Hey everybody! I love this story so much, and I've been working on it a lot! Hopefully this chapter is okay, I've worked on it all day! Well, enjoy the chapter! (Disclaimer in prologue)
Chapter 3: An Interesting Person to Meet
The green hills and valleys of the Scotland countryside amazed Susanna as she watched it roll past the train. She had finished a quarter of the book fifteen minutes ago and decided to just daydream. Susanna was trying to block out the loud, chatty students outside her compartment. She was surprised no one had asked to come to her compartment, since it sounded like all of the others were full. Her stomach was growling badly, but Susanna did not want to eat her Oreos so she could have some during the school year. Suddenly, Susanna's compartment door opened, and a kind-looking, older woman was standing in the doorway pushing a cart in her hands. Susanna noticed all of the bags of sweets and candies on the cart, most of them the eleven-year-old had never seen before.
"Anything off the trolley, dear?" the lady asked her. Susanna starred at the sweets, unsure of what they were. She stood up and walked to the trolley, wanting to get a closer look. She fixed up a box filled with candies that looked like jelly-beans, all multi-colored and designed.
"Ma'am, what are these?" Susanna nervously asked the lady, holding to show what she was asking about. As the lady was fixing to answer, Susanna heard quick, light footsteps approaching the two.
"Those are Bertie Botts' Every Flavor Beans, I would not recommend those, you might get the ear wax flavored bean," a female voice suggested next to Susanna. The blonde-girl turned to see a girl her age and height with very bushy light brown hair standing next to her, already in her Hogwarts' robes. Susanna could feel she was very knowledgeable and confident in her intelligence. The brown haired girl's chocolate brown eyes watched Susanna look nervously at beans, considering putting them back. Susanna slowly placed them back on the cart and tilted her head to the girl.
"What's a good treat on here?" Susanna wondered, hoping the girl would suggest something very sweet since she could feel her stomach rumbling even more.
"I would recommend the chocolate frogs. I've read they are very good and come with collectible cards of famous witches and wizards," the girl suggested to Susanna. She looked over the cart and picked up a sapphire blue, golden yellow colored, pentagonal shaped container, and the girl handed it to Susanna. "And some cauldron cakes and pumpkin pastries are delicious, too." The sweets were very appetizing to Susanna, ready to eat.
"I'd like to have these, please," Susanna told the trolley lady.
"That would be five sickles please," the trolley lady informed. Susanna immediately rushed into her compartment, placed her backpack on the seat, and began searching through the bag. She became frustrated when she could not find it. The brown-haired girl walked inside the compartment doorway and watched as Susanna continued digging through her bag.
"Now where could that money bag possibly be?" Susanna asked to herself, thinking about giving the sweets back and just eating some Oreos.
"You could just use magic to bring it to you," the other girl suggested. Susanna turned to face her with a confused look.
"Wait, I thought wizards and witches under seventeen were not allowed to use magic outside of Hogwarts," Susanna wondered to the girl, remembering the law from one of the school books. And, she had already been reminded of that, from the Ministry of Magic itself.
Susanna was sitting in her bed reading The Standard Book of Spells to have an idea of what she would be learning at Hogwarts. It was past two in the morning, and Susanna had no intent on going to sleep anytime soon. Professor McGonagall had told her before she went back to the orphanage after finishing shopping at Diagon Alley to keep her supplies, book, and wand hidden from everyone at the orphanage. "Muggles do not believe in magic and it breaks wizarding law to perform in front of a muggle," McGonagall sternly warned her. So, Susanna promised to herself that she would stay up as late as should could to learn about the wizarding world. She was carefully holding her wand in one hand with the book in the other.
"Now, what's an easy spell to learn first?" Susanna whispered to herself, scanning the first few pages of the book. Her eyes soon landed on a spell 'Wingardium Leviosa? All I have to do is swish and flick?" Susanna soon raised her wand and followed the instructions, carefully whispering the incantation. Susanna looked away from her wand to see a pillow on the other side of her bed rising into the air. Her eyes widen as it continued gaining altitude. The eleven-year-old slightly moved her wand, and the pillow plopped back down on her bed. She giggled quietly, happy at her first attempt of magic. Her eyelids were starting to shut more often, so Susanna gently placed her books under the bed and moved the sheet over it. She laid her head softly on the pillow, starting to fall asleep. Before she could try to settle into a deep sleep, she heard something slide into her room. Susanna quickly sat up and bent down to pick up the object. It felt like an envelope, and Susanna quickly turned on a nearby lamp.
