Chapter 2 broken soul:

This chapter is mend to darken the story a bit.

and review I only got 2 freaking reviews !!2!!!

I was going to introduce 7 new characters but I found it a bit too much so I reduced it a bit.

Disclaimer: I don't own anything if I did this would be a manga and not a fan fiction

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The Broken Soul:

Chapter 2 : Snow valley.

North Gate Konohagakure 5:00 PM

7 people were waiting in front of the gate a girl with the name Yuuma Youshiro who was having a conversation with the loud Inuzuka Kiba. Couple of feet behind them under a tree there was Abruma Shino , Hyuuga Hinata , Huruno Sakura , Uchiha Sasuke and the boy with the name Sai who was giving the command over team 8. And as always they all were waiting for the eternal late coming Hatake Kakashi.

"So Yuuma how long do you know Naruto?" he asked

"A while now why?" she simply replied

"I don't know just asking. You seemed to know him pretty well but he never told anything about you and we are some of he´s best friends soo we were just wondering you know."

"Sounds typical Naruto."

"Hu how do you mean sounds what like him? "

"Well he´s the type of person that never tells anything so I understand that he didn´t tell you guy´s about us."

"Eu Naruto quiet ? And what do you mean with us you´re he´s girlfriend or something?"

A little stunned Kiba was staring now at the brown haired girl that had a small smile on her face "Well I wouldn´t call hem my boyfriend but ... well I would just say we have a special relationship."she said as she closed her eyes and putted a small smile on her face " An over what sort relationship are we talking here then?" "Well that´s something you just gone need to ask him about." She was her andser him while her smile grow a bit bigger as she say a full stunned Kiba slowly drifting away from her.

"So you got something out her Kiba?" asked a questioning Sakura "Nope nothing more than you guy's and that Hinata is having some competition is seems."

"It doesn´t seems to look good for you Hinata." Said Sakura while she was looking to the girl was now sitting under the tree with her head pointing to the grass. She was holding it for now but they know she could snap any minute now. All this years she had a crush on the blond buy but she was always too shy to tell him and now it seemed that this girl from nowhere stole him from here. Because they all had talked to the girl (except for Sai and Sasuke of course ) but they all told the same thing there was definitely something going on between the 2 but what? That was the question!

"She said he wasn´t her boyfriend but that they had a special relationship"

"Special relationship you say? So she´s just sleeping with him ?" Angry looks were now pointed to Sai who was simply drawing something on he's scroll. Over the years he leaned how to interact with people but everything that came out of his mouth were still somehow connected to his one and only big obsession 'Penis'.

"What I read that in a book once." He stated while he looked up from he´s scroll at met their mad faces.

"I´m pretty sure you did." He heard the dog boy mumbling between he's teeth

"Oh you readied it to?"

"Hell no!"

" Real shame."

5 minutes past when a white smoke appeared and revealed the Jounin Hatake Kakashi

"Sorry I´m late but when I walked to the gate I passed a black cat so."

"You´re getting old Kaka -sensei."

"Hum I disagree on that one Sakura I´m looking just as good as I was 10 years ago."

"Nope you´re getting old A you used that excuse already and B you aren't the last one to arrive. Dobe seemed to become better than you at being late." said Sasuke as he blasted into there conversion

"Hum did he now well it seems that I´m going train on that when we get back from this mission besides where is Naruto if he isn't here?"

"How should we know?" was he's simply reply as he placed himself against one side of the tree.

"Sorry disturb you guy´s on your little conversation but if you´re waiting for Naruto he´s been standing right there for the last 4 hours." Now 7 people were looking at the girls finger as she pointed to the top of the gate where the certain blond was standing with his back turned to the little group and was facing the sun

"What the hell is the dobe doing over there? He dobe get down here!"

"Dobe!"

"he Dobe!"

"Is he deaf or what?"

"Don´t think so but he doesn´t look so good. Ma by he got sick?"

"The dobe sick? He doesn´t get sick after eating 30 coups of ramen and some of those dog cookies that you eat. By the way why do you eat dog food?"

"Shut up bastard."

"I will go get him." As Yuuma said it she channelled some chakra into her feet and jumped high in the air to land next to the blond who was staring into the sky.

"He Naruto your oke?" she asked with a concerned look on her face.

"No"

"What's wrong?"

"It was my fault wasn't it?"

'sigh Not again' "Naruto you got over that you couldn't have known."

