well here is the next chapter and i still don't know completely know where I'm going i have a ending but the middle is not complete i have a plan for another chapter or two so this story may come to a ending soon but i still don't know could take longer then i think to end it or it could take a shorter amount of time, and as always hope you enjoy
Finn woke up and dragged himself into the kitchen Jake was sitting at the table drinking coffee Finn sat across the table from Jake, the beast sat down on the floor "so Finn how was your two weeks with Marceline?" said Jake
"they were good." Said Finn
"so what did you do?"
"well I don't really remember."
"sounds like you were under her control, or something, you feeling ok?"
"yeah and I wasn't under her control or whatever I just don't remember."
"because you were mind controlled and yesterday something happened and you got free."
"nothing happened, I was fine Jake, I just didn't really focus on what we were doing."
"then what were you focused on?"
"her I guess."
"fine then Finn don't tell me, but you should get BP to check if something happened to you."
"ok fine I will see PB if that will make you happy."
"it would make me happy, now I need to go visit Lady and you need to visit PB." Said Jake he stood up and walked out of the kitchen the beast stood up "Finn it's not a good idea to visit the Princess." Said the beast
"Beast it's ok she is just going to talk with me or us for ten minutes and let us go." Said Finn
"no it wont happen like that this time she will find out about me and once that happens you will be put in a cage, then you can say good bye to Jake, to watching the stars with Marceline, to adventuring and to having a real life with a family."
"I know PB she wouldn't do that to me, or us."
"how much would you bet on that?"
"Let's just go Beast I don't want to fight you."
"Fine I wont fight you any more lets just go." Said the Beast the phone started ringing Finn went over and picked it up "hello." Said Finn
"hey it's Marceline, Finn I want to talk as soon as you can, in person." Said Marceline
"yeah ok but I'm just heading out to the candy kingdom, but it should only take a couple of hours and then I'll come over, and we can talk."
"ok Finn but be careful."
"nothing will happen to me."
"talk to you later then." Said Marceline hung up
Finn and the Beast walked to the candy kingdom and in to the castle where Peppermint butler greeted them "hello Finn." he said
"hello peppermint butler, where is Bubble-gum?" asked Finn
"she is in the lab; I will tell her you're coming to talk to her." Said peppermint butler and he ran off
"Thanks talk to you another time then."
"Finn you don't think that was weird at all?" said the Beast
"he is always a bit weird."
"but never this weird, he knows about me and he is telling the princess about me and you will end up in a cage."
"Beast you don't know PB, she wouldn't do that."
"fine think what you want." Said the beast Finn walked into the lab Peppermint was talking with Princess bubble-gum "no I'm sure, we need to do… Hello Finn, I'll let you speak with the princess I need to go do somethings." Peppermint ran out of the lab keeping as far away from Finn as he could "what was that about?" asked Finn
"he is just being him, so Finn what did you want to talk about?" said Princess Bubble-gum
"Jake wanted me see you, because he thinks Marceline did something like mind control me or something."
"why would he think that?"
"because I couldn't remember what I did when I was with her."
"that all, since you're here have you been seeing something or someone out of the ordinary, like something other people don't see?"
"not anything of interest, why?"
"no reason, can I run a couple of tests?"
"what kind of tests?"
"their just to make sure that you're all ok."
"umm… ok then."
"ok then sit in that chair over there." She pointed to a chair it looked like a dentist chair but it had restraints on the arms and for legs, it was coloured gray. Bubble-gum pushed Finn towards it Finn walked over and sat down the beast was yelling "not to do it and to run away and don't look back" as soon as Finn sat down the restraints locked into place "hey what's happening Bubble-gum." Said Finn
"Finn everything is fine; this will just take a couple of seconds." Said Bubble-gum she walked over and started typing on a keyboard and humming and oohing, the beast wasn't anywhere that Finn could see, then something stabbed Finn in the back of the neck, the room blurred and Finn passed out.
Finn jumped up he was in a completely white room there was no door or windows, there was nothing besides the bed that Finn was sitting on, the only light came from a panel in the celling, Finn was wearing a white t-shirt and white pants, the only thing that was a different colour was the beast who was wearing what he usually did the beast glared at Finn "She would never put us into a cage right Finn?" said the beast
"yeah well I guess I was wrong, so instead of being mad and gloating that you were right, do you know how to get out?" aske Finn
"no Finn I don't think we could break through the walls, even if we could who knows what would be on the other side."
