The First Battle

With Kagome

'I need to take him out quickly. If I try to do a ninjutsu, he will just copy them. Illusions won't work. His sharingan will make it almost impossible to beat him in taijutsu. I can try to wear him down and pull out some of my original techniques, but that may not be completely effective. I may have to call upon my skills as a priestess, but I would rather not. If I can keep up the element of surprise and use my hidden weapons, that may work I mean I already succeeded in tagging him. If only my dagger and cut deeper in the leg, he doesn't seem to be affected at all. I can't give up. I've been worse situations, none come to mind right now but I can handle this. I can beat him in taijutsu if I try and I have a wider variety in weapons than he thinks.' Kagome thought as she saw the blood trail slowly down his leg, her gaze fell to her sandal where the blade of a dagger stuck out. She then looked up and met his eyes; she smiled as she charged again. He avoided all kicks and seemed to have the ability to block every punch she threw. She was slowly pushing him back; she acknowledged that in the least. However she didn't have time to celebrate as he made a clever move and was able to knee her in the stomach. She was forced to inhale sharply as he then landed a kick that threw her back several yards. Kagome landed on her feet and glared lightly at him, she tried to form a plan.

"As I said you can't beat me in a taijutsu fight." Itachi said as he focused on the task at hand, he was finding hard not to try and get his hands on her in a different way. Her features appeared even more beautiful to him as he watched her change into the warrior before him. 'She is very fast; I can barely match her speed. She also is stronger than she looks. I didn't expect that she would be able to physically over power me.' Itachi thought as he decided to take the offense. He ran at her and was able to get in a few kicks that she was barely able to dodge. When he brought his fists into the fight she blocked and tried to maneuver away from him. He tried to keep close seeing in her clear blue eyes that she had a plan and was hoping to execute it in the near future. He aimed a round house kick and she used it in a way to put distance between them. She pulled out a scroll and quickly unsealed an earthy looking whip.

"Thorn Whip." Kagome said out loud as she snapped it out and evil looking thorns appeared randomly along the whip. He looked in puzzlement before he met her eyes. He was then forced repeatedly to dodge as she relentlessly came after him. Her skill was seen as she was able to control the whip like it was nothing more than an extension of her arm.

Sasuke jumped out of the way when a water dragon missile was fired his way. She looked out the corner of his eye to see that Kagome had summoned up her thorn whip. She was in trouble. Sasuke had trained an average of nine hours a day with her; he knew many of her favorite moves. The whip was one she favored when all odds were against her. She had told him that one of her companions when she was a child had used a whip formed out of poison. She wielded her whip in his memory, he had thought that it would be a useful tool for her to use. He had even disappeared one day only to come back a week later with the whip. It had been made by a weapon specialist and it had one of her favorite seeds sleeping in the core.

"Pay attention to your own fight!" Kisame yelled as he attacked Sasuke with his Samehada, he pulled Sasuke out of his thoughts. Sasuke turned sharply and blocked with his own sword. The Bengosha was a weapon of a warrior and it seemed to have the ability to endure anything. No amount of physical strength could bend or break the sword. On top of that it was amazingly light so that Sasuke could achieve speeds far beyond the imagination. The only problem was that Kisame's huge blade overwhelmed his senses. By angling his blade Kisame could still try and get a hit on Sasuke who would then be forced to pull back.

"Fire Element, Grand Fire Ball!" Sasuke yelled as he took his aim and went for a knockout against his opponent. When the fireball passed there was no body, Sasuke focused and tried to locate his enemy. He did find him, right behind the busy Kagome. His eyes widened as he looked and saw the Samehada about to come down on her.

With Naruto

'Please be alright, everyone.' Naruto thought as he followed Kakashi on the way to Suna. He was worried about Kagome and Sasuke, but he knew that they could hold their own. He was most worried about Gaara, who was so very much like himself. They both were demon vessels; they both knew what it was like to be hated by everyone for something that they had no control over. They were both wanted by Akatsuki as well; the thing that they had no control over was further ruining their lives. The main difference between him and Gaara was that Naruto could use the demon's chakra without losing control, thanks to Kagome.

Flashback

"Naruto, who have the nine-tailed demon inside you. I don't know what's it has been like living your life, but this curse does have some benefits." Kagome said as she sat across from him in a clearing located three miles outside of Konoha.