"What could this possibly be?" Susanna asked as the envelope suddenly jumped out of her hands on onto her bed. The girl immediately knew it had to be magic related. The envelope began twitching around, and the girl could see a black hole forming in the middle. Small, black silts began forming into shapes of eyes. The object then started floating in the air. Susanna realized the shapes were becoming a face as it cleared its throat in a female pitch.
"Dear Ms. Gates," the female voice from the letter began talking in a clear, authoritative voice. "The Ministry of Magic has received intelligence that at two thirty-six, this morning, you performed the Hover Charm with a wand even though you are underage and in a muggle-inhabited area. As this is your first violation of the Decree for the Reasonable Restriction of Underage Sorcery, you are left with a warning from the Improper Use of Magic Office. Be sure it does not happen again." Susanna became worried as the letter's eyes shut and it fell to her bed. She immediately placed her wand under her bed, making sure it would not perform magic.
"Oh, no worries. The Hogwarts Express is an extension of Hogwarts, so you can perform as much magic as you can," the brown-haired girl explained to Susanna once she was flung from the memory. "Just use 'Accio' with whatever you are searching for to bring it to you." Susanna nodded her head as she took her wand from the outside of her backpack. She then aimed it inside her backpack.
"Accio money sack," Susanna spoke out loud. A breeze went by her as her money sack was immediately drawn toward her. Susanna took it inside her palm and walked up to the trolley lady when the brown-haired girl still standing next to her. Susanna began opening the sack, but suddenly felt useless. "Um, what is a sickle?"
"Oh, it's the silver coins. It is worth more than a bronze knut but less than a gold galleon. The currency is seventeen sickles in a galleon, four hundred ninety three knuts in a galleon, twenty-nine knuts in a sickle," the other girl explained. Susanna's admiration of the girl was growing the more she spoke her knowledge. She was sure the other girl had grown up in a wizarding family. The blonde girl quickly took out the coins and handed them to the trolley lady. The older lady quickly handed Susanna her purchases and walked to the next compartment as the two girls walked into Susanna's compartment. The other girl began looking around for something.
"Um, thanks for your help," Susanna thanked the girl. The other girl gave her a bright smile as she continued looking around.
"Your welcome. My name is Hermione Granger," the girl introduced. She paused after speaking, and Susanna knew she was waiting for her to tell her name.
"Susanna Gates," Susanna gave as she put her hand out. Hermione took it and gave a brief shake.
"I almost forgot the real reason I came down this part of the train. Have you seen a frog anywhere? A boy named Neville has lost his," Hermione explained. "I've been to a lot of compartments, but I've had no luck so far."
"Sorry, I have not seen a frog ever since I've been in here," Susanna apologized, causing Hermione to frown and sigh at the answer. "I've been reading my book this train ride and if a frog came in here, I did not notice."
"Well, hopefully his frog will turn up soon," Hermione wished. "But, I better keep searching." Hermione soon got up off her seat and walked to the compartment door. "We'll be arriving soon, so you might want to put on your robes. It was nice meeting you, Susanna, maybe we will be in the same house. See you at Hogwarts!" Hermione waved before walking down the hallway.
Susanna broke the packing of the chocolate frogs and quickly opened it. She was surprised that the chocolate actually looked like a frog, but was glad it did not jump out and come to life. She quickly took a bite out of it, wondering where the collectible card Hermione mentioned was. Susanna glanced over the packaging and noticed some space in the middle. She took her nail, placed it through the space, pushed her finger, and a card popped out of its space. Susanna quickly picked the card off her lap to look at it. On the front of it was an older looking man with a long, snow-white beard. His light blue eyes were covered with his half-moon spectacles, and he was wearing a dark maroon robe. Susanna turned the card over, and it read 'Albus Dumbledore'. Susanna noticed that under his name was some tiny information:
Considered by many the greatest wizard of modern times, Dumbledore is particularly famous for his defeat of the Dark Wizard Gellert Grindelwald in 1945, for the discovery of the twelve uses of dragon's blood, and his work on alchemy with his partner, Nicolas Flamel. Prof. Dumbledore enjoys chamber music and ten-pin bowling.