"But still."

"No buts ! Don´t make me tell Ayuri Naruto! "

"But!"

"Naruto! Get your mind straight! Snap out of this!"

"Bu..."

"days... that´s how long the trip will take to snow if you haven´t snapped out of it until then I´m telling Ayuri got it!"

"..."

"Naruto you got it!?"

"Yea..."

"Good now let´s get your lazy ass moving !"

Several feet away:

"Seems like that dobe is having problems in love paradise."

"Seems like it. Maybe you still got a shot Hinata or maybe he likes the dominating type in that case it´s game over for you. "

"Hey! Enough of you two Hinata is having more than enough problems for now. She doesn´t you 2 bitching about it right now. Besides who are you to judges about here? last time I checked you 2 don´t even have a girl."

"Chill down Sakura it's just guy talk besides I ant looking for a decent relationship and there are coming down so let´s get going."

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10 Day´s later:

The trip was going smooth they were right on time and there hadn't had much interferes on the way. There was a small group of bandits that had attack them but that was it. Long before before they attacked they were discovered by Hinata's byakugan. After that the 10 bandits got beaten down pretty fast by Naruto & co . Hemself killed 3 of them easily with one shot of he's Odaama rasengan and the rest where handeld without many problems. They had been idiots if the thought that they could take on an elite team of Konoha ninja existing of a dog boy an emo a Cyclops a Crazy girl a bug lover a penis lover a shy girl the Kyuubi demon container and a girl that seems the be strong enough to keep the demon quiet .

"Brr so cold man. Hey Yuuma how long will it take until we get these?"

"Just over this hill and were there."

"hum I'm getting a déjà vu here didn´t you told that 3days ago to?"

"Yes I did."

"sigh Why the hell would you life on top of a mountain where it´s freezing cold and the closeted town from here is 3 day´s travelling."

"Well it´s quite isolated so it´s perfect for training and you can´t beat the view. Here take a look."

With take she stopped on top of the hill which gave them a perfect view all over the vally that alse was better know as 'snow vally'.

"Isn´t it beautiful ?"

"You call that beautiful? Well maybe if your mentally sick!! It´s looks like a freaking battlefield! There´s nothing standing..."

Now the whole group stood on the edge of the cliff looking over the totally black valley with the sun going down on the horizon glancing down at the frozen lake.

"It´s a bit bald but when it has snowed it´s just perfect you will see. Now let´s get going I´m starving."

"To where? Like I said before there´s nothing standing is this valley?"

"That´s because the house is underground silly one I thought that it was pretty oblivious."

"Of cooooooooourse it is I should have known you live underground on top of a mountain! Sorry to say this girl but you just made it to the number 1 spot on my most fucked up person list not even teme would live here I think."

"Just for the record if you wane know Naruto-Kun picked this place for me and my sisters and we actualy quite like it."

"Hum really now well Teme-boy sorry to say this but you just went down to number 3. You got anything to say to all this so that I can put you back on spot 1?"

"Fuck off dog boy."

"Uhm sry teme but I ant gay and I already putted that on the list. Anything else that you want to share with the group?"

"Shut up our I will kill you."

"Nope anger impulses are also already on the list."

" Alright, alright that´s enough for now Kiba . This is a escort mission not a 'Get myself killed one' " Stated Kakashi as he looked bored up from his Ichi Ichi paradise book at the due that was preparing for battle as Sasuke pointed this sword at Kiba.

"Jesus what´s the problem with those 2 they´re acting like this the entire trip ?" Yuuma asked at Naruto why was sitting on a rock looking to the horizon. " Kiba was with me when I went on that mission where I tried to bring back Sasuke and during that mission he got quiet hurt will fighting with one sound ninja. Ever since he heard that Sasuke tried to kill me during or fight and didn´t want to come back to Konoha he started to dislike him even tow he never let it shine out it became pretty oblivious after Sasuke´s return and after the council didn´t punished him for his betrayal to Konoha. Come to think about it in the end it was my fault you know if only I could bring him back that day at the valley of end things would have been so much different."

"sigh seems like nothing changed. You know what I have to do now right?"

"Yea but I ant on planning staying here." The blond boy said still looking at the son going down.

"Then you also know that I´m not letting you leave again right?"

"Yea I know but you ant stopping me this time and you ant coming to! Got it?" he starred at her with an angry look at her face.