"What do you mean?" Naruto asked as he gave Kagome his full attention. In the months they had been teammates she had taught him many things. Kagome was also the first person his age to treat him as an equal instead of some lower being.

"You can heal any wound with just a night's sleep, which sounds like a benefit to me." Kagome said as she shifted position and leaned back slightly. She looked Naruto dead in the eye and smiled mischievously, "If you learned to call upon the foxes chakra you could theoretically escape from any genjutsu and you would be able to fire off hire powered ninjutsu all day." She finished as she leaned back on her arms just a little bit more.

"Really?!" Naruto yelled in excitement as he almost jumped right to his feet.

"The problem is that you would lose yourself and the demon would take control." Kagome said as she sat back up and looked his gaze in hers.

"Then how is that a benefit?" Naruto questioned in annoyance.

"If you train you body to handle a massive amount of chakra and you train your body to the best physical shape you have. You would be able to handle part of the fox's chakra. Right now I would say that you barely dip your fingers into the power of Kyuubi. If you train you mind and come to some sort of agreement with the fox you would be able to handle seven or eight times the amount. Just remember that you shouldn't come to depend on the fox's chakra. The best weapon you will ever come across will be whatever skills you learn to harness by yourself, without help from another source."

"What do you mean come to an agreement with the fox?" Naruto asked as he narrow as he looked at Kagome with suspicion. She just answered by holding up a sacred sutra, not that Naruto knew what that was.

"This is a sacred sutra." Kagome said when she saw the confusion on Naruto's face, "This was used long ago by priests and priestess in order to protect their villages from the power of those who would other wise do their people harm." She added hoping to fill in her clueless friend.

"What will it do?" Naruto asked as he started to form an idea as to what Kagome was thinking. She just smiled when she realized that the light in his mind had finally turned on.

"This sutra will protect the inner workings of the mind and keep up in control. So what do you say?" As she talked as had began forming a seal on the ground, it looked complicated so Naruto decided to trust his instincts.

"Let's do it!" He yelled and he watched as Kagome summoned some kind of pink energy into her hand and channeled it into the sutra, "Will this really worked." He asked mere moments before the sutra connected with his head.

"How would I know?" Kagome asked and Naruto's eyes widened.

"WHA…" Naruto was never finished as he was forced into unconsciousness do the seal implanting itself around his mind.

End Flashback

'I've never really tested the seal that much; I wonder how well it works.' Naruto thought as he realized that he had blanked out for quiet some time. The sun had traveled far down the horizon, only a faint glow could be seen. The rest of his group was slowing down as they looked for a place to rest for the night. Naruto went back to his thoughts, the next morning after the sutra had been put on him he had waken up in his bed. When he had tried to talk to Kagome, she had looked at him and just laughed as she started walking away. Later that day he had left with Jiraiya, he wasn't completely sure how long his control over the fox would last.

"If we rest now and rise early we should be able to reach Suna by noon tomorrow." Temari said as she without knowing pulled Naruto out of his daze. They landed on the ground next to an existing fire pit.

"Do you think this was where Sasuke and Kagome camped?" Sakura asked as she looked around the small clearing.

"Nope." Naruto said simply as he made himself comfortable against a tree.

"Why not?" Sakura questioned as she made a small fire and then sat directly across from Naruto.

"Last night was warm so Kagome would have settled for just sleeping in a tree. She never eats much so she wouldn't have needed a fire for cooking. You know Sasuke; he would have thought it a weakness if he felt the need for a fire, where Kagome did not." Naruto said with a smug look on his face. Sakura just nodded at him as she came to agree with what he had said.

"Don't forget the fact that they left earlier in the day and travel at a faster speed than us. When they did stop for a rest it was most likely a ways from here." Kakashi added from behind his book.

With Kagome and Sasuke

The Samehada tore right threw Kagome before Sasuke was able to utter a syllable. He watched as agony crossed her features before she slowly turned into water. Sasuke let out an easy breath as he relaxed realizing that Kagome was alive. He nearly jumped out of is skin when she grabbed him by the arm and started running at full speed towards the gates of Suna. They stopped as they made it in between the Akatsuki and the gates to Suna. Sasuke looked to see that many sand ninja were injured, including Kankuro who seemed to be under the effects of poison. Most of the ninja had burns and were able to get up and continue fighting.