He sounds like an interesting person to meet, Susanna thought to herself as she watched the image of Dumbledore disappear. She continued dwelling on the school year as she felt the train come to a complete halt. Susanna quickly placed her belongings back in her backpack. She could hear shouting telling the students to tell their belongings on the train, so she hesitantly left her backpack on the seat. The noise level greatly increased as the students moved to the exits. She made sure not to be trampled as she made her way outside the train. Everyone seemed to blend in with their black robes, and their hair color was the only thing that stood out. She walked out to the platform into the dark, starry night. Susanna could see a faint outline of a castle bathed in torch light.
"Firs'-years! Firs'-years over here! Firs'-years!" a loud, booming voice sounded around the platform. Susanna turned to the direction of the voice, and her eyes widen at the sight of a giant sized man with long, wild black hair. He was wearing, worn brown and red overcoat and shirt. He seemed intimidating, but when Susanna made brief eye contact with his black, beady eyes she could tell he was friendly and sweet. Susanna joined the other first years, hoping to find Hermione, and maybe see Ron and the other boy again. "C'mon, follow me – any more firs'-years? Mind yer step, now! Firs'-years follow me!" Susanna followed the group of first years down a new crammed path, and she could see the lake around the castle growing closer. Its black color reflected the many towers and lights from the castle.
"The Black Lake has a giant squid in it, merpeople, and other creatures," Susanna heard Hermione whisper as the brown-haired girl caught up to her. Susanna was glad she was walking by someone who she knew instead of being by herself. "The castle is also unplottable; no muggle would be able to find it. Aren't you excited, Susanna?"
"I'm more nervous than excited," Susanna answered, clutching the sleeves of her robes tighter to keep her hands from shaking.
"Yeh'll get yer firs' sight o' Hogwarts in a sec'," the giant told the first years, "jus' round this bend here."
"Oooooooh!" the entire first year class expressed in unison as they witnessed the castle for the first time. Susanna immediately thought it was something pulled out of the fairytales she had read all her life. The black, velvet nighttime sky was covered with sparkling stars as it served as the backdrop to the tall turrets and towers. Thousands of torches and lights created dots along the castle walls and bridges. Susanna immediately knew she would definitely get lost in the first few days. The giant began walking to a lower platform, where Susanna could see boats waiting for them but she noticed there were no oars.
"No more'n four to a boat!" the giant shouted to the group, alerting them to the boats before them. Susanna followed Hermione as she joined two boys, the red-headed Ron and the black-haired boy Susanna recognized from the train station. The boys sat in the front of the boat as the girls slowly sat down in the back, not wanting to tip over. Susanna could see the giant looking around at all of them, giving a wave to the black-haired boy in front of her. "Everyone in? Right then, forward!" Susanna let go of her sleeves as she grabbed hold of the side of the boat as it began moving across the lake. The castle's size continued to grow as the boats moved closer. She felt someone nudge her, and she turned to see a cliff coming closer to them, where their heads could get hit. "Heads down!" the giant yelled to the group as they do as he instructed.
Susanna watched the peaceful water flow by, sort of hoping to see a mermaid. She was sort of wanting Hermione to tell her a fact about mermaids and how to get them to let someone see them, but it did not happen. She turned her attention back to the castle as they were taken down a wide tunnel, and let out at an underground harbor. The boats came to a stop, and the students followed the giant once he got out of his boat. Susanna followed the group, staying close to Hermione. She kept on glancing up the steep stairs as they continued climbing. The group stopped at a large, stone door as the giant made his way to the front and knocked on the door three times. The door slowly opened up, and Susanna strained her neck to see what was in the doorway.
A smile ran up Susanna's face when she saw Professor McGonagall standing in the doorway, still with her hair in a bun and wearing the emerald robes. When Professor McGonagall saw Susanna, she gave her a brief, happy smile before turning serious for the other students. All of the first years were staring at the professor, wondering what she was going to say.
"The firs'-years, Professor McGonagall," the giant announced to the professor. Susanna could see the professor examining all of the students, probably seeing who would be the troublemakers or not. She was starting to hear the excited, chattering voices of the other students close by.
