Hi fanfiction world out there, I hope you are liking the story! I cheek every day on what you guys say about it I have a total of 12 reviews! I know that's not a lot but I love them, and I would like to point out that one of my reviews. They said I should either make the chapters longer or shorter and post faster. I am doing this out of my own time FYI, and I am in high school (10th grade too). The fact that I have over 4,500-word story done (this chapter included) in 12 days I think is good so I will update when I can so you can enjoy my story.

Adrian's POV

All the sound in the room stopped, even the music. I hear a few gasps; I look around the room to see every one looking at the door way. As my eyes lay upon the most beautiful thing I have ever seen, "….. Beautiful" is all I amble to say or do. Be for me now are two girls each in a dress that is so stunning. One girl has brown hair, and her dress is floor length. The color is a dark purple, which complements her sink every nicely. Her hair is up in bun with purple jewels in her hair, the mask that covers her face is the same color as her dress. The mask only covers her eyes, and a bit of her nose too. My eyes try to take in the dress all at the same time, it strapless with the. There is just enough showing to entrance any man in the room, but at the same time enough hidden to let your imagination go wild. The fabric at the top of the dress reaching a cross to her hip, and has a wave type of look to it. On the other side it's doing the same thing, but were the fabric crosses there is a mesh like material that has a vine like design on it. This wraps all the way around what I can see with my eyes at this point in time. But it has a white underneath it, which makes the dark purple stands out so much. But it was the other girl that took my breath away. That dress showed ever line & or curve just right. The top part of her hair is up in a bun like the other one was, but there is still her long hair that dangles down almost to her lower back. Her hair is black almost blue in this light of the ball room, and it has a sine to it. I bet if I was to touch it would be as soft as silk, and if I ran my finger through it there wouldn't be a single tangle in it. Her face is hidden with a mask just over her eyes with a bit of her nose too. All around the mask are sliver vines drawing you in to her blue eyes. As I am forced to tear away my eyes from hers to see the rest of the outfit. Her dress is floor length it leaves her arms bare of any fabric, but goes up around her neck instead. The dress is the darkest color of blue I have ever seen in my life. All across the dress it sparkles under the light in the ball room, as I see this it makes me remember a moonless night sky covered in stars for all to see. I'm so entranced I can't move, all I am able to do is gawk like everyone else in the room. All of this has happened in seconds, but to me it feels like a life time has passed many times over. There is an older man with them, and I just guessing. But by the looks of it he is the girl in purple father, but they bare no resemblance to girl in blue. Her skin is lighter, and she has more of a pale look to it. Her parents must be of different races because she looks Chinese, but European at the same time with her lighter skin. The father and daughter dew oh look Hispanic with no European blood in them, so why is the girl in blue with them. The father and daughter descends the stairs first, and walk straight over to us. The girl in blue is till at the top of the stairs, waiting for them to finish talking to us.

"Ah King Gabriel it's so nice to see you again" as he speaks the room starts to stir up aging, and the dancing continues. Then what he says sinks in.

"Father you know this man?" I ask before their conversation can begin

"Yes Adrian he is a close friend of mine he has traveled with me while I was away looking at the kingdom, Ah so this must be the eldest of you children Alya am I right." The girl in the purple dress now known as Alya blushes

"I am honored that you know my name your majesty, and speak so kindly to me" she then bows after she is done speaking.

"You taught this one well! She is so respectful; Alya this is my son Adrian. I do hope you too can be close friend as me and your father are." After that Alya and her father leave, and I look up to see the girl in the blue dress, descending the stair case now. As she walks I see there are stilts in the dress that come up her upper thigh, and I think that makes her even more attractive. She doesn't want it to show all her leg, and I find that very attractive. When she approaches us she has this look in her eyes that I help, I think I'm falling in love with her at first sight. When she is in front of us she bows very low, and I see that the dress has an open back almost. It meets at the small of her back, and I'm dumb founded. How can one girl look so beautiful? How can I not be able to describe her in word? She defies all law I have in my head.

"It's an honor to meet you my name is Diamond, this ball is magnificent your majesty. I hope my dress is not too over the top nor my friend Alya's." As she speaks there is a light blush that cover her cheeks, and she cast her vison down words.

"No, no your dresses are amazing who made them?" My father may be a king but he is also a fashion designer, his work is sold all over the world. She looks surprised that he asked the question.

"I did your majesty, I also made Alya's dress too. It took me forever to make them because Alya forgot about the ball and didn't tell me about it till one month ago. I had to pull a few all-nighters, but I was able to finish the dresses one week from the ball." My father and I can only look at her will a dumb struck look on are faces. She made the dresses in less than a month, and on top of that all the work that would be need for them must take six months to even get close to what she has made here. She is so fascinating, and full of energy when she talks about her dresses.

"You are the most talented girl I have ever meet. Your work blows me away, Diamond. Is that you're really name because, I have never heard of a designer with a name like that." But be for she can answer I hear the music end, and I speak before she can respond to my father.

"Would you please to me the honor of being my first dance partner of the evening? I have yet to dance, and my legs are getting stiff from standing here all evening." I stand parallel to her with my arm out.

"I would love to dance with you, perhaps we can continue this conversation later your majesty. Your son must be full of energy standing here all night." We then finish going down all the stairs that lead to the dance floor, and the song ends. The dancers on the floor bow to their partners, after that a new song stars to play. We bow to one another, and I take her had in mine then place my other on her hip.

End of chapter!

I know I'm evil, but what I really want to know is what do you think about the dresses? Tell me in a review because I really love those! XD And about what I said at the beginning, I love writing so please don't say anything about the time. I get a chapter out almost every two days some take over a week.

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