"Her gimpy!" Kagome called out as she addressed a sand ninja with a bad limp due to a nasty burn running down his leg, "Take Kankuro to the medics, now." She commanded as the ninja just nodded before he took off with Kankuro. Sasuke looked around and found that he couldn't see Gaara anywhere, he as safe at least for the moment.

"You two again." Deidara said as he stared mainly at Kagome, he was standing atop his clay bird. Sasori was on the ground to his left and a moment later Itachi and Kisame appeared to his right.

"You two have skill, but your power along side those weak sand ninjas behind you is not enough." Sasori said in his creepy voice as he glared at the duo.

"Now, now, just because we're fighting to the death doesn't mean that we can't be civil to each other." Kagome said as she smiled playfully at the S-class missing ninjas. Sasuke looked out the corner of his eyes and saw the way she leaned forward, she was reaching her limit and he was already past his.

"You can barely stand; I wouldn't have that attitude if I was you." Kisame said as he readied his Samehada and a thin layer of water appeared covering the surrounding area.

"Well then it's a good thing that you're not me." Kagome said coldly as she pulled her sword out of a scroll, "Sasuke, I think it's about time we got serious." She said as she put the sheath on you belt and held her sword before her. Sasuke took the sword from the sheath that was held on his back and held it in a similar manner. He didn't even remember when he had put it back in its sheath.

"Kanshisha." Kagome said calmly as her blade glowed silver.

"Bengosha." Sasuke said just as calmly as his blade started glowing an eerie black. The Akatsuki members looked slightly unsure for a moment, before they regained their confidence.

"It's been nine hours since the first attack on Suna. If you plan on beating us you better do it within the next eight otherwise more back up from Konoha will arrive." Kagome said hoping to unnerve the Akatsuki, "If you do beat us it won't be anytime soon and Konoha's best will be right on your tail." She finished as she stared each member in the eyes starting with Sasori and ending with Kisame. She smirked when Kisame lost his arrogant smile. She looked towards Itachi and saw that he was staring at her intently and she found that she almost liked it.

Sasuke saw the look that his older brother was giving Kagome and he almost growled in warning, he was barely able to stop himself. He saw that Kagome was trying to stall; he just hoped that his brother didn't. For the past two weeks they had been training past exhaustion trying to help with his mastery over his sword. Neither of them had had a full night sleep in the past two weeks, which meant that when they left Konoha they weren't even at eighty percent. The twenty-four hours awake and traveling at a fast speed and only made things force. When they engaged Akatsuki they were operating at seventy-two percent. Kagome's living forest had shot her down to thirty-six percent. It Sasuke was to guess he would say that he was somewhere around fifty percent. Itachi, Kisame, and Sasori and come into this fight fresh. Deidara had been worn down thanks to Gaara, but he hadn't been engaging in as much as the fighting. He met Kagome as they looked each other in the eye.

"Always hoped to go out in a bang." Kagome said humorously as she put herself in position, Sasuke mirrored her a moment later.

"Sutoraiku!" Kagome yelled as she summoned the power of her sword and sent it with a swing at the Akatsuki members.

"Haisen!" Sasuke yelled as with a sweep of his sword the energy from the attack was sent towards the enemy. The two attacks met together to form a grand sight that went forward wiping out anything in its path with a ferocity seldom seen. The energy from the attacks created a bright light and all those around were forced to close theirs eyes against it. When Sasuke and Kagome opened their eyes they knew that they were in trouble. All of the Akatsuki members had hopped upon Deidara's clay bird and risen above the attack, they were impressed and unharmed.

"Bloody hell." Kagome said loudly as she stuck her sword in the ground and leaned her weight on it. She never took her eyes of the clay bird as she tried to think up a new plan.

Sasuke looked at her and wondered what she would think of; they needed for her to pull up on of her miracles.

'Well, shit. I was hoping to at least take out two of them with that attack. Chakra level at thirty percent, I still have nature manipulation, priestess powers, and if it is truly bad enough the power of the Shikon jewel. I can't use the Shikon unless there is no other option, so the question is do I use up my chakra first or save it?' Kagome had learned in her experience that you could never overestimate an opponent. It was better to prepare for a hurricane and get light showers than it was to prepare for light showers and to get a hurricane. She was looking at them all and trying to decide what would work best.

"Any ideas, Sasuke?" Kagome asked as she looked him in the eye and smiled warmly.

