Okay Chapter 5, I hope you guys like it and if you like my Highschool DxD stories(you at least like this one since you're reading it), I'm going to start one along side this so that I can have two stories together, giving me more stuff to occupy my free time until I can work on my other existing stories as well.

Reviews:

theundeadhero95-Never mind you put her in issei's harem. It was fem. G. O. D. but it was not showing up. And loved the chapter too.

I see and thanks I did work pretty hard on it.

RangerElk76-Just found the story and I'm really enjoying this story so far!

Thanks, I'm happy to have another reader.

Phantomsoul2015- Nice job so far maybe put yasaka in issesi harem also

Thanks and that reminds me I'm going to give Toshiro some of the harem as a reader pointed out(See Some Lazy Guest's review) Issei has too many in his harem to be good. I don't think I can put Yasaka in Issei's since I'm going to put a limit of 9 as I can handle that, sorry.

arinasution5- Go

Um... Could you expand on that.

Lazymanjones96- Interesting

Thanks.

Kalzu123- well having a god from the bible in your harem cant be bad right? right? but anyway add vali to his peerage as a pawn pretty please

That's a great idea, oh, and you haven't seen Vali yet, I'm so excited to show that.

ZofiaHyoudou- aww i wanted akeno in issei's harem. though its fine

Don't worry I'm going to have to change a bit so you're not alone.

Some Lazy Guest- Try to keep the harems size reasonable. Increasing the size without further calculating is a mistake, that is common within satan-issei storys. The usual result is that the characters arent gaining their own personal touch or reason for their affection towards the MC. Most authors are trying to fix that by the use of nonmodified cannon story and character elements which results in a high amount of fanfics were for example Akeno never develops further. She than stays as the usual disappointed and traumatized girl with self hatred, that tries to compensate said hatred towards herself through the use of M themes and open hate/dislike for her origins, her father and other fallen angels. The common end of such character management is that the typical dxd scene (were issei discards her self hatred and fixes the relationship between her and her father) gets repeated over and over in some form. I suggest that you are leaving the cannon elements so that you have at least some kind of plot, but try to give them a more personal touch. I mean lets be serious dxd characters arent so complex, that they are literally immune to additing. You could give Ophis for example some slightly creepy yandere touch like other writers have already done it, or make Kuroka more like the lazy and playful cat than the sex maniac she is in other fanfics. Issei harem characters like rias and asia are usually the most boring ones since their interaction with issei in cannon is the least developed (asia is the typical imouto character with romance option). The few funny parts about them (asias innocent desire to go naked with issei like akeno and rias) are already overused in cannon. It also seems and was pointed out that you are rushing the story. The most ridiculous part, was that the suprise rias showed over the fact that her fellow student is her fucking GOD was almost none, or at least poorly described.

Okay, thanks for the information and all your opinions which are greatly appreciated, I thought I gave a reason for the rushing but if I didn't let me know, as for Rias' reaction, I understand what you're saying and agree I could have done better, I'll have to fix that with an explanation in a later chapter, thanks for actually bringing that up, I promise once I start getting to the bigger, more important arcs, which I'll be sprinkling a bunch of my own arcs into I swear I'll get to a better pace.


Chapter 5

Third Person POV

After being gathered together the peerage split into groups with one group led by Issei, one by Lucia, one by Xenovia, and one by Irina. Issei had with him Asia and Koneko, Lucia had Yuuto with her, Xenovia had with her Akeno and Rias, and finally Irina had with her Aika and Ada.

It didn't take long for someone to find something, it was no surprise when Yuuto and Lucia were attacked. They were walking past a convenience store when Lucia took a step back and raised her hand to block a sword with her palm.

"Yes?" She asked noticing the familiar silver hair and red eyes of the Stray Exorcist the Gremory Group had been fighting when she went to save Asia.

"How can you, a Devil bitch, touch my great Excalibur-chan and not be burned?!" He asked angrily.

"It matters not, Herrin wishes me to take back the Excaliburs, I will do so." Lucia informed and lifted the blade and user and with a jerk of her arm sent him flying sans his blade. Flipping the blade and gripping the handle a second later a large tear in space appeared beside her and she placed it inside.

"Excalibur Rapidly retrieved, Exorcist eliminated, pending." Lucia stated to herself turning on the Stray Exorcist.

The silver haired man seeing danger threw down a flash bomb and while the two were blinded he ran.

"Mission postponed." Lucia decided looking to Yuuto,"We'll need to keep moving, please make a report."

"Shouldn't you make a report to Hyodou-san?" Yuuto asked getting his phone out.

"Probably." She said though she made no move to do so.

"Well?" He asked as it began to ring.

"I probably should, but I won't and if you keep quiet I'll give you the Excalibur." Lucia bargained.

