the end of the chapter,it should just be Review...
So Review! ^_^
Oh,and I just figured out how to make those line things that separates parts. I was trying to figure it out, and gave up,then as I was editing it,I saw the button! :D
