Need Some Opinions

Hey! I am having a bit of an internal conflict with myself. I cannot decide if I want to continue this story in the 3d person or if I want to mix in some different 1st person point of views.

Also, if you guys have any questions, critiques, or advice for this story, please shoot me a message and/or comment and let me know.

Let me know what you think.

Thanks!

P.S. I am going to start taking requests for an "Imagines" series, so just shoot me a message if you have a request.