I've been thinking about how I presented this story, how the various arcs were going to happen, the main character's personality, and all that.
And I dislike what I wrote in the first chapter, which was disorganized and all that. I'm going to rewrite it... Soon. In about two to three weeks. Hopefully.
Props to The Joining for their constructive critiscm and making me realize what I did wrong, and wolfboy as well for the same. Other reviewers don't worry I appreciate you too for your support.
I do need work on my grammar, thus either PM me on the matter, or leave a quick review. I might publish (the new version) on Spacebattles, but I'm uncertain.
This story may/may not remain up for other people to know about the situation.
The reason why I'm uncertain of Spacebattles is because of the fact that despite the fact that it would be much easier to communicate with new and old readers that will hopefully enjoy it, I will probably get distracted by other projects, or the fact that I'm an avid gamer.
But I'm probably going to do that, thus try and read the chapter of the updated version of this story for more information.
Do not publish ideas in the reviews. PM me please, and I shall decide if that'll be a good idea.
Anyway, see you in (hopefully) three weeks.
