Ephesians 1:7: in him we have redemption, and the forgiveness of sins by his blood, part 3.


I own neither Ben 10 nor Generator Rex they belong to man of action.

I don't own any characters not from other companies; I may alter characters from real life, fictional universe, and what I think they need.

Need help with Batwoman Beyond.

Author notes: Characters with extremely large amount of version of themselves won't make so several difference appearances of them selves so that means Avengers, X-men, Spider-man, Justice league, Superman, Batman, TMNT aren't going to make it, because I can't think of a reason for one version of them over another, Hell-boy, and Kick-ass may make a few appearances in this story if I learn more about them, may mention videos games characters but may not use them.

This story happens after Generator Rex Finale, and Ultimate Alien finale, while Omniverse never ever happen.

I'll do the third person POV: start here

This story may or may not have some supernatural and quantum leap parts in it, not in this chapter.

This chapter has mention to a suicide attempt and language don't like skim though it. I personal don't think damn or Hell should be consider a bad word it in the Bible for crying out loud.


Review:

JulyvsDaniel9/18/13 . chapter 1

so far it seems good but is that Lucifer talking? as in, from Supernatural? why would he want to save the universe? either way, if you haven't decided on a main enemy, you should do someone that each of the heroes has fought against. For CharmCaster, it could be Darkstar, for Albedo Vilgax, for Breach Van Kleiss, and for NoFace, I have no idea. Maybe the alpha nanite. that would suck for everyone. Vilgax could be the brains or you could have an extra really evil villain(Evil in whatever s/he comes from) help them until near the end when he is revealed as the actual leader of the bad guys. sorry I don't have many helpful ideas. I'm still trying to come up with some. also, constructive criticism, there were several grammar/spelling errors. Not enough to take away from the story but just so you know:

No that is not Lucifer talking, yes there will be Supernatural characters and Lucifer may appear later, Darkstar will be in the story a real important role as will Van Klesis, Vilgax will appear he serve a deferent role, and Albedo will be furious, The alpha nanites may appear.

JulyvsDaniel9/19/13 . chapter 2

not bad. Still some grammar issues but nothing major. Also, I think it feels a little rushed. Everyone tells me the same thing so don't feel bad but I'll give you the same advice I get. Explain what happens as if you were trying to explain a movie to the blind in agonizing detail. For example. If there's a red couch that's really important, describe the red couch so thoroughly that when you reread it you ALMOST get annoyed at how much its described. Obviously you won't really need to do this for a couch but like the area where things ended you could describe what it looked like and how Breach felt seeing it. And you could describe how NoFace feels to have his power back. Stuff like that. Good story so far though:

I understand I will try to improve on it, add detail thank for your review and the time out of your day to read it.

Summary: Three entities must collect a team of super powers team, and use their talents to the Omniverse, but with a team with members like Albedo, No Face, Charm-Caster, and Breach. Idea with help with Gunman.

Get the aliens.


Raphael POV:

Raphael was furious, he couldn't believe [censored] sent him to Earth number 122705 He was to a find an alien, to him humans are bad enough aliens nothing more than very smarts bugs compare to the humans, and to top it off a criminal one at that, and he was force to find a Mana witch well. Yeah he so wasn't happy.

He decide to start with the one Raphael thought had a higher intelligent * and go with the Galvan turn human.

Raphael read Albedo's origin on a floating screen he made appear before him: He (Albedo) was a brilliant young Galvan scientist, Azmuth's personal assistant. He had a good life, his childhood was pretty dark; neglectful (and sometimes) abusive parents, until he was discover and was raise by Azmuth. That was until Albedo discovered that a mere 'human' had the Omnitrix and its power. He succeeded in making one of his own so the human wouldn't have the only one in the universe. But it keeps the original Omnitrix default mode so he was force into the form of the owner of the original Omnitrix. He was then exiled from his home planet of Galvan Prime and is now stuck on this Earth.

After reading about Albedo's origin, Raphael actually felt sorry for him. He was thinking that all Albedo did was make sure a great powers and the fates of millions species Managed to at least survive in the overconfident hands of a human, an adolescent one, and an immature one at that.

Well might as well teleport to wherever on this miserable rock this guy is.


