Um so thank you to all of you that read my shitty story but I've dropped the idea and reinvented it. I've posted it today so yeah talk to me is done. Thank you so much for reading it, the new story is called Coming Home which has the same vibe I've just taken time to really focus on the plot and changed different aspects. Feel free to read Coming Home and give me feedback, I'm also open to changing different parts based on your opinions if I really love them too.