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Gotta luv Tobias

Someone the World Forgot

Okay, okay, I'll get on with the story.

Last time on High School, Undetected

I stepped off the plane with Tobias, he was looking slightly green because of the plane ride and his fear of heights. He gave me a weak smile and went over to grab both of our bags. The guys suspiciously suggested that we go out exploring and shopping and that they would take care of all our bags and getting into the cabin. The girls and I got into one taxi and the guys got into the other. Shopping should be a lot of fun.


Tris POV

I sprinted out of the car and dramatically flopped onto the bed in the girls' room. Never again will I go shopping with all three girls. It was torture. They seemed to have a plan to get me to buy as much clothes as possible. They took me in practically every store and I tried at least fifteen outfits on. Christina walked in the room carrying at least five fully stuffed bags from various stores. She carefully put them on the bed and proceeded to look at me with a wicked smile on her face.

"You know, you do have to wear it. I bought it, and you WILL wear it." I rolled my eyes and groaned, shoving a pillow in my face. "C'mon! You have to unpack!"

"Fine," I mumbled. The room the girls will be staying in has two queen sized beds. I'm sharing with Christina and Shauna and Marlene will share one. I'm assuming it's the same in the boy's room. Probably Uri and Zeke (They are brothers) sharing with Tobias and Will sharing. I look around for my duffel bag, I want to start unpacking my stuff. I glance around, unable to locate it.

"Christina!" I shouted.

"Yeah?"

"Do you have my bag?" I asked.

"No, as a matter of fact I can't find mine. Marlene! Shauna! Do you have your bags?"

" I can't find mine either," they both chorused.

"Ugh! All my precious clothes!" Christina said, throwing her hands up in exasperation.

"Wait, where are the boys? They said that they would put our bags away?" I asked.

Shauna replied,"I don't know, but we should find out." After murmurs of agreement, we walked into the other room and found all them spread out on their beds, checking Twitter feed and Facebook posts.

"Really? You go on vacation and the first thing you do is go on your phones?" Shauna asked.

Zeke looked up sheepishly, "Yepperdoodles!"

"Whatever," Marlene rolled her eyes. "Where did you put our bags?"

Uriah completely avoided the question, "You guys really need to see the lake! It's beautiful!"

We exchanged suspicious glances. I looked at Tobias. He avoided my eyes. Now if that's not suspicious then I don't know what is. I followed Uriah and Marlene outside, while the rest of the gang followed me. The lake is beautiful! I thought sarcastically. We are in a cove that's practically empty!. Across the lake is a pretty large forest.

Christina started screaming then. "No! What did you guys do?" I followed her eyes and saw her gaze on a spot at the end of the cove. On a small, tedious, handmade raft was all of our bags. I mean LOTS of bags, Christina was NOT a light packer. I turned around and glared at Tobias. This was not going to be fun. The girls and I ran down to the dock. We saw a fairly new boat waiting for us.

"Does anyone have their boating license?" asked Shauna, who had somehow managed to stay calm despite the fact that all our precious luggage was floating precariously in the middle of a lake.

"I know Four does," said Marlene.

I spoke quietly, "I do." They all turn around and look at me, astonished.

"Seriously?" asked Christina.

"Well, it does make the most sense," said Shauna.

"But really! She's the famous singer, amazing softball player AND she has a boating license?" Christina yelled. "Is there anything else you have been keeping from us?" she asked suspiciously.

"I guess you'll have to wait and see." I said, thinking of many other things that she may find interesting. "But I do speak 4 other languages." I hopped into the boat and settled in the driver's seat before they could say anything else. I flicked my wrist, "Shauna, you're with me, Christina and Marlene, wait here and make sure the boys don't try anything else."

As soon as Shauna stepped in I pulled out of the boat slip. I started down the cove, giving Shauna instructions while driving.

"There should be a pole in the middle compartment on the floor. Pick that up and extend the hook to get the raft. Carefully pull it in. While you're doing that I'm going to pick up the rope and tie it to the raft. Hold on to the rope while I slowly drive us back. Warn me if it starts to tip. It's just like spotting for a tuber." Shauna processed the information and when we stopped the boat she began to execute the plan. We did it perfectly, well minus the one time that it almost tipped over, and I could hear Christina scream.

Four POV (From when the girls were down at the dock)

This should be fun. I can't wait to make the girls beg for me to take them out on the boat to get their luggage. I doubt any of them have their boating license. I see Christina and Marlene walking up the path to the deck where we are standing after conferring with Tris and Shauna. Dang. I wanted to make Tris beg. She must be to proud to do it. Ha! I'm going to make her. They walk up and completely ignore us, but stand by the railing. Before I can make some rude comment, I hear the engine of the boat start up. No way. It's not possible. But I see the familiar blonde ponytail flying in the wind, and nimble fingers gripping the wheel. She's amazing. I can't believe how lucky I am to be able to call her mine. She drives the boat flawlessly to the location of the raft. Shauna stands up and grabs the pole. Wow, Tris must drive a lot to think of using the pole. While Shauna was getting the raft Tris grabbed some rope and tied it to the raft and on the pole where the tube rope attaches to. She's creative too. I watched them pull it back while holding my breath. There was only one moment that it started to wobble. Lucky for them, Shauna spotted it and Tris maneuvered the boat to avoid it. I was almost deafened when Christina began screaming in terror for her precious designer luggage. Well, the majority of the suitcases on the raft were hers. There were seven suitcases. Tris and Marlene had medium sized suitcases in the middle. Uriah and I decided that it was only fair that the light packers had their few possessions the safest. Shauna had two smallish ones and Christina had three large ones.

Tris carefully parked the boat in the slip. I heard the rumble of the boat lift and after a few moments saw the two girls hiking up the stairs.

"High five!" shouted Tris.

"Jellyfish!" they shouted together. "Not you, Uri," she said. "You were one of the people who caused this."

"Your bags are down there, Chris," said Shauna reassuringly to a shaking Christina. Tris caught my eye and smirked. She must've figured out the plan. What can I say, she's smart too.

"You guys are going to pay for this!" Marlene said.

"PRANK WAR!" shouted Uriah.

Marlene and Christina joined Tris and Shauna and the four girls walked back down the stairs together to get their bags, whispering as they went. No doubt they were planning their revenge. This should be an interesting vacation.


There you go! Finally, a chapter. Thanks for staying with the story guys, even when I only update once a month. I'm going to try to update a few more times before winter break is over.

The cabin and boat is based off my family's lake house. Sorry if it's not what you pictured.

I got an iMac Pro for Christmas! I'm so happy! It's so much easier to type on! Because the '''' key isn't stuck. (Last chapter if you're confused.)

Shoutout to my editor, FourFearsForever (Formerly known as HazelandAugustusForever) You don't have to read terrible writing. (It is so true)

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(Sorry for rambling)

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