"Thank you, Hagrid, I'll take them from here," the professor told the giant. He nodded in thanks and walked off in another direction. The professor began walking through the door, and Susanna was surprised at the expansive size of the first hall, which Hermione told her was the Entrance Hall. She could see the magically flaming torches, gigantic ceilings, and twisting marble staircases in the castle, and Susanna's fear of getting lost was growing as they continued walking. McGonagall led the first years into a smaller chamber and took a deep breath before speaking.
"Welcome to Hogwarts," the professor began, smiling at Hermione and Susanna when her eyes fell on them. "The start-of-term banquet will begin shortly, but before you take your seats in the Great Hall, you will be sorted into your houses. The Sorting is a very important ceremony because, while you are here, your house will be something like your family within Hogwarts. You will have classes with the rest of your house, sleep in your house dormitory, and spend free time in your house common room. The four houses are called Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin. Each house has its own noble history and each has produced outstanding witches and wizards. While you are Hogwarts, your triumphs will earn your house points, while any rule-breaking will lose house points. At the end of the year, the house with the most points is awarded the House Cup, a great honor. I hope each of you will be a credit to whichever house becomes yours. The Sorting Ceremony will take place in a few minutes in front of the rest of the school. I suggest you all smarten yourselves up as much as you can while you are waiting. I shall return when we are ready for you. Please wait quietly." The professor nodded her head goodbye as she left the room, and the first years began chatting quietly amongst themselves.
Susanna was growing hopeful at the professor's words. Back at the Angel Care Orphanage, she did not have a single friend, always being picked on, made fun of, humiliated, and sometimes hit. She was hoping Hogwarts would give her a new start, with some great, loyal friends.
"How exactly do they sort us into houses?" Susanna heard the black-haired, glasses boy ask Ron nearby. Susanna was wondering the exact same thing, as she thought any other first year did.
"Some sort of test, I think," Ron answered to Harry. "Fred said it hurts a lot, but I think he was joking." Susanna was really hoping it was a joke, but she was not looking forward to being in front of a large group since she was sure she would do something to embarrass herself on the first night of school.
"It's true then," a commanding voice sounded loudly throughout the chamber, causing everyone to stop talking and turn to the voice. Susanna looked and saw a very pale boy with bleach blond hair that was slicked back and grey eyes staring confidently at the black-haired, glasses boy next to Ron. Susanna could tell he felt superior to others, especially since he had two larger boys behind him. "What they're saying on the train. Harry Potter has come to Hogwarts." Immediately, everyone began whispering about the name. Susanna could see the black-haired boy, who was apparently Harry Potter, fidget around uncomfortably. Susanna was wondering what was so special about him. The blonde boy and his followers walked up to Harry and Ron. "This is Crabbe and Goyle. The name's Malfoy, Draco Malfoy." Ron snickered at the boy, and his face flashed anger at him. "Think my name's funny, do you? No need to ask yours. Red hair and a hand-me-down robe? You must be a Weasley." Ron lowered his head for a little bit before bringing it back up and glaring at Draco. Draco turned confidently back at Harry. "You'll soon find out that some wizarding families are better than others, Potter. You don't want to be making friends with the wrong sort. I can help you there," he explained as he stretched out his hand, ready for Harry to shake it and join his group.
"I think I can tell the wrong sort for myself, thanks," Harry retorted back, standing up for Ron. Draco looked bashed, as if he had never been told 'no' before. Susanna made a mental note to never associate with Draco and his friends. Suddenly, a gasp was heard as the first-years turned to one of the walls to see two pale, pearly-white, transparent ghosts come out. They seemed to be arguing about something before they began talking to the students. Susanna turned away from them, wondering when Professor McGonagall would come back. Her wish came true as the doors opened up again.
"Move along now," McGonagall instructed them as they turned their attention away from the ghosts and to the professor. "The Sorting Ceremony's about to start." Susanna suddenly heard a frog croak and looked down at the professor's feet to see a brown, patterned frog hopping around and croaking.
"Trevor!" a young, excited boy next to Susanna exclaimed as he bent down to pick up the frog. Susanna figured he was the Neville boy Hermione was talking about earlier on the train. The boy looked up to see McGonagall starring him down, and he slowly got back into the group. McGonagall sighed and focused on the other students. "Now, form a line," she started, "and follow me," before smiling at them and walking down the hallway. Susanna fell behind Hermione, but in front of Harry and Ron. The students soon arrived at large, decorated doors and walked into the hall.
