Not in Naruto story, made up by me.

The Jinchuuriki Monster

"Guess today is our lucky day, huh Itachi?" Smiled Kisame. Itachi stood there starring at Naruto, Naruto got mad and said, "it's your fault." "What are you talking about kid," said Kisame. Naruto got madder and then pointed a finger at Itachi, "IT'S YOUR FAULT SASUKE LEFT!" Itachi didn't say anything, but kept starring at him, giving him the evil look.

"Isn't Sasuke your brother, Itachi?" Asked Kisame. "Yes he is, and I did nothing to make him leave," "Yes you did! You told him he wasn't strong enough, so he went to Orochimaru!" Yelled Naruto, mad at Itachi for letting his best friend leave the village. Itachi kept looking at Naruto, as Naruto got madder and madder.

"Naruto! Hinata!" Yelled Kiba from behind Naruto. "Kiba," said Naruto looking behind him as Kiba appeared. He stopped where Naruto was and looked at Kisame and Itachi.

"Who are these guys?" Asked Kiba. Akamaru made a whimper sound from Kiba's jacket as he hid lower. "Akamaru what is it?" Asked Kiba. "Enough talk, let's just kill these distractions and then take the jinchuuriki," said Kisame, grabbing a hold on his sword. "Right," said Itachi, making his eyes into the sharingan.

"Like hell I'm going to leave with you guys, I'm going to kill you so Sasuke can come back!" Said Naruto. "Come on Akamaru, we have to fight them," said Kiba to his jacket, but Akamaru was so low in his jacket that you couldn't see his head.

All of a suddenly, Kisame appeared behind them and threw a huge swing with his sword, Kiba and Naruto barely avoided by jumping away. "I'll take the dog boy, you take care of the jinchuuriki, but don't kill him," said Kisame. Itachi didn't say anything, but starred at Naruto.

Kisame jumped at Kiba with his sword and tried to hit him, but Kiba blocked it with kunais and tried to hold him back so his sword won't hit him, "you're a strong one," smiled Kisame. Kiba kept holding him back as sweat came down his face.

Naruto took out a kunai and got ready to attack, "I don't know why you guys want me, but there's no way I'm leaving with a guy like you!" Itachi didn't say anything. Naruto did a hand sign, "shadow clone jutsu!" A lot of Narutos appeared, they all ran at Itachi, Itachi dodged all of them as he did some kicks to poof them gone. Then one of Itachi's eyes saw something above and saw two Narutos doing something.

When all the Narutos were gone from the ground he heard, "rasengan!" From above him and dodged right in time before Naruto hit him, the wind from the rasengan hitting the ground caused Itachi to skid across the ground with his feet.

The result was a huge dent in the ground, Naruto was mad that he missed, "how did he know I was coming?" Thought Naruto to himself.

Hinata watched in horror as Naruto and Kiba fought, she tried to think of something to help them, but she knew she wasn't strong enough for those two.

Kiba got a big burst of strength and pushed Kisame away, "fine I'll do this myself," he said going into his attack stance, "fang over fang!" He said, making a big tornado of himself, right at Kisame. Kisame stopped it with his sword; the pressure was pretty strong for him, so his feet skid a little bit on the ground.

Kiba jumped away when he was finished, Kiba was mad because he didn't get to hit him, "Come on Akamaru! I need you!" Said Kiba looking down at his jacket, then Kisame came up to him, Kiba wasn't paying attention to the fight, so the sword gave him a huge hit as Kiba flew and hit the ground. "Kiba!" Yelled Hinata.

Meanwhile, Naruto made some more clones and tried a different stragety, but that didn't work, Naruto skid across the floor when Itachi hit him. "Your weak, just like my brother, your whole village is weak and always was," said Itachi. Naruto got up slowly, "your wrong and I'm going to prove it by kicking your ass!" More clones appeared and ran at Itachi.

"Now to take your chakra," said Kisame, walking up to Kiba and moved his sword toward Kiba, but when it was really close to Kiba, Akamaru jumped out of Kiba's jacket and bit Kisame on the hand. "AAAAHHHHH!!" Yelled Kisame, as he dropped the sword next to Kiba, "Akamaru..." "GET THIS DOG OFF OF ME!" Yelled Kisame.

Itachi heard him and moved his eyes to look, "don't look away!" Said one of the Narutos, about to hit him, but Itachi ducked and hit him in the stomach, causing a poof.

