PLEASE READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK so a lot of you guys think my story sucks. Im sorry. this is my first fic so i need help. in your reviews say what im doing wrong. TY, spirate117.
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"Are you serious!" Naruto said, the look on his face invented a new word for surprised.
"Yes I am" Rai said, his grey eyes looking onward to nowhere.
"How can I-" Naruto started but heard a voice in the back of his head.
"Listen to him kit, he's telling the truth. Wow, I never thought I'd see Hachibi again." Kyuubi said amused.
"To prove it to you here he is in the flesh, Hachibi-bunshin no jutsu!" Rai said as a clone poofed into existence. He looked like Rai but had slitted green eyes, talons, and 2 wings out of his back.
"Finally! It's about time I get to stretch. OK boy, perform a bunshin with demon chakra." Hachibi said.
"Hai, Kyuubi-bunshin no jutsu!" Naruto yelled as a Naruto poofed with orange hair and red ears.
"Wow cool jutsu now I can run for it!" (thud) "What the?" Kyuubi said as she hit the ground after trying to run for the hills.
"Sorry won't work tried it." Hachibi said with a look that screamed annoyance.
"Wow you really are Hachibi." Naruto stated poking him.
"What'd I tell you," Rai began. "Anyway... I am going to personally train you since I'm probably the best sensei you could have. BUT that does not mean I'll go easy on you got it?" Rai said as both clones poofed out.
"Hai." Naruto replyed
"Oh and Tenten you can come out" Rai said gesturing her to come over.
"eep" She squealed at being caught.
"I assume she knows" Rai said questioning Naruto.
"Yes, we are best friends, no secrets at all." Naruto proudly explained.
"OK then." Rai said looking pleased that he found a friend.
"Now I forgot that graduation party's tomorrow so Tenten tell Sakura there's no test." Rai said sheepishly.
"Fine" As she walked off she huffed at going to the pinkettes house whom she despised so much.
"Naruto I'm gonna teach you a new jutsu to use tomorrow, you love big entrances right?" Rai said with a grin on his face.
"Oh yeah!" Naruto said sharing his sensei's grin.
"Perfect." As he taught Naruto one of new favorite jutsus.
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R&R (the fanfic R&R not the one where you sit on the couch eating Cheetos)
Spirate117
