Okay, so apparently the changing the summary's thing worked really well. I got a lot of reviews for the three of my fanfics that I have going right now. Hikosmymanfriend also has one that is going right now. It's called "Cowboys from Hell" and it's a Dragonball Z fic. I would recommend Erren's fic but she takes FOREVER to update. If you still want to check it out, it's "Totally RAD." So...yeah. Also some people asked for me to be more descriptive so I'll try my darndest. (Arkansas word...gotta love it) I have a feeling that I'm almost done...I don't know this could go on for a while. At this point I'm still wondering where to go so if you have any ideas that you think would work...please share them...please.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything in or about the Twilight trilogy. Including the newborn vampires that seem to be popping up everywhere in this story.
Everything happened so fast. I don't know what is up with these vampires. They are coming up everywhere. I didn't know that so many creatures walked our planet along side us. It's scary. Right now...is scary. There we were, sitting in Jacob's vehicle and this vampire walks out into the middle of the road. I mean, Jake is technically just flat out telling me that he loves me and that thing has to ruin our moment. And it was the first moment I've had in a long time. Of course Jake has to fight the thing or it won't go away. Persistent little devils!! It's getting to the point where they're pissing me off and I'm not going to take it anymore. This has just got to stop!!
Jacob opened the car door, stepped out and then shut it nearly ripping it off it's hinges. He locks the door behind him just as I reach to open it myself.
"Your going to stay in here." he said in a demanding tone. I dumbly nod my head, not being able to do anything else. Jacob walks out in front of the Rabbit. His tall form prevents me from seeing the vampire. But I can hear it. It's breath comes out in fast whistling breaths. It's breathing becomes more ragged as the tension grows. As I've come to expect of these fights, the vampire strikes first. Jacob crouches into a defensive position right before a jolt racks his body.
"Why didn't he dodge." I am whispering to myself without realizing it. I started to nervously comb through my slightly fluffy red hair. I huffed. This kind of tension frizzes it out. (Ok (little side note) this is what people said they wanted to know more about, what Emma looks like so here you go! she says happily maybe a little too happy)
All through the fight, Jacob stayed in front of the car, letting the creature his him. Occasionally he'd take a swipe at it. All in all, Jacob was taking more damage. I clenched my eyes shut when Jake's back made contact with the hood of the car. There was a pause before I heard a wrenching noise. I peeked through my fingers and screamed. To my right the vampire was trying to open my door. His face was stark right making it's eyes stand out even more. It's red eyes were wide and it's tongue lolled out of it's mouth. I scurried to the driver's side of the vehicle hoping that it wouldn't break through. All my hopes were futile as the monster wrenched the door open with one last jerk and started crawling in towards me. I closed my eyes for one last time but the pain never came. All I felt was a jerk of the vehicle. When I was sure that when I opened my eyes I wouldn't greet a vampire I cautiously peeked out. Outside the opened space (where a door used to be) a red-brown dog was tossing around the vampire by it's back. The giant animal shook it's head like it was playing with a chew-toy. The vampire that was hanging out of it's mouth constantly switched from a hiss to a whine. Jacob, getting tired of it's existence, put it on it's stomach on the ground and quickly covered it with his paw. I turned away as he, piece by piece, started to shred it into pieces. The hissing and screams that penetrated the air made me cover my ears but they soon died abruptly. I then heard a whining and looked up to see Jacob pawing at something on the ground. In desperation, he looked up at me. I widened my eyes in realization. I jumped out of the hole in the car and rand towards him. My adrenaline was pumping as I picked up a box of matches that had flown out of his pocket when he changed. My fingers trembled as I tried to light a match and run over to the bits of flesh at the same time. I finally got it lit. I looked down at the trembling parts that were trying to regenerate. It was sad to know that that used to be a human being and now...I flung the match over the pile and set it ablaze. And now it doesn't matter. I stood there with my head down and my eyes shut. I could feel the heat of the fire on my face as the wind blew the embers around. A furry muzzled rubbed against my arm. I turned around to meet warm black eyes that seemed to ask me "Was I okay?" Tears streamed down my face as I bent down and hugged Jacob's neck. I buried my face in his fur and grabbed a handful in each fist. I sobbed until the fire burnt out and the putrid smoke lifted to the sky.
Hmmmmm...this one was interesting. As you can tell, I decided to do this chapter in Emma's point of view. I probably should have done that in earlier chapters but...oh well. So did you like it?!!? I tried to be more descriptive. Give me a heads up if you think this one was better. Which means you're gonna have to review! You know what I'm gonna have to put a semi-colon in here because I forgot; some people demand them. HAHAHAHAH! Be in waiting for the next chapter.
