Ephesians 1:7 in him we have redemption, and the forgiveness of sins by his blood, part 4.


I own neither Ben 10 nor Generator Rex they belong to man of action.

I don't own any characters not from other companies; I may alter characters from real life, fictional universe, and what I think they need.

Need help with Batwoman Beyond.

There is a quantum leap element in the story anyone that seen the show known what it is.

Author notes: Characters with extremely large amount of version of themselves won't appear so that means Avengers, X-men, Spider-man, Justice league, Superman, Batman, TMNT aren't going to make it, because I can't think of a reason for one version of them over another, Hell-boy, and Kick-ass may appear if I learn more about them, may mention videos games characters but may not use them.

Chuck is God.

This story happens after Generator Rex Finale, and Ultimate Alien finale, while Omniverse never ever happen.

I'll do the third person POV: start here

I'm decide against having Alien beast in this story but requesting a story

This story may or may not have some supernatural and quantum leap parts in it, not in this chapter.

I'm going to go for supernatural meet any sci-fi TV show ever made vibe.


Review:

hi. sorry it took so long to review I wanted to make sure I could write a good one.
Let's begin...
I've said it once and I'll say it again. This is rather an original idea, but because of that I don't really have much to compare it to.
overall its going well and the fight scenes are playing out nicely. as far as rushing goes I think you need to slow down and leave a bit more room for characterization.
I'm getting curious about the brothers. They are very strong but we still have no idea where they came from or what their true motivations are. And I look forewords to finding out.
if I could make one suggestion it would be to make sure when they all meet one another that you let them divide into little subgroups based on who would actually get along, kind of like how people gravitate towards others like themselves. Then slowly have them all learn to work together as a whole and accept one another even if they're different.
But it's just an suggestion and you can completely ignore it if you want.
overall I can't wait to see where you take this story :)

It ok, you take your time, I personally prefer it when Author take their time and think about what they want to tell me. Thanks I really just love the idea of characters with terrible past, and them getting (or being force) to redeem themselves. Any supernatural fan knows about the first one, and most of us are learning about the second one. Raphael motive aren't pure, and what are Ezekiel motive even I don't know. I try to work the actions scene out better. I try to get subgroup, but other than Breach most of them would prefer to be left alone, maybe groups of two, until they learn to get along with each other:

Let's see what similarly and differences are there between them, Noface was a general, Breach is a follower, Albedo is a rebel, and Charmcaster is a loose cannon.

NoFace and Albedo neither one like being human, Breach and Charmcaster prefer messing with people. Charmcaster and NoFace both prefer getting minions to work for them over one on one, Breach and Albedo both are willing to get other to fight for them but they prefer working alone, unless they can find gain in an alliance with another.


Ezekiel and Raphael HQ:

Ezekiel brought the EVOs, to their library hideout, and Raphael brought the aliens.

The aliens and EVOs all look at each other with a look of fear under a persona of false angry, and confidence.

The four-armed grey female known as Breach said, "Ezekiel what do these four people have to do with the world destruction."

Ezekiel then said, "Breach these nice people will help you stop your Earth from being destroyed."

"How would we save the Earth, everyone here look like the type that would start this problem in the first place?" She asked.

"I don't see why the Earth is so important." The white hair teen known as Albedo said.

"Hey if the Earth goes so do you." The scarlet skinned EVO that name is NoFace growl.

"Please I know of at-least 12 plumber ships I could easily high jack to get off this miserable rock." The alien said.

The white hair sorceress Hope codename Charm caster then said, "If you do mine if I take a few weapons to trade in a black market."

Albedo then said, "I really don't care, either way I'm getting away from this wasteland of the planet."

Breach then yells, "Wait what a plumber ship? Can you please explain what is going on?"

The Albino hair teen then said, "OK it a long story that isn't easy to explain."

Breach then said, "Well I think getting some names would be a good start, as Ezekiel said, my name is Breach."

The male then said, "Albedo, Albedo of the Galvan."

NoFace then said, "Don't you have a sir name."

"Galvan don't receive sir names." The smaller male said, fallow by this question: "So you have a name?"

"We are NoFace." The faceless male said.

"Who are we?" The teen said.

Charmcaster then said with her fist ball up surrounded by her mana, and venom in her voice, "Why do you have a watch like Tennyson, and look like him?"

Albedo looks towards her with angry, "Don't you dare compare me to that egoistical, moronic, self righteous Homo sapiens known as Benjamin Tennyson."

Breach got in-between the two of them, "Cool it, Albedo and uh…what your name?" they grey skinned teen asked.

"My code name is Charmcaster, but you can call me Hope." She said.

Albedo lowered his arms, but was ready for a fight at any given moment. Albedo looks around at all the books in the library he was teleported into, wondering why he was here.

Breach then said smiling, "Now that we know each other's names let's see if of you guys have any powers, Albedo let's do this alphabetically."

The red jacket clad teen starting to talk, "I have an intellect at which most humans can't even think of performing; along with my own creation the Ultimatrix lets me change form."

Hope then said, "Egotist, well Breach you're up."

"Well, I am an EVO, I can create portals to take me anywhere in the world I want to go, and I am better good in hand to hand, Hope your next." The female EVO said.

"I use to have the ability to use dark magic but gave it up because it was too uncontrollable; I can easily control Mana, and can summon rock golems." The purple clad girl said. "Of red skinned your turn."

"Our powers are super strength, and can teleport through my nanites." NoFace said.

Albedo then said, "Now that we are now, Raphael what is your reason for gathering us."

Raphael said, "Ask the question you really want to ask."

Albedo then asked, "Can you restore my Galvan pride?"

"I can but I won't make it permanent." Raphael said.

"What we have a deal." Albedo said.

"I said I would turn you I didn't say it would be permanent, besides you are worth more to me as a human than Galvin." The angel said.

Albedo was about to attack him. Breach and NoFace grab either of his arms.

"Listen mister Albedo, we don't even know where we are, and I like reading but I'm not going to be lock up again." Breach said.

"Fine what do you want me to do Raphael," Albedo growl.

"We need your help us find and stop who or whatever started this, and stop it." An unknown voice said.

Albedo then said, "Who are you?"

Hope then said, "Does it matter."

Albedo then saw his, and all the other reflection. This was the most surprising discovering yet.


To be continued…

Need a beta and someone to talk to about this.