Alright guys it's been quitea while since I updated this story and while there is a chapter after this authors not, I have quite a bit to say. So, first of all, I would like to apologize to everyone for not updating sooner. This was my first story here and I really wanted to keep writing on it but I was struggling with the action/adventure part of it (I still am so, you know, if anybody wants to hand in some ideas...that'd be great!) . After a while of trying and failing to write another chapter, I moved on and started on a GMW/ 5 Seconds of Summer fan fiction called Dance Lessons. I found that I was a lot better at writing romance than I was at adventure and when Dance Lessons began to get more popular, I don't know, I guess I just became more...focused on it. However, thanks to the people who kept reviewing and getting on me about not updating, I am back. Now, I will warn you. This chapter is not written the same way the other chapters were. I would like to think that this is a little more polished. Also, I have a LOT of reviews from you guys. I would like to go ahead and thank all of you in advance but I will still give shout outs and replies. So here we go:
Hope said:This was a wonderful chapter, evergirl2000! As are all of them. Please include more romance between Owen and Laurie - I was so disappointed that there wasn't more in the books - ; I can't wait to see what happens next! You really need to think about being an actual author...
P.S. Would you please check my blog out? I'm pretty new, but I have written some fanfiction (although not of the Blackwell Pages - yet - ). Just type Everysmileisanewdream, and you'll find it. (It's literally the only thing that will pop up!) Thanks for writing!
- Hope :)
Reply: Aww! I am so glad you really enjoy my story! And I will definitely try to put more Owen/Laurie for you! As far as your blog goes, I would LOVE to check it out however, I typed in exactly what you said and it didn't come up. I tried multiple time. However, if you could copy and paste the link into a review and send it to me, I would be more than happy to check it out!:)
Stunsy said:So, first let me just say that I really love it! I had wanted to make a sequel story myself, but I don't need to because yours is so good!
However, I have just one suggestion. If you have the books still, look back at some of the names. Norse names are impossible to spell, trust me, I've tried, but Helena should just be Helen, and Jotun should be Jouton I believe. Also, if you need it, Thor's Hammer is Mjolnir.
Other than that minor nit-pick, it's really great so far, and I can't wait to see more!
Reply: I am really glad that you like my story and thank you so much for the feedback. I wasn't sure if I was spelling them correctly or not, so thanks!
Guest said:Nice story so far! Can't wait for chapter 7!
Reply: Thanks!
Guest said:Wow really good, keep it up! Can't wait for chapter 7!
Reply: Thanks and here you go!
Bostonhorsez said:I SHIP MATT AND REYNA! YES! I saw SO many Matt x Reyna dialogue in the books! It KILLED me that K.L and M.A only implied stuff like that! But I always imagined that Reyna would make the first move...Whatever, still awesome!
Reply:Haha! Yeah I thought that they would make a good couple and as far as the books go, I totally agree!
Bostonhorsez said:I loved it! And I totally support Laurie x Owen, though not as much as Matt x Reyna! Please please PLEASE put in more romance between Reyna and Matt! And make Reyna the one to start it! Please!
Reply: I will definitely try to put more romance in here for both couples!
meeeeeeeeeeeeeee said:this was awesome but I would really like u to update more. Sorry if I sound a little too demanding, but this story is so cool and I would love to read more!
Reply:Trust me, you don't sound demanding. It's actually nice to know when people enjy your story and want to read more so don't apologize. :)
Guest said:If anything Laurie would like Matt. At least in my opinion
Reply: You know, I actually did think about doing that at first. That's actually why I had written it where he was acting jealous but then I remembered Owen andhow him and Laurie had gone really well together in the books...But who knows, maybe I'll make Laurie x Matt the end game...
