Promise to an Avenger

Summary: Alternate series of events set after the Sasuke/Naruto fight at the Valley of the end - If Naruto won.

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, or anything else of value. It is not worth mugging me.

Chapter 8 - The Big Date

- - - Sasuke's POV - - -

I can't believe SHE rejected ME. . . .
Don't get me wrong, I'm glad I can drop the charade, and finally tell Hinata-chan how I feel . . .but still . . . knockknock

"Coming" She sounds excited about her date with the dobe . . .

"Sakura, here. Read them" I know he'll probably kill me for that, but he deserved to be happy, right?

"But I've got a date with . . ."

"I KNOW, DAMMIT, HE WROTE THOSE SCROLLS THE DAY I LEFT THE HOSPITAL, NOW READ THEM - BEFORE HE TURNS UP"The date scrolls . . .I hope she gets them read in time . . .I can't believe I lost my cool, though. . . .hmm, must just be because of how she hurt my pride . . .
knockknock

"H-he-hello"
She's so cute when she stutters . . .

"Umm . .. Hey, Hinata-chan"

- - - Naruto's POV - - -

knockknock
Hope she's not mad at me for being early . . .

"Hello?" .WOW
STOP DROOLING KIT, SHE'LL NOTICE
You're one to talk
I'M NOT VISIBLE
Just shut it, furball . . .
HEH

"Hey, Sakura-chan, are you ready, I'm a little early, sorry"

"Almost, please, come in for a moment, sit down." She left the room to I finish getting ready. . .thats when I saw it. Or rather them.
The scrolls. I had to destroy them, before she read . . .wait . .. what if she HAS read them . . . .I held up a scroll

"So when did he give you these, and have you read them yet?" .

"He stopped by at about half 4, and I read them straight away, as he said that it was important for my date with you. Is it true that you wrote them . . "
I interrupted her at that point.

"The day me and Sasuke got out of the hospital, yeah"

"So, where are we gonna go?" I WAS hoping she'd give me a bit more time to think, before asking that, but . . .

"Dunno. I put so much thought into you first date with Sasuke, I can't really think of anything to top that . . .actually I re-used that date for yesterday with Ino, give or take . . ."

"And you wonder why she fell for you, that date would even have had a girl with Sasuke's personality begging for more."

"Really? Wow, didn't think I was so good at planning dates . . . . .Oh My God, No"
I feel really sick now . . .

"What?"

"You . . .You . . .I'm scared for life. . .You gave me a mental Image of SASUKE in a SHORT SKIRT"

"Sorry, Naruto"

"Ha ha ha, don't worry, Sakura-chan, I'll just get Ky . . .err I'll forget it soon"
Hehe . .almost mentioned furball . . OI, FOX
WHAT NOW, FLASHBAG
That Sasuke-in-a-skirt thing . . .delete the memory will you?
WHATS IN IT FOR ME
If you don't I'll re-organise my mindskape so you have to put up with you-know-who all the time
FINE
Hehehe . . .

"Hows about we just hang out here, for our date?"

"Thats hardly romantic, Sakura-chan"

"Yeah, but these scrolls contain my first 8 dates with you, so it doesn't have to be. . ."

"Thank you, Sakura-chan"

"Do I get a kiss?" Calm down, Naruto, don't faint . . .

"Sa .. .Sakura-chan? A-A-are you S-Sure?" .
I lean in to kiss her, seeing her face tint a bright crimson, knowing my own was doing the same . . .longing for her lips, the taste of her skin . . .
as our llips met, my breath hitches, and I find it hard to breath . . .as much as I want this kiss to last forever, I don't want to sufficate her, so I reluctantly bring the passionate kiss to an end, grinning like an Idiot . . .
YOU ARE AN IDIOT, IDIOT
STOP RUINING THE MOMENT, FURBALL !
I looked over at Sakura-chan, to see how she reacted . . .she looked stunned. . .stunned, but happy. At least I didn't mess up too badly . . .

"N-naruto-kun . . .I . . .um . . .can we kiss again"
My jaw dropped . . .I must be dreaming . . . .I pinched myself

"Ow! Damn, that hurt . . . " I looked around "Yeah!!! Its not just a dream!!!" Wait . . .
Did I just say that out loud?
YES
I looked at Sakura-chan, ready to be hit for being loud . . .or something. She suprised me by giggling.