"No, you?" He looked her in the eye and almost winced she had that look on her face, that something was about to happen. As long as he knew her that look and also came with something incredibly stupid happening on her part, something that always worked when it really shouldn't have.

"Get everyone back as far as you can, make sure that it is at least forty yards." Kagome said as she pulled a feather out of a pouch. Then with one hand she sheathed her sword and sealed it back into a scroll. Sasuke was right; he wasn't going to like this at all.

"You can't beat us with nothing more than a feather." Kisame called down to her as he laughed at the young pair.

"Yes and you can't beat me as long as you're an idiot, so we're even." She raised the feather above her head in and an instant later she was in the air standing on a giant feather.

"So you can fly as well." Deidara stated with a smile on his face, this was as fun as it was annoying.

"No, I tend to think of it more as gliding." Kagome corrected as she looked down to see that all the ninja were passing threw the gate and were almost out of her range.

"You can't stall us for long by yourself." Itachi said as she turned and looked him in the eyes, "Give up and you won't be harmed." He finished as he smiled at her determination.

"I don't have much energy left, but the energy I have is enough for my final move." She paused for a moment as she looked back and saw that no innocent person was in her range, "I don't plan on stalling you, I plan on killing you. I needed them to move so that they wouldn't be within my range of forty yards." She finished when she turned to look back at them.

"Airless Atmosphere technique!" Kagome yelled as she remembered the last time she was forced to use it. It hadn't worked then because her chakra levels hadn't been strong enough to sustain it and Kabuto was able to hold his breath long enough. She watched in detachment as in moments their eyes widened and they held their throats and looked at her in surprise. In the three years she had practiced this technique many times, her control was perfect and she could hold it for a longer time with less problems. The only thing that kept it from being a perfect attack was that she couldn't control a direction or adjust the range. It had a radius of forty yards from the position in which she was standing. No amount of training was enough to change that.

'Please let this work. Please don't let them last as long as Kabuto did. If this technique doesn't work them we're toast.' Kagome prayed as she felt her control slipping, she forced herself to hold on her chakra levels went lower and lower. She finally fell to her knees on her feather, just after Sasori fell of the clay bird. She had been able to kill one, but the other three were alive and slowly gaining back breath. 'Damn it! Why is it that all these missing ninjas and traitors can hold their breath for such a long time? I did in fact kill one of them, but how did the others make it? I was able to hold that technique for almost four and half minutes!' Kagome started ranting in her head as the three standing across from her each made it to their feet, one after the other.

"Nice try, but it wasn't good enough. You have killed Orochimaru, and now Sasori. Impressive for a girl your age, but you can't hope to defeat us. Sasori was one of the weaker ones in our group." Kisame said as he sneered at Kagome. Kisame looked like he had more to say, but he was forced stop when Deidara's clay bird was forced to dodge a huge boomerang that had been thrown at them. The all looked at her as she stood unsteady, but with an air of determination around her.

"Shove it, sharky." Kagome said angrily as she watched them dodge out of the way of her Hiraikotsu. Unsealing her weapons took barely anything other than time and using a weapon she had practiced with before she even knew what chakra was made things easier. The feather she was standing on was made possible by her priestess powers and she could never run out as long as she stayed in tune with the world. Mediation truly was an answer to almost all of her problems.

"I'm starting to like this girl." Kisame said as he watched her slowly stop shaking and stand up steadier than a moment before. He was again cut off from saying more as the clay bird dodged to the left in order to avoid the returning Hiraikotsu. The watched as Kagome caught the boomerang and twirled around ready to throw it again. All were surprised by the sheer size to the boomerang.

"How much does that thing weigh? It looks heavier than you, not that that is saying much." Kisame said to Kagome not even noticing that he had spoken aloud.

"It is seven times my weight." She said as she started spinning it with her outstretched arm, she just had to hold them off until help came or Sasuke and Gaara rested enough to take her place. Judging from the energy she could feel Gaara would be awake within the next hour. She just hoped that Sasuke knew what she was thinking.

"So boys, who wants to play?" She asked as she smiled in a way that appeared to be sweet and innocent, the boomerang going at an even faster speed as she launched it at them.