Guest said:I love kissing scenes!️️️️️️️️️~takes chill pill~
OK think I'm better now. Sry I fangirl alot
Reply: Haha! It's totally fine! I do it a lot too! :)
Guest said:Sorry about my fangirl spree on my last comment. My request is that you do a whole fanfic on Matt and Reyna. I can see how Matt likes her. If I were him I'd like her too. I just want to know how Rey would react to their relationship. If I were him I'd support and obviously ship them. Their ship can be Ratt or Meyna. I have a question tho. Have u read the PJO series. If so say in your reaction to this cuz. It's a review you gotta shout out me
Reply: There will definitely be a lot of Matt x Reyna in here, or Meyna as you said :). Anyway, as far as Rey's reaction, I think that might be coming soon. All I can say is that it will probably be really funny and awkward. ;) As far as PJO: Oh My Gods! I LOVE those books! Rick Riordan was spot on when it comes to Hera's behavior. I mean, you never know how she's (Or any of the gods really) going to act when she sees you. It's like flipping a coin, you have a 50%chance of her being nice, and a 50% chance her being...let's just say, not so nice. lol. And his description of camp, it was spot on too! Along with a lot of other things... But, I have to say Percy Jackson is MUCH cooler in person. ;)
Me said:Next chapter NOW NOW NOW NOW NOWNOW NOW NOW NOW NOWNOW NOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOW
Reply: Okay! Okay! Lol! Here you go! ;)
Okay * takes a breath* I think that's all of them. Now, before I go, I will say one more thing, next time I get a chance I am going to go back and edit chapters 1-6 to make them flow and sound a little better so keep an eye out for that. I really hope you guys enjoy this update! And I really hope you guys REVIEW too because if not, I'm probably going to put this story on hiatus again and not update for a while. Until next time...
~evergirl2000
"Uh...Guys, I don't think this is the right place" Baldwin joked after they had all jumped through the portal.
Matt and Reyna nodded their agreement while everyone else looked around. They had apparently landed on a cliff edge but from that vantage point they could see quite a bit. There were a few houses dotting the mountain side on the way down and at the bottom there was a small town. They could see an old clock tower and some older style shops.
"Well, since we're here...Might as well check it out." Fen said before starting down the mountain.
The others followed, silently finding their way down. As they went, they found themselves drifting into pairs: Reyna was trying to quietly talk to Matt, Laurie and Owen were simply helping each other and making sure the other didn't fall, Baldwin and Rey were joking around and laughing and Fen was alone up front.
Laurie felt kind of bad about not walking with Fen, especially since they were usually impossible to separate but, she hardly ever saw Owen anymore. It was really getting to her though, and she couldn't figure out why. She lived with Fen, she hardly ever saw Owen. Her and Fen talked every day and even most nights, her and Owen only had emails and even those were few and far between sometimes. So it totally made sense that she would walk with Owen. Besides, if she walked with Fen, then she would feel bad that Owen had to walk alone. She just couldn't win!
Meanwhile, Matt was also deep in thought. Yeah, he should be talking to Reyna, catching up, but he couldn't stop thinking about what she had said when he asked her out. 'Your timing is terrible' she had said. He knew she had meant it as a joke but, the fact that she was right was getting to him. His timing was terrible. Seriously, what kind of guy asks a girl out when they're about to leave on some freaky mission that could seriously injure or even kill them if they weren't completely focused?! That was just pure stupidity on his part! Especially since, if she got hurt, he didn't know what he'd do. Man, why'd this have to be so complicated?
Reyna had given up trying to talk too Matt, it was clear that his thoughts had taken him hostage. She really couldn't blame him. This whole situation was crazy. She tried to stay calm though, if not for herself then for Matt. The last thing he needed right now was a hysterically scared girlfriend who wouldn't be of any use. She had to smile, picturing herself like that. It was so unlike her that it was funny. Although, it only took a minute for her to become serious again. Matt was beginning to worry her. What if he was working himself up about the mission? What if he freaked himself out thinking about all the things that could go wrong? Or worse, what if he was silently regretting asking her out? Okay, so maybe that wouldn't be worse than the other theories, but it would still be awful for her! She couldn't take it anymore, next time they had a shot at being alone, she would take it and find out what was going on in that boys brain.
Please remember to review if you want me to update soon!
~evergirl2000
