Here goes nothing. I present to you chapter 4.
Ares stormed out of the building and down the streets of the heavenly city. All the beings that were there quickly cleared a path before the God of War not wanting to get burned or most likely killed. Ares finally made it to his house and stormed into the room where he worked out and unleashed all his anger and rage. That wasn't a very bright idea because in a matter of moments everthing was broken into pieces and somethings were set on fire. All of Olympus heard his yell and at the moment Ares really didnt care. After letting everything go Ares walked into his bedroom and sat down on his bed. The room was his alright. Everything was either crimson red or black. Ares looked down at his hands and saw the nail marks and trails of blood. He knew he probably should wash up but refused and just punched a hole in the wall and decided to take a nap. He placed his hands behind his head and stared up at the ceiling and his thoughts were,
'Fine take Athena instead! She's your favorite child, right old man? See if I give a freaking crap! I hope you all fail and come home injured and tell everyone to get ready for a fight because you let the sorcerer escape! If you ask me to help after this I ain't gonna no matter what, unless you get down on your knees and beg me to! Ha! Come on old man let your precious daughter get hurt I don't care!'
As soon as Ares closed his eyes suddenly a vision of Athena lying on a bed wearing her armor flashed into Ares' mind. Athena was knocked unconscious and had bruises and cuts along with a large cut that ran from her right shoulder to her elbow and all the cuts were bleeding quickly. His heart hurt for a split second and he briefly felt the feeling of worry. Ares' eyes snapped open and he said,
"What the hell was that!" He decided to ignore it and drifted off to dream land.
Somewhere else there were three old women commonly known as the fates Past, Present and Future.
"It has begun," said Present.
"Feelings build up with time," added Past.
"And now it's time to teach an important lesson," said Future while all three fates sat around a floating crystal ball.
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