With Sasuke

"She was able to beat one of them." A voice belonging to a chunin only a few years older than Sasuke said as he watched everything that happened. They had all been surprised when she had summoned up a feather and her partner and ordered them to run back into the village. Many and protested, but one sharingan glare was enough to send them running. Just a few feet after entering the village the Konoha ninja had turned towards his partner and started watching intently. He was leaning against a building resting slightly while his partner, who was a small beautiful woman, fought. They were surprised at his actions, yet none really wanted to speak up against him.

"Shouldn't you go and join her?" One finally asked as they watched the battle that was talking place. She made sure to keep it at a height were the two passengers on the clay bird couldn't jump down safely. The clay bird was easily able to out maneuver the feather, but the feather had an ingenious handler who seemed to use the air currents to even things out.

"She's trying to stall them so that I can rest. It's just a guess, but I think she's also waiting for your Kazekage to rest as well. Besides while the fight is in the air all any of us can do is get in her way." Sasuke said as he watched Kagome fight with masked worry. Sasuke could already feel the difference, he muscle had time to relax and his chakra level was slowly rising. He just wasn't getting better fast enough. If it was Kagome she would be able to go again in an hour. He normally needed at least three hours of rest to be able to go again and even then he was only at fifty percent. He examined all those gathered around him, they were just normal ninja. A mix of jonin and chunin none with outstanding talent. He knew that Baki had skill and was a master when it came to his wind element, but still he wouldn't be able to handle a member of Akatsuki.

'Just hold on a little longer, Kagome. I'll join you as soon as I can.' Sasuke thought as he watched the feather drop and spin until it was under the clay bird. Kagome threw her weapon up and forced Akatsuki to dodge back and rise even higher. He knew that Kagome could use the Hiraikotsu all day and not feel tired; he also knew that she had been practicing with element manipulation. She could hold them off for a while as long as they didn't start getting creative with their attacks.

So far small explosions had gone of in the air; Kagome was able to use kunai and shuriken to stop the bombs. But she only ever carried a few dozen on her because she preferred close combat or using ninjutsu. She had recently been teaching herself how to use needles like the boy they had encountered on their first C-class mission. She carried those on her body and had decent aim, but she was no expert she probably wouldn't be able to use them on moving bombs.

"How long does Gaara normally take to recover?" Sasuke asked as he turned towards Baki. All the ninja surrounding him were slightly uncomfortable with the lack of respect Sasuke showed, but no one felt like saying anything.

"I don't know. He has only ever encountered an opponent who was able to match him in strength twice. Both times I wasn't there to see how he faired. We also have to add in that he was slightly injured when the bombs went off in his sand shield." Baki said as he looked at the young ninja. It was hard to imagine that a boy a year younger than Gaara could be so strong. The main reason as to why Gaara had become so strong was the fact that he had a demon sealed within him. This boy in front of him was just a normal boy, even if he was an Uchiha. He turned his attention to the fight in the sky; the girl was strong as well. He wondered as to what kind of training they had had in Konoha. How was it that a village so use to peace could raise such strong ninjas? He didn't know, and doubted that he ever would.

"I had heard that you were the last Uchiha of Konoha." Baki stated as he killed the silence that had come over the area, "Who is that guy that so resembles you up on the bird?" Baki asked as he gained Sasuke's attention. He almost regretted it when Sasuke gave him an annoyed look before he spoke.

"He's my older brother." Sasuke said in a cold voice, all eyes widened in surprise. They weren't expecting for the one attacking and the one defending to be related. Silence fell upon them again as they turned their attention back to the battle in the sky. Kagome seemed to be holding her own against the Akatsuki members. However, the trained eye of Sasuke saw that she was slowly become physically exhausted as well. She could only hold out for so long.

With Kagome

'Note to self, never engage three S-class missing ninja when you are already tired.' Kagome thought as she felt the muscles in her right arm cramp. She had been trading back in forth between her arms hoping to gain a few extra minutes, but she had been forced to stop using her left arm over ten minutes ago. She could swing a boomerang all day, she could make a giant feather float in the sky all day, but she couldn't do both at the same time for more than an hour. She knew that she only had to hold out for a little longer, Sasuke had been resting for nearing two hours.

"How much longer can you hold off by yourself? Why do you remain loyal to those who would leave you to fight by yourself?" Itachi asked as he tried to break Kagome mentally. Deidara had been doing most of the fighting, but Kisame had gotten off a few water element attacks, and Itachi had helped with the prediction of her movements.

