Love Hina: A Change of Pace by Mr. Lee
Disclaimer: This fanfiction is for entertainment purposes only. The author of this fanfiction does not own Love Hina or its characters. Love Hina is owned by Ken Akamatsu. Any other similarities are purely coincidental.
Special Mini Author's Note: Hey LH fans :)! Just a quick Author note. Due to the INSANE amount of e-mails and PM's I received from this chapter in regards to Maya Natsume of Tenjho Tenge in TWO DAYS (Sheesh :b.), she will now be added to the poll of who Keitaro should be with. However, the mini poll from last chapter still stands. So cast your votes if you want the sexy goddess of fight to enter the fray for Keitaro's heart.
And to the anonymous reviewer S.U.S. in regards to your review, I have this to say. If you paid attention to the chapter, the attack Motoko used in the chapter is from the anime/manga (Motoko first used Raimeiken in chapter 74), and its power was increased due to the thunderstorm, despite the fact that its the LOWEST version of the lightning ki attack. It's true that Shinmeiryu is a martial art, but in both hand to hand and weapons, it uses the power of Ki and the elements with powerful results, which Motoko from LH and Setsuna from Negima have proven time and again. And for the record, I've read my friend Tezza1502's LH stories, and he has NOT overdone it with Motoko. In fact, I applaud him for his use of the technique in A friend in need, including adding a background as to why he used the technique in the way he did. Don't get the wrong idea. I have no intention of 'overdoing it', but Ken Akamatsu created Shinmeiryu so to speak, and to tell me what you told me in your review (And there was no need to be rude, my friend.) is like telling him to stop doing it in his works. And believe me, he's more extreme with it compared to the fic authors who do fanfiction on his stuff. Akamatsuverse fans of both LH and Negima know this. So calm down, enjoy the story, and try not to be too critical on minor stuff. Consider it friendly advice from a martial artist in reality.
Until next time, thanks for the responses for my new chapter. Later for now :).
Extra Note as of 12/11/12: The Poll is now closed, with Kei/Harem coming out the winner. Maya Natsume has also been removed from the story. See my Author's note 2 in Chapter 4. Chapter 5 is coming soon, so stay tuned. Later for now :).