Kisame grabbed Akamaru with his other hand and tried to pull him off, but Akamaru had a good grip on his hand. "GET OFF!" Yelled Kisame, who decided to hit Akamaru on the ground, and it worked because Akamaru was hit on the head and passed out, probably with a concussion.

"Akamaru!" Yelled Kiba. "Annoying pest," said Kisame, looking at his wound. Kiba got mad and grabbed Kisame's sword, "I'm going to kill you for that!" Kisame looked at him, "I wouldn't touch that if I were you." Kiba looked at the sword, and sensed something coming, he dropped the sword, but it was too quick for him. Spikes jumped out of the handle and cut Kiba's hands. "AAAHHHH!!!!" The sword returned to Kisame.

"Kiba!" Yelled Hinata, she knew she had to do something now, she ran at Kisame, "byakugan!" Itachi noticed Hinata and knew Kisame wouldn't dodge in time, so he left Naruto and appeared in front of her. She was surprised, and then he hit her in the stomach and then back handed her, causing her to fall and hit the ground. "Hinata!" Yelled Naruto.

"Thanks, I didn't see her coming," said Kisame, "take her chakra, she seems she'll get in the way," said Itachi as he walked away. "Alright," said Kisame as he walked up to her. "NO!" Yelled Naruto running to her. "Hinata.." said Kiba, he reached into his pocket and got out some bandage tape to bandage himself, so he can help.

Naruto was going to do the clone justu to stop Kisame, but then Itachi appeared in front of him, Naruto jumped over him, but Itachi was too quick and grabbed his foot, causing Naruto to hit the ground.

Kisame reached Hinata, Hinata was holding her stomach in pain as she coughed. "Don't worry, I'll get you out of your misery," smiled Kisame as he raised his sword and threw his sword at her. Hinata closed her eyes for the impact, but then she heard someone stop the sword, she looked and saw Naruto holding the sword back with his hands. "I won't let you hurt her," said Naruto. Kisame smiled, Naruto all of a sudden felt weak and fell to his knees. "Naruto," said Hinata. "Maybe I should have done this in the first place, I didn't think the jinchuuriki would be this weak," said Kisame.

"Byakugan!" Hinata jumped at Kisame, Kisame tried dodging her, but she managed to hit him on the arm, causing him to drop his sword. "I can't feel my arm!" Yelled Kisame. "Now it's my chance," she thought. She jumped at him, but all of a sudden Itachi jumped at her and punched her, causing her to fly, but Kiba appeared and stopped her before she hit the ground.

"You again," said Kisame. Itachi walked up to him, Kiba put Hinata down and went into his attack stance, "fang over fang!" A tornado ran toward Itachi, Itachi went around it, looked at the tornado, reached out a hand, found out where Kiba was, and grabbed him by his neck.

The tornado stopped, Kiba was trying to make Itachi stop, but he was losing air. "Dispose of him!" Yelled Kisame, Itachi threw Kiba so hard, he went flying through a bush and into a tree. "Stop it, stop hurting my friends," said Naruto moving to his feet slowly, Itachi walked up to him and looked him in the eyes. "tsukuyomi," Naruto's eyes grew big, as he went into a weird place, it was all red.

Then he realized it was the leaf village, he walked around with no one in sight, "hello?!" He called out; he turned a corner and saw bodies and blood everywhere. He got scared and saw in the corner, a familiar body, it was Shikamaru, dead. Then all of a sudden, all the bodies were familiar, Chouji, Shino, Tenten, all his teammates, dead. "No..." He moved back with horror, "stop it!" He heard a voice from one of the stores, "NO!" A body flew out of one the windows; it was Ino, with a kunai in her heart. "Ino...."

"Naruto!" He turned to his right, there was Sakura running toward him, "Sakura!" Said Naruto in a happy way, but all of a sudden, a kunai was thrown from behind him and hit Sakura right in the heart, she spitted out blood and fell to the ground. "SAKURA!" He then noticed someone was behind him, he looked and there was Itachi. "You bastard!"

"Naruto!" He looked and saw Hinata on the roof above him, but there was a rope around her neck and someone was pushing her; Itachi. "No....." She struggled to get away, but her hands were tied, "Naruto!" She said coming closer and closer to the edge, Naruto was frozen from fear as he watched Itachi push Hinata off the roof, "AAAHHHHH........." She yelled, but stopped as her feet hanged in front of Naruto, "AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!" He screamed grabbing his head.

