Yep, c'est moi, back avec un autre update. Excuse le broken francais, I'm in a funny mood aujourd'hui.
celestial dragon rider - Thanks! And yeah, I'm thinking a Yan Lin one is what I'll do next, thanks! I'm also thinking of a Taranee one. I've neglected her kind of.
CCRox4Eva - OMGSH guess what? I've got a paragraph on Elemental Recourse! It's not much but it's better than what I had for the last six months, needless to say, RIEN. So I'm starting again.
Okay, since the Caleb's death one I am still stuck on so this one is what happens if Cornelia dies in war. Horrible, I know, but it could happen... Caleb's POV again. I've used made some allusions to the last poem to show they're linked. Oh, and this is a bit OOC by the way. Then again, most of these are.
Last Breath
Deranged silhouettes in a fight
Not a trace of light
Poisoned word
Silken said
Honeyed blows
Black widow's threads
My will to live lies dormant
Dead
My mind's eye is morphed,
Warped red
Who am I to defy death?
Yet as she struggles for her last breath
I find that I have made her fate
Finally clear, yes, but I saw too late
And as she falls I die as well
But there are things far more fell
One blade shattering this dreary spell
The darkness raising merry hell
It's a bit different from my others but I think you should be able to recognize it. I have an inkling on Taranee, am currently brainstorming for Yan Lin, and trying to conquer Caleb's Death. After that, all is well. Not to mention Arethusa still isnt very pleased avec moi...
Arethusa: ...Stop gibbering in half French like you actually know it, you'll only embarrass yourself.
Me: ...