"then why didn't you take control before I was knocked out?"
"two reasons, one you said never to do that, two our arms and legs were restrained so I couldn't even do anything, and I would have killed her and everyone else that would have tried to get in our way, and I do mean everyone, so why didn't you listen to me Finn?"
"I already told you."
"come on that wasn't the whole reason Finn."
"even if it's not you should know."
"I do know, but I want to hear you say it Finn."
"what that I trust the wrong people?"
"no Finn the other thing."
"what other thing?"
"you know what I'm talking about and its why you trust her so much."
"what because I known her for so long, that she is the princess of the kingdom, that she is the first one I had a crush on." Finn's face turned red and he looked down at the ground
"that's it Finn the last one, but you till have a little bit of a crush on her now, don't you?"
"if you know everything why ask?"
"I want to hear you say it Finn."
"Fine I do still have a crush on her happy beast happy now?"
"no, I'm still in a cage."
"then any idea on how to get out?"
"wait for long enough."
"great." Said Finn he laid back down on the bed "how did she know about you?" asked Finn
"the butler knew, from the moment we walked in."
"how did peppermint butler know?"
"I'm guessing he can see me, or sense me connected to you."
"ok then, is there anything you can to get us out?"
"sadly no, if I could have we would already be out."
"good point, so we wait." Said Finn then he stared up at the ceiling he didn't know for how long he didn't even know if it was night or day, or how long he was knocked out but a pounding sound started on the far wall, Finn stood up and stared at the wall the sound kept on getting louder, an orange gantlet punched through the wall and then went back the hole was filled by a man with a thick brown beard "why are you here?" he asked
"do I know you?" asked Finn
"you don't remember me? Come on you're the reason I'm here, but you shouldn't have won that fight."
"you're the person that broke my ribs!"
"there you go, so why are you here?"
"long story."
"hey isn't it always a long story, do you want to get out?"
"no thought I would stay here. Of Couse I want to come." Said Finn the man's face disappeared and the gauntlet came through and tore the wall open enough so Finn could fit through Finn followed the man through the hole and out of the prison, they were still in the candy kingdom, it was dark out no moon or stars "this is where we split up, and we're even now." Said the bearded man as he ran away, Finn ran in the opposite direction of him and didn't stop till he heard alarms going off, Finn stopped the alarms were coming from the prison search lights turned on Finn ran to the nearest manhole cover and tore it off, he jumped down into the sewers and took off in a direction, it felt like forever to Finn till he came to the pipe that ran out of the candy kingdom, it didn't help that he got lost more then once and some ways were blocked off by grates. Finn ran out into the woods an kept running till he couldn't see the candy kingdom, Finn sat down ageist a tree "well good thing we didn't kill beard man." Said the beast
"that's not the thing that's on my mind." Said Finn
"I know but, I could have killed him, then where would we been then? Back in that cell as a medical pincushion?"
"PB wouldn't do something like that."
"you sure about that? she tossed us into a cell, something you didn't think she would do, I don't think you know her as well as you do."
"changing topics Where are we going to go?"
"I think from now on we are on our own."
"we aren't completely on our own."
"you want to go to Marceline's house?"
"no she could help us."
"we can't depend on her now, everyone could know about us and be making or they have already made a plan to capture us, and she could be in on it, everyone could be even Jake could be in on the plan."
"Jake wouldn't do that."
"you don't know that for sure do you?"
"we're brothers."
"but me and him are not, and I'm a god of war."
"fine beast what do you want to do?"
"find a cave and hide, for a month at lest come back say you got rid of me."
"think that will work?"
"no, but it will buy us time to think."
"and if someone finds us before we are ready?"
"depending on who it is I will kill them or kidnap them."
"fine I will let you do that, let's find a cave to hide in." said Finn standing up and walked off leaving his life behind so he could try to live without being a pincushion as beast put it, but Finn was sad that he wouldn't see his brother or anyone, would it be worth it he didn't know all he needed was time, so he followed the beast to the mountains and found a cave to stay in.
hello again this is just talking about spelling and grammar and the like so you don't need to read this part if you do then ok if not then ok as well, but I'm trying to fix my grammar I'm reading up on the rule and such it may take a bit till it take affect because English is my first language but i cant write a proper essay to save my life, and as for a beta reader I have been looking to get one but i would try and get one on board at the start of a story so the rest of this one you just have me, and I wouldn't know how it would work out that's all i have to say on that, have a good time till the next chapter I guess
