Well, here it is, the long awaited 3rd chapter to Scorn. To everyone who have read and review, thank you, and I must say I'm sorry for such a long wait. Between having writers block, re-writing this chapter about 4 times -_- I finally have the next chapter! Now to answer a few reviews:

BClassDemon: Wish there were more Transformers Self-Inserts... Great chapter imo hope you can post more soon :)

Wouldn't he retain more data then just the Reaper vision? Being a sentient super computer and all...
Also you put 'reject' twice near the end :D

I must agree with you, it seems that Transformer S-I's are a rare breed, but it makes all the good ones that pop up that much better. Also, yes he would, I never said he just got the Vision, just that it was rough on his processors. So expect in later chapters for that to come up in, lets say, odd ways.

Blaze1992: Wow it's been so long I forgot all about this fic so umm glad to see your not dead. "Blaze1992 say's lamely" Also quick question will your OC/SI be the only "transformer" to show up in ME?

I'm sorry for making you think that! Now to answer you question, during the events of ME 1, yes, but lets just say the Dark Space that the Reapers in habit...has some strange properties in this story, so you might see more show up towards the end of 2 and through out 3.

tamagat: awwww... why did you have to resize scorn to a smaller bot?

I kind of did it on the whim, I mean in AoE (yes shame on me I saw the movie just for the Dinobots) or even G1 the dino bots, though mostly Grimlock, towered of the other bots with the exception of Optimus, I wanted him to be able to fit onto the Normandy, where as if he wasn't, I don't think he would have been able to. Also, in conjuncture with Blaze1992's question, I might have him find a certain transformers artifact that will change him, making him even bigger, and making him a triple changer.

But on with the chapter!

You know how in the game, the citadel portion only took maybe 20/30 minutes at most? In reality it took well over 5 hours, as its been 5 hours since we docked with the station. I gave a rumbling sigh, scaring most of the personnel at the other end of the cargo hold, making one of the armed crew members to reach for a gun.

"Are all you organics so jumpy?" I asked with a bit of humor in my voice, while lightly tapping the floor of the cargo bay with my claws, still ended up putting dents in the cargo bay floor, thinking of how I would ease every one into the fact I could transform as well, when I heard foot steps come close to me. Looking over, I notice it was one of the engineers that tried to cut open my chest, not realising I unconsciously ran a claw over the spot he tried to cut open, I glared at him, smoke leaking out the corners of my mouth. "What do you want. Trying to cut me open again?" I growled out, narrowing my eyes a bit.

He backed up, waving his hands defensively infront of himself, almost triping over his own feet. I snort a plume of smoke at him, turning away and laying down with my head rested on my front claws and closing my optics. More time must have passed, cause I had went into standby, before I heard the elevator opening, and multiple foot steps could have been heard, one set from something heavy, one almost light on their feet, and two that sounded similar.

"Keelah! What is that thing?" I heard a accented voice say, oh this will go over so well, cracking open one of my optics, my yellow eye stares at the collection of beings walking over to me. Tali, in her environmental suit visibly flinched at my action seemingly scared, Wrex looked indifferent, Garrus looked at me almost intrigued. I snorted before closing my optic once more, but listening to everything going on around me.

"Shepard are you sure this thing is safe?" the voice I came to associate with Tali asked, before I heard a snort and the heavy steps walking away. "Scorn helped us out on Eden Prime, we decided to keep any knowledge about him quiet until we know exactly what to tell the council." responded Shepard, oh that answer was gonna go over so well with the AI hater,well until Mass Effect 2 and the whole thing with Tali and Legion.

"How do you know it isn't with the geth? It could kill us at any moment! It's an AI!" Tali ranted, almost hysterically, ya I have a feeling this is gonna continue till something big.

"If I was going to kill you at any moment, don't you think I would have done something while we were docked to the station?" I growled out, now don't get me wrong, I liked Tali's character in the game, but in the first one, she was kinda naive and very whiny about anything AI right through to the second game as well. "Also I could have just attacked every organic on the planet you all call Eden Prime if that was the case." I sigh, though it sounded like a rumbling growl, before I felt the telltale feeling of a hack. Snapping my eyes open, I get on all fours, turning with a growl before unleashing a bone rattling roar towards the group. "I AM NOT SOME MACHINE YOU CAN ENTER AND POKE AROUND IN!" I bellowed with smoke leaking out the sides of my mouth and nostrils, the looks on everyones faces ranged from exasperated (Shepard) to fallen and scared shitless (Tali obviously) to entrigued (Wrex). "This thing will be the death of us! We should get rid of it!" Tali screamed at Shepard, backing up close to the wall. Now I know I will probably end up appoligising to her at some point, but at the moment, I don't think so. Laying back down, I turn away from all of them ignoring them and seemingly going ito stand by again, but in reality I keep listening to what is said.

"Tali, I know it's hard, but maybe this is an oportunity to get passed your peoples issue with synthetics?" I heard Shepard ask/tell her both their footsteps head toward where I'm guessing enginering is.

"I don't think so shepard. That ting is going to..." What ever she said next was cut off by the door closing. Well if thats her attitude, its gonna be a long voyage. I sigh again, lifting my head and looking over at Wrex, who was still staring at me. "Are we going to have problems as well?" I ask deadpan, hoping that I could at least one of the crew would try to get along with me. Wrex raised one scaley eyebrow before snorting. "As long as you bring the pain to who we are fighting, I'm not going to argue about the giant robot lizard." afterwards letting out a short rumbbling chuckle. "Besides its funny to see the quarian all up in arms about you." I chuckle at his answer, before putting my head back down, and slowly going into standby.

As soon as I went into standby, I have no idea how much time before I start coming to again, with joker yelling over the p.a. System. "God damn it, you over grown lizard! Wake up! Shepard needs your help, they are getting over run down there! You need to help them!" I open my eyes with a snap, getting onto all fours. "Whats going on pilot?" I ask, not knowing how long or where we were at. "Thank god, there was a lot more geth then and the ground team is getting out gunned out there! Get going and do your thing!" Joker kept yelling as the cargo bay door opened, showing the lava lakes of the planet. And looking down, I see the Mako flipped on its side being used as cover, with...7 Colossus and a huge amount of cannon fodder firing at it. I grin as I prepare for the fight. Roaring as loud as I can, I launch myself out of the ship as it does a flyby. As the wind wips by, small flaps open along my body, acting as stabilizers allowing me to control my fall.

Slamming into the ground between the geth and the Mako, I spin roaring again as vent flaps open along my back and a steady hum could be heard, purple light flaring out of the vents making its way along my back before it reached my mouth. VWOOOM. I blast a beam of purple energy from my mouth, sweeping across the geth, taking out most of the cannon fodder. As the smoke from my attack clears, I see the twisted wreckage of the multiple geth platforms, but standing in all the steaming metal were the Collosus. Growling, I trigger a very familiar feeling for me, as the sound of gears turning and metal against metal started as I Transformed.

And...Cliffhanger

I know, that is so rude of me, but I want to keep the readers hooked, also, I know some parts seem rushed, as well as I have been on the edge of a thought of possibly making a rewrite, and making the oc/si an original dinobot instead of an AoE dino. But I will try to bring the next chapter much quicker then the long wait for this chapter.