Hinata watched Naruto as he was screaming, Kisame watched him and smiled. "Stop it......your hurting him..." she said softly, trying to get up. Naruto screamed again as he grabed his head, "STOP IT! STOP KILLING MY FRIENDS!" He yelled and then he fell to the ground as his headband fell off, shaking with fear. "Alright, lets get going," said Kisame as he put his sword away and picked up Naruto with his working head and hanged him on his shoulder.

Itachi's eyes went back to normal and started panting, because that tecnique used a lot of chakra. He then started walking with Kisame following, "no..." said Hinata, finally on her feet, "I won't let you take him." Her eyes went into byakugan state, she charged at Kisame, ready to hit him in his back with Sixty-Four Palms, but before she could hit him; Itachi came out of nowhere and grabbed her throat.

Kisame stopped and looked, "go ahead, I'll finish her off," said Itachi as he took out a kunai. Kisame nodded, turned around, and walked away. Naruto opened his eyes slowly and saw Itachi choking Hinata, "Hinata....stop..it," he said in a weak voice.

Hinata starred at Naruto as he got farther and farther away, tears came down her face, "Naruto...." she said, trying to get some air."Crying won't do anything," said Itachi, then he lifted his arm ready to hit her. "No....don't...hurt..her," said Naruto as he closed his eyes.

Then all of a suddenly, Naruto appears in a familiar place, he walks slowly toward a cage and sees two huge eyes looking at him. "If you want to save your friend, then you should let me use your body," said the nine tailed fox demon. Naruto got a weird feeling, "remove this seal and I will save your friend." Naruto knew that this demon is powerful and using its chaka saved him many times, but letting out this much chakra, could mean trouble.

"What will happen if I remove this?" Asked Naruto, "I will defiantly save your friend and kill that guy you want to kill so badly, is that a deal?" Naruto wasn't sure if he wanted to do this, but he didn't want to lose another friend. He walked up slowly to the seal, he moved his hand slowly to the seal, but he stopped and got nervous, "what's the matter, scared of a little power?" Smiled the nine tail fox. Naruto was then sure of this and ripped the seal, red smoke rushed out of the cage, covering Naruto so he couldn't see.

Red bubbles formed on Naruto's body, Kisame stopped walking and looked at him, "um...Itachi I think you should look at this." Itachi stopped in time to not stab Hinata and looked, ears formed and one tail formed, "awesome, the jinchuuriki chakra is coming out, if only I had my sword right now, I would take it" said Kisame.

Out of nowhere, Naruto's tail whipped and hit Kisame on the face. He fell to the ground as Naruto landed on all fours with his head still down. "Let Hinata go!" Said Naruto, but there was something weird about his voice. He lifted his head, showing his red eyes, fangs, and more. Itachi just starred at him as he choked Hinata, a second tail formed as he got madder.

Then he charged at Itachi, Itachi waited for the right moment; when it came, he threw Hinata at him, Naruto was surprised and caught her before he hurt her. Hinata coughed as she tried to get air, Naruto looked at her and then at Itachi with a very mad face, "you hurt her!" Itachi stood there without a word.

Naruto put Hinata down and then charged at Itachi with full force, Itachi quickly went into sharingan, but since he's weak, Naruto scratched off some pieces of his robe. Naruto skid on the floor for a bit and then charged again.

Naruto was too fast for Itachi, but he barely dodged as Naruto scratched his arm; pieces of Itachi's robe fell to the floor with a little blood as he held his arm. "I'll kill you for taking Sasuke and hurting my friends!" Yelled Naruto as he stood on fours ready to attack Itachi again as a third tail emerged.

Hinata noticed something weird about him and got scared, "that's not Naruto…" she thought. Kisame quickly grabbed his sword and ran to help Itachi, Naruto jumped at Itachi, but Kisame jumped in front of Itachi and got ready to hit Naruto. Kisame smiled, knowing he got him, but when he hit him, there was a poof, "A CLONE!" Yelled Kisame.

Itachi heard something behind him and quickly jumped out of the way, but Kisame was too slow and got a big rasengan right in the stomach. Kisame went flying into a tree as his sword lay on the floor.

Naruto got madder because he missed Itachi, "ITACHI!" Yelled Naruto and then he started to close his eyes like he was in pain as a fourth tail emerged slowly, he yelled a huge yell as more details on his face got worse and more evil.