Susanna couldn't help but stare at the thousands of candles floating in mid-air with the ceiling looking like the same nighttime sky as outside. Ghosts were coming in and out of the walls. She noticed four, long wooden tables covered with golden plates and goblets, and some of the students already sitting down starring at them hungrily. In the front of the hall was a long table full of adults who Susanna figured were the teachers. In the middle was the famous Albus Dumbledore, and Susanna was surprised she was seeing the famous wizard in person.
"It's not real, the ceiling," Hermione explained to Susanna as they continued walking toward the front. "It's just bewitched to look like the night outside. I read about it in Hogwarts, A History." The students stopped in the front as McGonagall walked up the platform to a worn, wooden stool in the center with a very worn, dirty, and dusty hat on top. Susanna was wondering what was special about the hat as it began twitching. She became worried it was another form of communication from the Ministry of Magic as its eyes and mouth formed. She was very surprised when it began to sing. It began singing about all four of the houses and qualities of each. Once it was done, Susanna had no idea what house she belonged in. But, once she heard Ron mention something about dark wizards from Slytherin, she knew she did not want to be in that house.
Susanna watched as McGonagall lifted up the hat with one hand and another one on a scroll. She turned to address the first years, and Susanna was becoming more and more nervous. "When I call your name, you will put on the hat and sit on the stool to be sorted." Susanna zoned out as the first few students were sorted, trying to figure out what house she could possibly fit in.
"Gates, Susanna!" Professor McGonagall shouted throughout the hall, forcing Susanna to come back to reality. She took a very, very deep breath and slowly made her way up to the stool. She slid her feet around and faced the students, who all seemed to be watching her were wondering eyes as she sat down on the stool. She recognized the rest of the red-headed boys in the Gryffindor table as the hat sat on her head.
"Um, interesting, never had a Gates here before, I sense potential for greatness and a hidden, deep, great power is sleeping within you. You seem to want friends and would be very loyal to them. Now, where to put you?" the Sorting Hat whispered to Susanna. Her sorting seemed to take longer than others since she had seen some sorted as soon as the hat was put on her head. She was growing more and more nervous, seeing everyone watch her. She wanted to help out the hat, but had no idea what to think. "This is interesting; I've never had such a problem sorting before. You possess qualities of every house equally. I want to make this right. You are an interesting girl." Susanna felt herself close her eyes, thinking she wished she had made a decision earlier. "I know…"
"GRYFFINDOR!" the hat shouted to the entire student body. Susanna sighed as the Gryffindor table erupted in cheers and excitement at the new member. Susanna quickly hopped off the stool and made her way to an empty seat, ready to watch the rest of the sortings.
She was happy when Hermione was also sorted into Gryffindor, and the bushy-haired girl settled between Susanna and the oldest red-headed boy. Susanna noticed the hush and whispers the students made when Harry Potter was called to be sorted, still wondering what was so different about him. The Sorting Hat seemed to take longer on him too, but he also decided on Gryffindor. Ron's sorting took no time at all, landing in Gryffindor, and soon the ceremony was over. Susanna was very hungry when she saw Dumbledore stand on his feet. She knew even though he was older, he still had powerful strength in him. A large, happy smile grew across his wrinkled face.
"Welcome! Welcome to a new year at Hogwarts!" he beamed and shouted to the students. "Before we begin our banquet, I would like to say a few words. And here they are: Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Tweak! Thank you!" He sat down as the students clapped and cheered. Susanna was confused at his 'speech' but figured it was something Dumbledore did. Suddenly, all types of food and desert appeared in front of the students, and Susanna's jaw dropped in hunger. She had never had as many choices of what to eat as she did now, since Mrs. Forester would usually give her the leftovers. She took some bits and pieces but made sure not to overeat.
All through the dinner, Susanna heard bits and pieces of conversation. No one directly talked to her, except for Hermione when she was talking about some of Hogwarts' history, her excitement for the classes, and the food selection. She was surprised to hear from some that either one or none of their parents were wizards and witches. Susanna began wondering what her parents were, or if she got lucky and just got the drop of magic. She almost jumped out of her seat when the Gryffindor house ghost Nearly Headless Nick appeared in the middle of the food. After proving to Hermione he was nearly headless, which was something Susanna wished she had not seen, she had no appetite to eat anything else. Soon, the puddings disappeared and Dumbledore stood on his feet. The entire hall became silent as everyone turned to him.