"But Naruto what about the plan then? Remember?" she answered him with a concurred look

"What plan there is NO plan! The plan died that day! You know that damn good! You and I were both there when saw the 'Plan' died! By my mistake!"

"Hey! We all know what could happen and it happened! There's nothing you can do about that so don't give me that crap that it is your fold !"

"But it is mine!! It was my plan my mistake so it´s my burden and mine only! "

SLAM

"Don´t you dare Naruto don´t you dare!" With that she left Naruto as he still was sitting on the same position and with the same emotion on his face like that nothing happened totally ignoring his crimson red cheek and the red chakra that seemed to started to cover up the wound . All eyes were now locked on him and Kiba & Sasuke where apparently stopped with fighting, Kakashi just started at him with his one eye wide open and his hand holding he's book was hanging somewhere besides him. Sakura just looked at him with a sad face. The only normal stares that he saw where from Sai and Chino as they just where standing there but then he just realised that someone was missing as he looked around he say Hinata standing only 10 feet away from him whit a chocked expression on her face.

'Did they hear what I said? No. But did she? she couldn't right? The others where to far away to hear anything but she is standing so close. Did she hear it? '

10 minutes pasted and now they were standing in front of a large door that was holed out from the mountains rock wall. Yuuma quickly did some hand seals and the door stated to creep open revealing a dark tunnel. As they entered the long dark tunnel lights started to lit up as they walked further into it. Now they could starting to see a gigantic cave inside the mountain! There was even a small river flowing withs had a small red brigs across it and behind all that you could see a large wooden house.

"Ach it´s good to be home so everyone welcome to chorrol!. Now let's get inside so you can meet the family." With that Yuuma stated walking to a large house that she called home

"Woooow this is beautiful how did you ever find this place Naruto?" Sakura asked as she walked throw the cave.

"I found it when I was on my travel with ero-sensei even though he doesn´t know it."

Now that they were standing in front of the door Yuuma gave it small knock and the door opened with a hard bang and revealed a small girl witch looked like 6 years old. She had big blue eyes and short blond hair and 2 whiskers on both side of her cheeks she was Waring a white skirt with a matching blue top.

"Daddy?" she said as she looked at the group who locked all their eyes at her.

"Daddy!!" she said again now looking at the blond boy at the back. "daddy daddy daddy!!" she kept creaming as she run up to Naruto and jumped into his arms. "Daddy your back! You going to teach me that jutsu right? Because you said you when going to teach it to me when you got back! So what is it daddy? A futon one or maybe a doton no no definitely a raiton right? Right?

"Well uh actually I was on planning to teach you a suiton but..." he said with a big smile as he looked at her.

"Wow really a suiton!" With that she jumped out of he´s arms while creaming something like "Teach now!" and she began pulling at he´s hand so that he would follow her couple of seconds later they were gone leaving 7 leaf shinobi stunned behind.

'What the fuck did just happen' was Kiba thinking'

'Not only he has actually a penis he also used it pretty well.'

'hum suddenly this book looks a lot less interesting.'

' Naruto-kun has a child?'

'Ow she´s so cute'

'...'

'Damn he even surpassed me in his sex live?'

'he he seems like a lot of people didn´t know. This could get interesting.'

"Well since does 2 are gone for defiantly a couple of hours why don´t you guys come inside so can meet my sister." Said Yuuma with a big smile as she looked to the group that stood there still frozen.

Couple of minutes later they where all sitting on a large table where easily 30 people could sit on Yuuma called it the small dining room but for them it seemed like a dining hall on the other far end of the table there was one head chair and 8 semi head chairs besides it 4 on eider sides

Behind the 9 chairs there were 9 great frames but only 4 holed a picture apparently there were 2 pictures of Yuuma 1 of the little girl that was Naruto daughter they thought and 1 of Yuuma´s sister who now was standing on the side of the table.

"So welcome everyone in chorrel I´m Ayuri Yuuma´s big sister and I hope we have enough food for all of you guy's because I only expected Naruto-kun and my little sister so enjoy." The brown haired big sister said with that she sat down at the large table beside Yuuma"

With that the group started to eat of the mountains of food that was displayed on the table and something told them that everything here was a lot bigger than normal!

"Oh and if you have any questions be free to ask them now. Because I´m pretty sure you got some right?."

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Version 1.05 23/11/2007

Final chapter 2

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