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BB's offiacal torturer2010-02-10 . chapter 1

I get Vic being a doctor...Could you make BB be in the mental institue?

Me: Thank you! I laughed so hard ;D

Emily Snow12 2010-02-09 . chapter 1

Nice introduction! Can't wait for more! ;-)keep Writing!

Me: I will keep writing.

Beijiou Lenova 2010-02-07 . chapter 1

Please write more! There was such a good set up in the intro! It was fantastic in a very awesome way.~Beia

ME: Thanks, you were the first reviewer for this story.


I paced my room. Did it have to be so… utterly boring in here? You weren't even allowed to have books! Did they think I'd go insane and commit suicide with a damn book?!

I'd been here a total of 2 hours and 28 minutes. The dull blue clock on the wall kept going, tick tock. It was really annoying, especially when your in a really, really quiet room.

It was all I heard. Other than the screams of other insane people.

God I hope when it comes to visitor time my family doesn't come. I would be in a lot of shit if they did. Then I would be sent to Dr. Stone… again. He wanted me to call him Victor, so I do. But most the time I call him Dr. Stone or Dr. V.

My sessions were on Thursdays. He would always give 28 extra minutes. My favorite number.

"LUNCH!!"

That must be one of the nurses. I heard walking in the hall, my door was opened. "Ms. Roth, it's lunch time." I turned to the nurse. "I am Dr. Lenoir. I am your doctor, I hand out your pills." Oh great, just what I need, another person who thinks I could commit suicide any moment!

Lets give her pills so she can leave us alone!

I sigh and shuffle into the room that she points out. It's a large room, a soft blue color for the walls. Posters were all over the wall.

As I walked in I studied the people here.

A young man sat at a table by himself, eating his food while writing on a piece of paper. He had black hair, spiked, and sparkling blue eyes. They were beautiful.

A girl sat at the same table. She was chatting with him. She had emerald green eyes and red hair. She was skinny and I guess beautiful.

Another boy sat at a table. He had silver eyes, that were very pretty and sandy brown hair. He looked like he wanted to sit alone.

Those were the only people that caught my eye. I sat at the table with the girl and blue eyed boy. The girl turned to look at me and she stopped her eyes widening, as did the boys.

Now I know why they reacted that way, I had decided to cut my face up before I died. I wasn't really left alone at school. They would talk about me at school. A boy named Malcolm had asked me out.

I agreed. When we were at our made it to our one month anniversary I found that he was going out with another girl. I found him occupying himself with her. After that when he tried to explain he told me he only went out with me because of my pretty face.

When I got home, heartbroken, I ran to my room grabbing a pair of scissors and cut my face in several places. That is what sent me to Victor.

"Hi I am Kori! What happened to you? Will you be my friend?" She was smiling at me. "I guess. My name is Gem. I don't want to talk about it." My face probably scrunched up.

"Hi, my name is Richard Grayson. Sorry bout Kori. She really is a nice person" I snickered. He so liked her. I shook his hand.

One of the nurses came over and I flushed lightly.

"Ms. Roth, Ms. Anders, I need to make sure you 2 eat your meals." Did I mention I also had an eating disorder? Guess not. But did Kori have an eating disorder too?

"Oh I am not really hungry right now…" She said innocently and I sighed. I looked directly at the nurse.

"I am not going to eat because I am not hungry. I will eat lunch though." I got up from the table and left the room not wanting to meet the looks from my new friends. I closed the door to my room.

I was missing Finals!

Great. Just when I was going to get out of the hellish mess I was in!

At least they could only keep me here for 48 hours. Just 2 days.

No sweat!