Hinata watched with a scared face as Naruto changed into a totally different person. Itachi knew this wasn't good; he was already weak as it is, so he had to think of something fast to escape for now.

Naruto ran to Itachi with so much speed that Itachi got hurt a little bit everytime Naruto kept running to him. Itachi couldn't take this anymore, so there was only one thing to do to escape.

He quickly got to a spot where Kisame was thrown to and yelled, "amaterasu!" Black fire went around Naruto really fast; the flames were really high and hot so Naruto couldn't jump over them, he got mad, "ITACHI!" Itachi quickly grabbed Kisame's sword, Kisame, and then ran.

Hinata watched with big eyes as the flames quickly got lower and lower and she saw Naruto running around trying to find a way out like an animal. Hinata couldn't take this anymore, got up, and yelled, "Naruto stop! They left, and Kiba's hurt!" Naruto turned and looked at Hinata with such a scary look that she got nervous.

When the flames were gone he ran at Hinata, Hinata stood there not knowing what to do. He grabbed her arms with his claws and dug them into her skin; she closed her eyes from the pain and started shaking from fear, "Naruto…..you're hurting me…" He just growled at her and dug deeper. "Naruto…..please?" She said as she looked into his eyes, but they weren't the same eyes she fell in love with.

Kiba crawled out of the bush he was laying in and saw Naruto about to bite Hinata, "Naruto! Stop it!" He yelled running toward him, but he wouldn't stop, so he threw a kunai at him, but his tail whipped it away. Naruto looked at him with annoyed eyes, when Kiba ran to stop Naruto, he just whipped his tail really hard at him and Kiba skid across the floor.

"Ki…ba.." said Hinata with pain, Naruto looked back at Hinata and growled. "Naruto…please..stop," said Hinata as she started crying. Naruto dug deeper, slowly opened his mouth, and then rushed in to bite her face off.

"NARUTO!!!!!!!" Yelled Hinata, he stopped in time and looked at her, his eyes turned to normal, "…Hinata…" He took out his claws from her arms and then started yelling, grabbing his head, as the bubbles started to fade away.

Hinata flew to her knees and grabbed her arms from the pain, Kiba ran to her, "are you ok?" "Ya," said Hinata. Naruto gave out another yell of pain, "Naruto…"

All the bubbles left from Naruto's body as he stood panting, "Naruto?" Asked Hinata as she slowly got up, Kiba helped her a little. Naruto turned around and looked at Hinata with a sad face, Hinata made a relieved face, but Kiba just gave him a dirty look.

He took a step toward her, but Kiba said, "don't take another step!" "Kiba, what is it?" Asked Hinata. Kiba walked in front of Hinata to block her, "Kiba what are you doing?" Asked Hinata. "I won't let you near her!" Yelled Kiba.

"What? Why?" Asked Naruto. "Because you hurt her! You MONSTER!" Naruto made a surprised face, "Kiba, please!" Yelled Hinata. "You are a monster and always were!" Yelled Kiba. Naruto got more surprised, "no…I'm…" "I bet if you were never living in the village, no one would have gotten hurt! And those guys would have leaved us alone! And there would be no one of your kind living in the village!" Yelled Kiba angrily. "KIBA! You don't mean that!" Yelled Hinata. "Yes, I mean every word. I wish the fourth hokage never put that nine tailed fox in you," said Kiba. "KIBA!" Yelled Hinata.

Naruto eyes started shaking from sadness and looked at his hands, "monster…." A flashback comes to him when he was alone, crying as everyone called him monster. He closed his eyes and fists from madness, turned away, and ran.

"Naruto!" Yelled Hinata starting to run after him, but stopped because the pain from her arms was too great. "Hinata, we have to go back to the village and get you healed," said Kiba. "We can't leave without Naruto!" Said Hinata.

"Trust me, I think we'll be better of without him," said Kiba. Hinata got mad, turned around and gave him a big slap across the face. Kiba made a surprised face and put his hand on his cheek. "Don't you dare say that!" Yelled Hinata.

She turned away with sad eyes and saw Naruto's headband lying in front of her feet. She went to her knees and picked it up slowly as tears came down her face, she put the headband to her heart and cried more, "Naruto…..please come back."


You guys can get mad at me for taking forever, Senior Year is so troubling. College is probably going to be worse, so don't inspect another chapter soon.

By the way, sorry for the categorying thing, I thought it meant main characters, not pairings.