Okay, I've never really read the Romeo and Juliet play, but I know a few things about it, like the key parts. If these weren't in the actual play, I hope you can forgive me, but you also have to remember. This is a rewrite. Thank you my two reviewers! Now I update for you! I noticed that one of you is the famous mankinfan I've heard about! Thank you for reviewing!
"You are the morning sun, rising over the earth to shine on the land."
"Romeo, dear Romeo, we shall be together at last!"
"This elixir with put you in a death like state. You will cease to breath, your heart will slow, and your skin shall pale as the dead."
"Die Tybalt, for killing Mercutio."
"Excellent! I enjoy how emotionless you are when you speak of death." Dr. Thespian said. "Although, it seems you don't portray emotion at all. Juliet, my Juliet. You did a wonderful job! Now, tomorrow we'll finish the run through of the actual play and then you can edit the script as you like."
Pirika giggled and nodded as she was praised by the Drama teacher.
Because I can portray my love to him so openly when I'm Juliet! It's like we're really lovers.
"Paris, you were wonderful." the director said. "Interferring with their love almost every waking moment. Perfect!"
Horohoro smiled sheepishly, rubbing the back of his head.
Only because Pirika deserves more than that Emo bastard.
"Thank you Mercutio, that was your last scene. Your portrayal of death was absolutely wonderful." the Drama teacher said. "I'll see you at the rewrite meeting."
"Mwe hehe." Yoh giggled, smiling.
I just fell asleep...It was nothing.
"And thank you for being my emotionless Romeo. Although, we have to rewrite the script to make that look good."
Ren turned his glare at the floor, ignoring his praise as he thought to himself.
Horohoro's an idiot for dragging me in here. I have better things to do than be an idiot in what they call "love."
"You're dismissed!"
Ren tossed off the ridiculous clothes he was forced to wear as Romeo as soon as the dissmissal was called and walked out shirtless, grabbing his top along with his backpack on the way out. The girls who had saw him blushed deeply and turned away as he left hastily. All except Pirika, of course.
"Come on Piri, we're going to Yoh's house." Horohoro said, also tossing off his garments. He was, however, wearing a shirt underneath, so Pirika was grateful as the other girls were disappointed when they headed to the locker rooms.
"Coming nii-chan!" Pirika said. She had finished changing already and went to follow the three to Yoh's place to toss around ideas again.
Ren of course, didn't bother putting on his shirt and hung it across his shoulder while he walked, staring into the fluffy, white clouds. The younger Ainu had problems looking away from the Chinese shaman's tattooed back while he bickered with her older brother, still staring upward into the skies.
"You suck as Romeo." Horohoro said. "An- OW!"
"I didn't intend to be a good actor." Ren said, putting away his threatening kwan dao. "You dragged me into this without my consent. Besides, you as Paris means you're fighting for your sister's love. It doesn't make sense so you don't have the right to call me an insufficient actor."
"We should bring that up during the rewrite meeting." Yoh said, opening the front door. "Here, welcome, welcome. Just remember to take your shoes off. Anna will kill me if she finds dustprints on the floor."
"Alright. I got it." the snowboarder said.
They all sat around the dining table, Ren looking through the script with Yoh and Horohoro while Pirika continually switched glances between her script and Ren.
"I don't want to drink poison." Ren drawled. "It seems too cowardly for the type of character that I portray."
"You think going out by stabbing yourself is better?" Pirika asked. "I commit suicide right after I see you dead."
"Much better. Very much so."
"Man, Ren. You're Emo to the max." Horohoro said. "Stabbing? Come on."
"Whatever." Ren said. "Just as Emo as you are an idiot."
"So you're really Emo?"
"You just confirmed your idiocy."
"It's true." Yoh added.
The brunette was playing around with the character traits while the two began their daily tradition to verbally fight.
What if Paris didn't want Juliet? Maybe we could switch those two parts to make it fit for Horohoro. Then he wouldn't really be competing for Pirika.
He scribbled a few things out and wrote things in.
But then, if we switched Pirika and Horohoro's character traits, then wouldn't Horohoro want Ren and Ren want Horohoro? Then Pirika would want Horohoro too.
The Asakura looked over at the two who were currently arguing.
I guess it could work... but they would probably both kill me. Let's go for something different then. Besides, that would make Pirika want Horohoro and that's not what we need in the play.
He played around with the script a bit and then stopped to take a break when Ren and Horohoro got physical with their argument. Horohoro was definately going to lose since it was his snowboard against Ren's kwan dao.
"Hey, hey. We're not here to argue."
They both turned their glares at him, then sat down, putting away their weapons with a huff.
"So what have you decided to do? I saw you playing with the script, so..." Pirika said.
"Eh, I'll discuss it at the meeting." Yoh said. "It's not that big."
It actually is, you just don't need to know. Probably would get mad at me if I said I had Pirika compete with her own brother for Ren and had her lose to Horohoro.
"So we'll all meet back on the meeting Monday?" Horohoro asked.
"Since I have an important part. I'll have to be at the audition tomorrow." Ren spat bitterly. "Otherwise my grades will inconspicuously drop. Or so that he threatened."
"Alright. I already died, so I don't have to appear tomorrow. I have all day afterschool to do homework." Yoh said. "I'll see you guys in the hallways."
Ren stood up, gave his goodbyes, and headed home, Horohoro following the suit just as Anna got home. Pirika grabbed her shoes and waved goodbye to Anna as she left and the Kyoya waved her off, going into the house to greet her fiance.
"Yoh?" she asked icily.
The brunette flinched as he turned to her.
"Yes Anna?"
"Are these dustprints on the floor?"
How did you like my ending? Funny? Please review, again, I'm aiming for at least two reviews!