Yuuto became suspicious of the normally completely obedient Lucia not doing something her Master would want. Taking the deal he reported to Rias that they found Freed Sellzan wielding an Excalibur and he got away.

Lucia nodded looking around.

"Yuuto Kiba, you wish for revenge, do you not?" She asked when he finished the call.

"Y-yes." He stuttered in surprise.

"I too have a wish." She said.

"What is that wish?" Yuuto asked.

She looked to the sky.

"My wish is to be what I was, before Meister would use me to my fullest and show me the same affection he used to." She said sadly.

"Are you unhappy with your life?" Yuuto asked.

"No, I live my life, it's just... As a Shinso, I am one of the oldest and most powerful Vampires, but that power is nothing to me, what I really care about is Meister, it is how and what I was made for." Lucia said.

"You know I once drank solely from Meister, his blood, imagine being close to death from thirst and finding the fountain of youth." She said her eyes glazing over,before shaking her head, "Yuuto Kiba, the point is that I swear to you we will both get our wishes, but, I merely ask that you aid me to the best of your ability and I swear, I'll hold the Leader of the Holy Sword Project down and I'll let you use one of my weapons to take revenge, nothing will stop me from doing so."

"Deal." Yuuto said reaching out with his hand, only for Lucia, much to his surprise, to place a magic circle on his palm,"When we begin the battle, say,"Blut giessen" and you will have all the same powers as I do for an hour."

With that she began walking away.

The Next Night

Yuuto's POV

As we entered the barrier with Issei and Irina standing back Issei covered in a dark black aura and Irina in a blinding golden aura, both aura's seemed to be making a seesaw motion each pushing the other back for a moment before the other took precedence. Ada stood with them waving as we entered the barrier. I sent a look to Lucia as she walked. Her face was devoid of emotion and she wielded the two guns she'd summoned in her fight with Riser, she wore an outfit that seemed to fit her like a glove(A/N:The same gothic one from chapter 2) and ever once in a while she would glance at his arm.

"So, which is it Sirzechs? Or is it Serafall?" Kokabiel asked Freed and the originator of the Holy Sword project Balba Galilei.

"Kokabiel, I am Lucia Alice Valentine, Servant of Meister Satan, and I will not allow you to succeed!" Lucia declared.

"Oh?" He shifted interested, "Very well, let's test you then. Attack."

From no where a group of Exorcists, two Cerberus, and 20 Fallen Angels appeared ready to fight. Immediately the army ran forward light swords, Light spears, and jaws ready to kill the group.

"Looks like I'm feasting well tonight. Hahahahahahahahahahahah!" She began to laugh insanely at the end rushing toward the Fallen Angels, who all seeing the danger stabbed at her or threw a spear all of which hit their marks. She dropped the pistols and began to smile.

"Hahaha! O' spear that aims true, lend me your strength so that I may conquer my enemies in battle! Spear of Odin, Gungnir!" She yelled and from a rift in space a golden spear inscribed with many runes floated into her hands.

"Let me show you true power insects!" She rushed forward looking like a porcupine with multicolored quills as she stabbed a Fallen Angel threw the neck and instead of just pulling it out or pushing it the rest of the way she ripped it free splattering blood all over her upper body, missing only her left eye.

She rushed to the next Fallen Angel and opened her mouth wide sinking her fangs into his neck. and in seconds he was a corpse, not stopping there she continued to rip through and drink the Fallen Angels dry.

Lucia's POV

'That's it, keep going! Kill! Kill! Kill!' A voice sounding like a younger version of my own ordered in my ears as I ripped through the first of the Exorcists getting stabbed by light sword after light sword and ignoring them, by now I had a light sword or light spear stabbing in almost every part of my body.

"Why won't she go down?!"

"Why won't she die?!"

"What is this monster?!"

I was laughing maniacally as I drank yet another person dry by now I'd stopped caring to notice whether the person was male, female, Human Fallen Angel, or even whether or not they attacked, I just ripped slashed, stabbed, drank, or obliterated them.

"I see you weren't kidding, you're a Shinso aren't you?" Kokabiel asked.

"I am." I said jumping into a Cerberus' mouth and ripping the top half of the head off.

"Interesting, time to prove the superiority of Fallen Angels!" Kokabiel yelled.

I let the blood covered golden spear return to its rift in space and smiled,:"O' sword of endless night, lend me your aid so that I may survive and thrive in this dangerous world Sword of Night, Grayswandir."

From another rift appeared a western styled sword with a blade as black as a night without light with a cross-guard shaped as two serpents pointing away from the blade.

"A sword this time?" Kokabiel asked.

I jumped forward slashing at him and laughing with glee as I scratched him as he dodged and saw his blood begin to trickle.

'Slash him! Stab him! Cut him! Maim him! Kill him! Drink his blood until there is none left!' The voice urged.