"That good, eh"
I could only nod at her, too dumstruck to say anything

"Good, because it was for me too . . .the very best kiss"
The gap between us closed again as, this time SHE kissed ME . . .
Her hands started tracing lines across my back, then down till she was groping my ass . . .she shifted herself to the side and one of her hands started to wander to my leg.
Then she lifted her hand, slowly tracing the inside of my leg . . .untill it was resting on my groin. Reluctantly, I pulled away . . .

"N-naruto? . . ."

"I'm sorry, Sakura-chan, but . . .please don't do that . . .it wouldn't be fair on Ino-chan . . ."

"Naruto . . .OK, I can wait . . .but you have to decide BEFORE you leave on your little trip, OK"
I agreed, and left . . .in desperate need of a VERY cold shower . . .

- - - Sakura's POV - - -

I . . .I can't believe I just did that . . .
YEAH, SHAME HE HAD TO STOP IT
What . .I . . . that . . .
ADMIT IT, HE FELT GOOD . . .

Well, yeah . . .damn Ino, stopping me from seing more of Naruto . . .
YEAH . . (drools)
NOT LIKE THAT . . .pervert . .
OH?
Well . . .
NOW WHO'S THE PERVERT?

Wait . . .Ino . . thats IT!

- - -Ino's POV - - -

ring ring

AAARgh, damned phone . . .

"HELLO?"

"Hey, Ino-pig"

"What do you want?"

"Can you come round, its about Naruto . . . "

"I'll be there in 5."

- - - Sakura's House 3 1/2 minutes later- - -

"Well, Sakura, what about MY Naruto?"

"Well . . ." so she told me what happened on their date . . .

"YESS, I WIN !"

"Not yet, he's still undecided . . ."

"I know . . .did you call me here just to brag on how you groped him?"

"No, I want to make a suggestion, one that might let both of us get at least 1 more date out of Naruto before his training . . ."

"I'm listening . . ."

"We both want him, right?"

"Well, DUH . . ya know, for such a big forehead, you sure are dumb"

"He also loves us both, right, thats why he's finding it so hard to decide"

"Yup"

"He'll regret upsetting whichever one of us he doesn't choose, right, so . . ."

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Next chapter: The girls plan, Sasuke's brother, and the hunt for the Slug Sannin.

Naruto will leave with Jaraia for training at some point during Chapter 10 or 11, Its Shipuden/Part 2/Post time-skip after that

Polls, and current vote count.

NEW STORY ADDED TO VOTE LIST.

G - Power of an Uchiha. - The night of the Uchiha massacre was also the night Naruto was attacked by Itachi. Everything since then has been the product of The Makeyou and Naruto's coma-induced halucinations. What happens when he wakes up?
The first thing he learns is that he is not the kyuubi container. Sasuke is - The only reason he's still alive is because kyuubi healed him.
Next, he learns the REAL reason the villagers have hated him for so long.

Naru/Saku , onesided Naru/Fangirls(Including Ino) , Sasu/FemKyuu Romance/Action/Adventure H - The Ninth Tail - Kyuubi is too powerful to be sealed into one person, but it had to be done. To keep his younger brother alive, Yondaime Hokage edited the demon's seal.
When Naruto finds his true love, one tails worth of demonic chakra will transfer to her, creating an alternate personality. Untill this happens, naruto will be unable to use any of kyuubi's power - not even to heal.

Naru/Saku, (yes, this means Inner Sakura is really a personification of Kyuubi's last tail)
Romance/Action/Adventure

I. Kitsune's Haraise- Naruto is dead. Now a new organization are forming. One that can shake Konoha to its core. One that wished to use the most forbidden of techniques, just to bring back an old friend. One that vishes to have vengance on Konoha. All of this and Suna refuses to help. Will Konoha survive, even without the infamous Rookie 9?

Naru/(Leader of new organisation(NOT OC, just don't want to spoil the suprise)), other pairings undecided.
Action/Adventure Pairing

P1 - InoNaruSaku - DECIDED BY WINNER OF 'DESEISED DEMON' COMPETITION.

Sasuke Death? - Next chapter I will be removing all options with 1 of less votes from this catagory. If your vote is the only one for that option, then you may re-cast it to one of the remaining choises Sasuke Death?