(Skip to a random rooftop):

There is a teenage with albino hair wearing a red and white jacket, white t-shirt, some grey jeans, with a red device on his arm that reached half his left forearm with an hourglass symbol on it.

His arm and his body was making a cross like pattern and wasn't for worship of the Lord almighty. He was about to jump off an 18 story building.

The young boy was yelling at the sky, "AZMUTH, YOU BETTER BE WATCHING! THIS IS YOUR DOING! I GIVE UP YOU WIN! IF YOU DON'T WANT ME TO USE THE ULTIMATRIX, FINE I WON'T! IT IS CRYSTAL CLEAR ALL THOSE YEARS I SPENT WITH YOU MEANT NOTHING! HOW WITHOUT MYAXX OR I YOU WOULD NEVER HAVE EVEN CREATED THE DAMN OMNITRIX IN THE FIRST PLACE! O.K. YOU INGRATE! THE UNIVERSE, GALVAN PRIME, AND THIS PRISON KNOW AS EARTH IS ABOUT TO DIE, AND YOU CAN'T EVEN GET SOMEONE WHO KNOWS HOW TO USE THE OMNITRIX CORRECTLY! YOU WANT ME TO BE REMOVED OF MY GALVAN PRIDE!" The white hair boy started getting tearing eyes, "THAT WAS YOUR CHOICE! IF YOU WANT ME TO BE A DAMN HUMAN TIL I DIE I NO LONGER HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THAT! I'LL JUST SPEED THINGS UP!" He said out loud.

Right as he was about to jump off the roof of the building, Raphael grab his shoulder and teleported him 5 feet away from the ledge Albedo tried to leap from, just enough space for him to grab him again.

"WHO IN THE UNIVERSE ARE YOU?" Albedo yells.

"My name is Raphael; I am an angel of the lord." The angel said.

"You know what I really don't care, I will not let you stop me from ending my miserable existence again." He yells angrily, he try to run again. Raphael just held on to his upper right arm.

"I can't allow that to happen." Raphael said, keeping his grip on Albedo's arm this time only a little stronger.

"WHY ARE YOU SO OBSESSED WITH ME, AND TRYING TO STOP MY FROM ENDING MY MISERABLE LIFE." He said kicking Raphael. Raphael wasn't even stun.

"I'm not obsessed; I'm just following my orders." Raphael said.

"Don't tell me you're a plumber aren't you." The teen said.

"A plumber, what in the world is that? Oh you mean this universe version of 'the Men in Black'."* Raphael said.

"I have no idea what you're talking about, JUST LEAVE ME ALONE SO I CAN END MY PAIN." The boy said with tears in his eyes.

Albedo Manages to get out of Raphael grip. He took a look at his Ultimatrix then at the edge of the roof. He couldn't fight and end his life he had to make a choice.

"Why are you obsessed with me not dying the planet, and from what I can tell from Plumber radio; the entire galaxy is being destroy but why are you wasting your time with me." The boy asked, still looking between the watch and the edge.

"I need you, to stop the Omniverse from being destroyed." Raphael explains.

"Why did you choose me, I'm not a hero." The teen said.

"A hero is someone willing to fight for what they believing." Raphael said.

"The reason I fight is because I'm a freak, I can even use the Ultimatrix to make me a Galvan again." Albedo said, getting teary eye.

"You manage to make your own Omnitrix an attempt only one other did before hand." Raphael said.

"Big deal, all I can do is using it to steal food and run away, I never thought if I such power for so primal and awful reason." Albedo said, teary eyes,

"If you can use it for a good cause would you." Raphael asked.

"I would but all I would like in the universe is to have my Galvan Pride back." Albedo said.

"If I could make it where you could be a Galvan for a limited amount of time regularly, would you be willing to help me?" Raphael asked.

"Yes, I would." The white hair boy said.

"If you would let me help you, I can make things right for you." Raphael said.

Albedo nodded, as he took Raphael hand, and while Raphael teleported him to where [censored] what Ezekiel and him wanted the heroes to go for the time being.


Outside of Hex liar:

Raphael was outside of Hex's liar, the outside the castle either have weird plants creature or was barren. Luckily the plants were on a no angel's diet.