"Ahem, just a few more words now we are all fed and watered," the headmaster began again. "I have a few start-of-term notices to give you. First-years should note that the forest in the grounds in forbidden to all pupils. And a few of our older students would do well to remember that as well." Susanna noticed his eyes glanced in the Gryffindor direction, and she slightly turned to see they were looking at Ron's twin brothers, who had mischievous looks on their face. "I have also been asked by Mr. Filch, the caretaker, to remind you all that no magic should be used between classes in the corridors. Quidditch trials will be held in the second week of the term. Anyone interested in playing for their house teams should contact Madame Hooch. And finally, I must tell you that this year; the third-floor corridor on the right-hand side is out of bounds to everyone who does not wish to die a very painful death." The school's excited tone seemed to lower a bit after his last statement, when Dumbledore's face was serious to prove he was not joking. "And now, before we go to bed, let us sing the school song. Everyone pick their favorite tune, and off we go!"
Susanna tried hard not to laugh as everyone sang the song in different tunes, speed, keys, and pitches. She was secretly glad she had the excuse of being a first year and not knowing the words to avoid singing along. Soon, everyone was done and Dumbledore sent them off to bed. She joined Hermione as they followed a prefect named Percy, who Susanna knew was a Weasley from King's Cross Station. They walked up the stairs to the very top, and Susanna couldn't help but stare at the moving stairs and portraits that were moving like the photographs in The Leaky Cauldron. Soon, the prefect stopped at a door-sized portrait of a lady in a fancy, silk pink dress. She turned to them in a stern voice.
"Password?" the portrait asked Percy.
"Caput Draconis," Percy told the portrait and the door slowly swung open. The first-years hurried in the common room filled with red and gold patterns on the walls. Lots of couches, tables, loveseats, and chairs were stationed around the room. Susanna noticed a lonely loveseat next to the warm fireplace, and she could easily picture herself sitting there wrapped up in a book. Hermione nudged her again, alerting Susanna that Percy was telling them to go to the dormitories. So, she followed Hermione up the marble steps and through a wooden door. The room was large with five four-poster beds in a circle around a heater. The sheets and curtains were deep red velvet with golden yellow stitching. Susanna found her suitcases and backpack on a bed next to a window with a little ledge to sit on at night.
The new first year girls, Lavender Brown, Parvati Patil, Fay Dunbar, Hermione Granger, and Susanna Gates took turns using the bathroom to change into their pajamas. Susanna quickly changed into gray capris and a sweatshirt and settled on the ledge in front of the window. Since she went first, Susanna took out her journal from the backpack and began writing in it, wanting to remember everything that had and would happen to her.
"Susanna, why did your sorting take longer? Mine was very quick," Hermione asked Susanna when she came out of the bathroom.
"I don't know, the hat said I possessed qualities from every house, and it was not as clear on where I should go," Susanna answered, dwelling on the hat's words.
"Interesting, I would explore it further but I'm too tired," Hermione replied. "But, I'm glad you're in Gryffindor, hopefully we'll become great friends." Hermione gave Susanna a quick, bright smile before climbing into her bed and falling asleep. The other three girls also fell asleep, but Susanna stayed on the ledge, starring at the Black Lake and writing in the journal.
What did he mean by a great, untouched power sleeping within me? Susanna thought as she wrote it down in her diary. She figured it was probably just something little and continued writing. She heard something flapping around outside and saw a snow white dove flying around in the black sky. It turned its head and seemed to wink at Susanna before quickly flying away. Magic will definitely take some getting used to, Susanna finished writing and placed the journal underneath her pillow. She gently climbed into the bed and laid her head down, hoping for a peaceful sleep.
Glad you made it down here! Hopefully it was okay! I hope I'm showing Susanna's personality and behavior correctly.
I'm just going to go ahead and tell you that even though she's become friends with Hermione, it does not mean it's just going to be a repeat of the books with an extra character. She won't be that involved yet, she'll be involved in different ways.
I'd like to thank my cousin who is now my consultant for this story, and she's helped me with ideas and questions! Well, that's all I have to say, except please click on the review button and tell me what you thought since I haven't gotten any reviews for the last two chapters! Well, see you on whatever I update next!