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Author's note:

Hello Everyone!!

I'm going to update this fanfiction to correct some of my terrible grammar... Some minor details might be changed in the story but it just so that the timeline will be better.

I want to announce my second fanfiction on Fullmoon Wo Sagashite!!

Could Be Childish Determination

This is also an alternate universe, but I follow most of the plot from the anime but with the characters' depth from the manga… I don't seem clear here… Well you'll have to read it then :P

I planned on using my own song for this one. I hope it won't turn out that bad.

By the way, if I'm not mistaken, Takuto would have been twelve years older than Mistuki if he hadn't die wouldn't he? Well I'm sticking to that in this fanfiction!

Is it wrong to love someone with a big age difference? Since her parents' death, little Mitsuki had been living at the orphanage. There, her father's band mates visited her frequently until the day her grandmother took her in. After that, Takuto went missing. A couple of years later, he reappeared, passing over a line that he didn't want to cross.

This is a story about the hardships of love and how a small girl overcomes it with lots of determination.

I really hope you guys will like it as much as My Sister's Boyfriend.

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Here's a preview:

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"In this life"

"I'm missing so much things out"

"For every whim"

"For every word out of your mouth"

A brown haired sixteen years old girl was singing on stage. Her longs curls were swinging around her as she danced to the music of her song. She seemed fired up, a serious expression on her face.

"In this life"

"I'm tired of me, tired of you, tired of this"

"It's not like"

"You will ever make up for what I missed"

She closed her eyes and twirled with the dancers behind her. The guitarist went up to the front for his solo part. He smiled at the singer as she hopped from side to side, clapping in her hands; the crowd imitating her. She returned him a sad smile as she started singing again.

"I won't take this anymore"

"I'll just walk …"

The words were lost as a deep pain ran through in her throat. She let go of the mic and fell to the stage floor. She couldn't move, it hurt too much. Tears started to slide on her cheeks and she couldn't stop them. She heard the crowd panicking, the dancers, even though their voices seemed so far, were around her. She heard her manager. She heard her producer. She heard the guitarist. She could only cry, the pain was too violent, too unbearable. Why, why couldn't he love her? Why couldn't he be honest? Tears continued to fall down. She couldn't hear anything now, even though the ambulance's siren was noisy, even though it was crowded and everyone was shouting. Everything started to get blurry and turned black as she fell unconscious.

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Review to tell me what you think. Constructive critics are welcome, I really want to improve my writing.