"Last time I checked I was the one making you guys do all the dodging." Kagome said as she tried to find some strength left in her body. She looked and saw as Itachi started to do hand seals, she recognized some of them it was the grand fireball technique. She watched as the fire ball came closer and closer to hitting her. She didn't know if you would be able to move in time. She put her boomerang in front of her hoping that it would provide the necessary protection, but the hit never came. She lowered her boomerang to see a small wall of sand protecting her. She looked down at the ground and saw Gaara standing there looking impassive and Sasuke and the sand ninja were just a few feet behind him. She dropped the feather and everyone looked on in horror, menus Sasuke and Gaara. The feather stopped its fall five feet above the ground and every let out a breath they didn't know they were holding. Kagome turned the feather back to its true self as she landed on her feet.

"You have great timing." Kagome said to Gaara with a smile on her face, he made no move to reply. She looked back to Sasuke met his gaze, he didn't look particularly happy. She turned and watched as the clay bird landed and Kisame and Itachi jumped off.

"It seems that partaking in a fight will just end in more injury." Itachi said as he looked mainly at Kagome, but paid heed to his slightly rested little brother and of course to Gaara, "We'll have to wait to a later date to capture how targets." After that was said Kisame and Itachi disappeared in a blur and Deidara took to the sky once again.

"Well, I'm glad that that's over for the day." Kagome said as she broke the silence. Everyone glanced at her for a moment before the area lapsed into silence yet again. "Well I hate to be a party pooper, but please excuse me as I collapse." Kagome said as she fell back and was barely caught by Sasuke. When he had her in his grasp, Sasuke could feel her muscles spasm as they started to relax.

"Baki, where is Kankuro?" Gaara asked as he turned towards his old sensei for an answer. Everyone froze up for a moment and Sasuke shifted Kagome as he held her bridal style. She was in a deep sleep and there most likely wasn't a force alive that could wake her.

"Kankuro was injured will fighting this Sasori; he is being treated in the hospital. There was nothing the medics could do so I was able to convince Lady Chiyo to come out and try to treat him." Baki said as he looked nervously at Gaara.

"Have the border strengthened." Gaara said to the jonin normally in charge of patrolling, "We will head to the hospital, there you should be able to find a place for you partner to rest." Gaara said to Sasuke who just nodded and started following him to the hospital.

With Naruto

"Temari!" Came a yell as a small group of ninja appeared in front of the group. Naruto turned his head towards the guards as he stopped looking at the surrounding area. It looked as if a war had taken place outside of Suna.

"What happened?" Temari asked in a demanding voice as she stared down the patrolling jonin.

"Gaara had been beaten by the Akatsuki, when two ninja from Konoha arrived and were able to hold them off. We need to take you to Lord Kazekage; everything will be explained once we reach the hospital." The jonin said as he led them to where everyone else was waiting. The group quickly ran up the stairs of the hospital and when the door opened they saw Sasuke, Gaara, and Baki standing there looking to be in good health if not completely exhausted.

"Gaara!" Temari yelled as she started to relax, her baby brother was safe.

"Temari." Gaara said gently as he seemed to lack the ability to look her in the eye.

"Sasuke, are you okay?" Naruto asked as he arrived a moment after Temari, he was followed by Kakashi and Sakura. Sasuke just nodded as he stood there staring at the new arrivals.

"Where's Kagome?" Sakura asked as she looked around for her friend and in a way her mentor. It wasn't like Kagome to not be there in a bad situation.

"She is resting in a room down the hall." Sasuke said simply as he turned his attention to Gaara.

"Where's Kankuro?" Temari asked in a concerned voice as she noticed that her other brother was missing as well as the Kagome girl.

"He was poisoned during the battle. So far there is nothing that we can do." Baki said in a sad tone as they started walking into the room. Chiyo almost attacked Kakashi but luckily nothing happened. Sakura started right away on healing while Sasuke and Baki informed them all of what exactly had taken place.

Well here is this chapter; sorry that it isn't one of the better ones. I had actually written a really detailed battle scene, but it was too hard to follow. Sorry that the fight wasn't more detailed, but remember Kagome and Sasuke were exhausted while their opponents were fresh. Please reviews and tell me what you think, any helpful hints would be deeply appreciated. Also trying to come up with some names for my original bad guys, but I just can't come with anything.

Thanks,

AliKat89