HI. I like cake.
I run out of the building. My feet pounding. My chest burning. Despite the fact that I died, I never felt this alive. I am running only to relies I am in front of the dauntless born. I slow down to go with the transfers. Man, there slow. I hear the train horn and smile spreads across my face. It's been a long time. People start to jump on, so I follow them. I get on with ease.
"that was extremely good. For a stiff." I turn to see Peter with the widest grin. I try to control the urge to punch him. I realize that I have to change his character. He did save me. just another thing to my long list.
"Why thank you." I answer with a friendly smile. I need to start off good with him. But he doesn't return the smile. Just stares. Not a shock stare, or an evil one. I just turn around and stick my head out the window
Every breath I take, I am one Breath closer to Tobias.
So I start breathing.
_o0o_
"there making us jump off ?!" I turn to see Christina yelling. Christina. A tear rolls down my cheek, but luckily the wind makes my hair cover my face. I hold her hand.
"together?" I manage to choke out. she nods.
"okay..1...2...3!" We both jump off. I land on my feet and Christina lands on her knees. We both let out a chuckle. But then something hits me. Rita. I turn around and see her sobbing. I could have saved her. The guilt rises in me. How many more people are gonna die? Again. surprisingly, peter doesn't make a comment like next time.
"Listen up! My name is Max! I am one of the leaders of your new faction!" shouts Max ON the other end of the roof. I tune him out until I here,
"You want us to jump off a ledge?" I don't know why it shocks her.
"Yes." He has an amusement on his face. But I have twice as much as him.
I am so close to Tobias.
"Is there water in the bottom or something?" Someone asks.
"Who knows?" Everyone glances everywhere but Max. I start to chuckle.
"you find something funny stiff?" Max retorts.
"yeah actually. I would like to go first." I reply sharply. His face is shocked. I just break into laughter. I walk over to him and jump onto the ledge.
"Here I come Tobias." I whisper so that only I can hear. I jump.
Four POV
I wait for the Initiates with Lauren behind me. What is taking Max forever. Suddenly a grey blur flashes down and hits the net. The initiate just laughed. laughed. I glance at Lauren to see she is as shocked as me. I take her out of the net. She looks at me and her face drops. Did I do something wrong. I get her out and she has tears in her eyes. I definitely did something wrong.
"Can't believe it," Lauren says behind me.
"A stiff, the first to jump? Unheard of." I look back down at the girl. She has the most distinct eyes. Her blond hair is in a messed up bun. She has a look of fire in her eyes and something else. Determination?
"there's a reason she left them, Lauren. What's your name." I ask her. Her eyes light up at my voice.
"Tris, my name is Tris." Her voice is light, But I can tell she has seen things that no one should. I can see it in her eyes.
"First jumper- Tris!" Soon another Candor jumps into the net. I don't know why, But I set my hand on her back. When I feel her shiver, I smile.
"Welcome to Dauntless."
I know, I know, this is short, but don't worry I will post later today.
Thank you tlcoopi7 for commenting on my last chapter(I will definitely take your suggestion into consideration ;))
Bye Pansycakes!
~FourTris4life2005