S1 - Yes, at Sakura's Hand. 01 votes
S2 - Yes, at Naruto's Hand. 01 votes
S3 - Yes, at Itachi's Hand. 10 votes
S4 - Yes, at Hinata's Hand 01 votes

S5-S8 - No, but badly wounded by 02

S5 - Naruto, 01 votes
S6 - Sakura, 02 votes
S7 - Itachi/Kisame, 04 votes
S8 - Hinata 00 votes

S9 - No, and no serious injuries either. 05 votes

Next Story. (Yes, you can vote on undecided pairings)

A. Naruto / Butterfly Effect. A story that gives Naruto the time-travel abilities of the main charicter from the movie Butterfly effect as the first of 3 levels of a bloodline ability. during the story he gains the other levels too, Tries to make things better, but messes up, then tries to rectify his mistakes.
due to the time travel, Naruto will be paired with many girls, though only 1 per timeline, every time he goes back in time, he will either try somthing to get the girl he's after to notice him, of give up and go after somone else. Eventual Naru/Ino. Romance/Action/Adventure

3 votes

B. The rookie 9 go on a mission, and Naruto is saved by Hinata, who gives him her Byakkugan, like Obito gave Kakashi the Sharingan. The Hyuuga council disapprove.
Naruto now has to kope with the Hyuuga clan wanting him dead, neji's intense training and . . . Hinata's memories. SET BEFORE THE CHUNNIN EXAMS.
Naru/Hina Slight Naru/Saku Saku/Sasu/Ino Neji/Ten. Romance/Action/Adventure

2 votes

C. The Leader of Akatsuki has a secret. He is the container of the 9-tails. The Naruto in Konoha is just a Shadow Clone. What happens when his friends find out.
Pairings Undecided.
pairing votes NaruSaku 2

Romance/Action/Adventure

4 votes

D. The Kyuubi did not attack Konoha, dispite popular belief. It was hunted for its power. The 4th gave Konoha the power of Kyuubi - making it an enemy of the leaf in the process. One boy can change the Demon's mind. But even he will need the help of his friends.
Pairings Undecided.

pairing votes .
Romance/Action/Adventure

0 votes

E. What happens when one of Naruto's Harem Jutsu Clones become real . . .and develop their own personality, and their own set of feelings.
Lots of people get jealous, of course.
starts as Naru/FemNaru, Naru/Harem and slight Sasuke/FamNaru later Romance/Comedy

2 votes

F. Naruto watches an episode of Blaech, and gets an Idea. He pesters Jaraia and the Seal master moves kyuubi to a new host - a harmless fox plushie. Sakura sees this, and has her Inner personality transfered to her favorite plush toy, also a fox. What happenes when the two toys get mixed up, and start telling their old hosts secrets.
Naru/Saku, Kyuubi/InnerSaku, Sasu/No-one other pairings undecided.

pairing votes .
Romance/Comedy

4 votes

G - Power of an Uchiha. - The night of the Uchiha massacre was also the night Naruto was attacked by Itachi. Everything since then has been the product of The Makeyou and Naruto's coma-induced halucinations. What happens when he wakes up?
The first thing he learns is that he is not the kyuubi container. Sasuke is - The only reason he's still alive is because kyuubi healed him.
Next, he learns the REAL reason the villagers have hated him for so long.

Naru/Saku , onesided Naru/Fangirls(Including Ino) , Sasu/FemKyuu Romance/Action/Adventure

0 votes

H - The Ninth Tail - Kyuubi is too powerful to be sealed into one person, but it had to be done. To keep his younger brother alive, Yondaime Hokage edited the demon's seal.
When Naruto finds his true love, one tails worth of demonic chakra will transfer to her, creating an alternate personality. Untill this happens, naruto will be unable to use any of kyuubi's power - not even to heal.

Naru/Saku, (yes, this means Inner Sakura is really a personification of Kyuubi's last tail)
Romance/Action/Adventure

0 votes

I. Kitsune's Haraise- Naruto is dead. Now a new organization are forming. One that can shake Konoha to its core. One that wished to use the most forbidden of techniques, just to bring back an old friend. One that vishes to have vengance on Konoha. All of this and Suna refuses to help. Will Konoha survive, even without the infamous Rookie 9?

Naru/(Leader of new organisation(NOT OC, just don't want to spoil the suprise)), other pairings undecided.
Action/Adventure

0 votes

New stories added to list lettered J-Z, then AA-ZZ

First story to reach 8 votes will be the next 1 I write.