"You're rather excitable, aren't you Miss Shinso?" Kokabaiel asked his breath quickening.

"Slash, stab, cut, maim, kill, drink, slash, stab, cut, maim, kill, drink, slash..." I continued to chant this as I attacked.

Third Person POV

Issei sighed and Ada nodded. Irina had a sad smile,"It's still there isn't it?"

"Yes, it is. She'll loose control soon. You have the back up barrier ready right Ada?" Issei asked.

"Yes Herr Issei, I am ready to give my life if it is needed." The younger Shinso informed.

"I'll have to seal her before that happens." Issei said sadly.

"Issei! I warned you about sealing!" Irina scolded.

"Fine." Issei sighed.

[You're so whipped Partner] Ddraig informed his interesting partner.

Meanwhile Balba revealed the truth of the success of the Holy Sword project and gave the last of the Holy factors from the project to Yuuto and he achieved balance breaker. It had seemed Blaba made a realization when a light spear came hurtling at him.

"Blood Pour!" He yelled and his blonde hair turned white and his grey eyes crimson. He rushed at speeds almost 10 times his usual and smacked away the light spear.

"Yuuto."

He looked to see surprise on many faces and the utter shock on Kokabiel's in comparison. He opened his mouth to say something only for a golden spear to come through his shoulder, a black sword through his leg, and a hand through his chest.

"Bye bye Kokey!" Lucia cheered and sank her teeth into the cadre.

"What?! No?! I can't be beaten by you?! I am a superior Fallen Angel?!" kokabiel roared his skin gradually becoming the same husk as many others.

"Tehehehe! Kokey doesn't know how superior we Shinso are, but Meister and Herrin are far greater, aren't I so luck to have such a great Meister and a terrific Herrin?!" Lucia giggled and licked her blood soaked lips, her attitude and mannerisms closer to a younger girl's than her normal one.

"Alice!" Hearing Irina's call the Shinso turned her attention to the chestnut haired girl and in a movement so fast the blood on her evaporated she stood hugging her.

"Calm down Alice, I'm glad you're okay." She said.

"Miau!" She said happily, giggling as Irina rubbed her head in the Elder sibling way she always did.

It was some time later that Lucia had fallen asleep on the Occult Research Club's couch and Yuutp had gone back to normal however a black rose tattoo was now on his forearm near his palm.

"Yuuto Kiba, did Lucia start acting strange the other day?" Issei asked.

Yuuto looked nervously at Lucia,"When we fought Freed, she beat him and took the Excalibur but hid it and made me promise not to tell anyone, in return she promised me the ability to take my revenge."

And what a revenge it was, he'd found out he had fangs and out of urge and instinct drained Balba dry of blood felling his power double.

"And this transformation, how did she make it possible?" Issei asked.

"She placed a magic circle on my arm and told me to activate it I had to say Blood pour." He informed.

Issei sighed,"Yuuto, I'm afraid she's done something irreversible, you're a Vorläufer Vampire reincarnated as a Devil now."

"A what?" Yuuto asked.

"Vorläufer Vampire, a closer relative to modern day vampires but still much stronger and has most of the same abilities as a Shinso minus most of the psychic abilities." he explained.

"Is Aika one?" Yuuto asked.

"No, she's a normal vampire, albeit she has much faster regeneration." Issei answered,

Yuuto took a minute to think,"What does this mean?"

"You'll have to retrain yourself physically from scratch I'm afraid." Issei informed,"Even when not in Vampire form you're still stronger than you were before."

"What does this mean for Yuuto if he runs into any Vampires?" Rias asked.

"Well as a Vorlaufer Yuuto is in essence Lucia's brother, the hierarchy goes like this, Shinso such as Lucia and Ada are the top gaining titles to show their strength, then there are the Vorlaufer who gain similar titles, then there are Shinso created Vampires who birth more Vampires, starting a Family or Coven, and create the lower classes, then there are the lower classes with their untapped potential whom have the ability to create other Vampire but if they do the Vampire is only halfway changed as they don't have the power necessary to do so." Irina explained.


I hope this chapter was okay and I've set up a little something for later.

Issei's harem: Lucia, Asia, Xenovia, Rias, Irina, Kuroka, Ravel, Ophis,

Toshiro's Harem: Akeno, Koneko, Aika,

Here's the current rundown of Issei's peerage.

King: Satan(A. K. A. Issei), Devil God

Queen:Lucia Alice Valentine, Shinso Vampire

Bishops: Asia, Wielder of Twilight Healing and Ravel, Phenex Devil(I plan to work her in soon).

Knights: Xenovia,Durandal Wielder(This'll happen soon),

Rooks: Rossweisse, Valkyrie

Pawns: Aika Kiryu Valentine,Pure-blood Vampire[One Pawn]