Raphael was reading what he can about Charmcaster: she was born as Hope. She was born in an dimension of Magic being held together by something call Mana. From her birth her life was a miserable, her birth kill her mother. Some warlock killed her father and she was force to live with her abusive uncle where she got the name Charmcaster. She was force to live the life a criminal and even after she lost her uncle she had to go back to crime because she didn't know how to live any other that she could live. She eventually Manage to get back to her home dimension, and defeat the warlord (/warlock named Adwaita) of her dimension. She went mad again after that, went out of her way to bring her father back only for it to fail and destroying her dimension in the process. She eventually found her way back to the dimension her Uncle raises her in, she eventually found a boy name Michael Morningstar (his name right there is an Oxymoron). She fell deeply in love with him he though abusive and only use her for her powers. She was last seen with teary eyes holding Michael helmet. She is mad because no control over her mind nor her power, she just a juggernaut of her own power and this universe Mana, now her Mana had been altered by Black magic and the Mana had taken control of her.

Raphael knew he had to make her sane and make her well in the head, and with luck she will see the error of her ways.

Raphael knew she wouldn't be easy to reason with, he also knew she came back her every other day to get food and to spend some of the night to rest.

Raphael kindly got (threw) Hex out of the house. Raphael knew he was in for a fight; the real Challenge would be to fight her and win without killing her.

He can easily fix her mind, but not if the Mana and her are one because he unable to mess with an individual free will. Due to how much the Mana affect her, it starting to become part of her, but if we remove some of it he can help get her mind right.

He got hit with a Mana blast, he wasn't he even faze.

He saw A white hair female early twenties she wearing wears a purple dress with a pink ribbon around her waist and a black crown on her head, wearing finger-less gloves on her hands, and on her feet her pants, and boots merge keeping Raphael from telling where her shoes begins and her pants ends, not that he care. *

"WHO IN THE HELL ARE YOU?" Charmcaster said.

"My name is Raphael; I am an angel of the lord." The angel said.

"LEAVE ME ALONE, THIS IS MY HOME." Charmcaster said.

"I'm afraid I can't do that." The angel said.

"YOU WILL DIE." She yells, with any luck his plan to save her will work.

"Your right maybe, I might someday but not today." He said dodging one of Charmcaster Mana blast.

"COME ON SLIM BALL HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT." The Mana craze young female said.

"Charmcaster, why are you letting the Mana take control of you?" The angel asked.

"I AM NOT UNDER ANYONE OR ANY THING CONTROL, I AM IN FULL CONTROL." She yell, clearly she doesn't understand what going on.

She hit Raphael with two walls of Mana; Raphael in-between the walls of Mana, he was trap. Charmcaster is using more of her Mana to increase the power and the strength of her walls.

Raphael hit the walls of Charmcaster Mana creation, with enough force that it destroys Charmcaster Mana walls.

This made Charmcaster dizzy and she was barely able standing up.

"Hope you need to listen to me." I told her, she look at me with both angry and fear in her tired eyes.

She shutters the following sentence, "Pl-pl-please he-help me." #

"Hope you got to fight this evil that taken over you, if you don't fight it, I can't free you." He said.

She looks at me like she was a child looking at a fire fighter while in burning building. She saw him as a hero.

She uses every ounce of willpower she could get to, to use all her unneeded Mana. It levels everything (except him and her) in a 3 square mile area.

She fell down, she slowly got back on her feet, and said "Thank you Raphael was it?"

"Yes it was." He told the young female.

"I don't know how I could possibility repay you for saving me." She said.

"A couple of things the first thing no more Black magic, that stuff will end you." Raphael asked/warned.

"I understand what else." She asked.

Raphael then told Charmcaster, "The other thing I wanted is your help."

The young witch asked, "How can I help you?"

"Come with me and a good friend of my can answer most of your answer." Raphael told her.

He took her hand and brought her to the place where [censored] told him and Ezekiel to gather a team.


To be continued…

Can anyone figure out what the meaning to these world numbers, Earth number 132013 and Earth number 122705?

* This isn't me saying men are smarter than women; this is me saying Galvan are smarter than humans.

*I don't own men in black.

*yes I did use wiki/Hope to help me describe her.

Repeat Omniverse never happen.

PS I think Charmcaster should be consider an alien.