Hello! A bit disappointed to see no reviews last chapter, but oh well! I had 17 views, maybe get up to 25 now?
Note: This is a re-write of the prologue.
The silvery moon shone upon the sheltered hollow, filling it with a bright glow. Cats, whose fur shined with the light of a hundred stars, milled around the edge of the trees, in amongst the ferns. Two faded spirits were mewing to each other, in the shelter of a gnarled oak tree. There pelts were almost see-through, though they still held their heads high. Anybody could see that they were leaders, and great ones at that.
A ginger tom was the first to speak . He mewed quietly " Hello Bluestar…. Do you understand why we are here?"
The second cat, a large blue/grey she-cat, meowed back " Yes Firestar… I wish I didn't though."
The toms emerald eyes gleamed as he looked up at the moon and mewed back "It is almost time."
Silence lay upon the hollow as a shadow was cast over the moon . Red glowed from under the now ominous orb.
The shadow was a branch from the oak. It tore across the moon like a scar on the face of a cat.
Bluestar gasped and raised her voice so everycat could hear " Cats of StarClan, this is a omen,"
Murmurings broke out upon the tense audience. The words 'What could it mean?' was repeated and swirled into the air until it became a illegible mess.
Bluestar mewed quietly to Firestar " I know what it clans will possibly fall into darkness, far stronger then the Place Of No Stars . They will be Driven Apart."
Ta Da ! Review? Please? Constructive Criticism is welcome!
