Chapter two: A foreign visit
The power was so big that even Goku's friends on Roshi Island could feel it except Bulma, oolong and puar as they were playing poker. Krillin and Roshi went up from the chair as fast as they felt the strange power. Causing their chairs to fall at the same time. Both Bulma and Turtle hermit stared in worry towards them unlike Oolong who got scared and fell of the chair, hitting his head on the floor. Seconds later, he got up on his feet again with an angry look on his face and a bump on his head. ''Do you morons always have to do that without giving us a warning first? I could have got an heart attack!'' Shouted Oolong angrily.
Bulma totally ignores Oolong and started to ask Roshi and Krillin ''What is it? Is something happening to Goku and Gohan?'' with a big worry on her face. Roshi looked back at the blue haired woman with fear on his face '' Not really but the chance that it would is even bigger now''. Bulma looked confused and threw another question ''What do you mean?''. Krillin too seemed to be shocked and afraid as he began to speak ''It seems that two powers have came to earth and they have landed near raditz and gohan. It also appears that both of their power is even greater than Raditz's''
Bulma and the rest began to get even more worried as she asks ''Is.. It bad?''. Krillin looked towards Bulma as he swallowed with a scared look on his face and answers her ''If they are on Raditz side, then yes and it's very obvious since he mentioned that there were other survivors of his race and there is no way that Goku could defeat 3 of them even with the help with Piccolo. I don't know what we should do''
This theory didn't made Bulma, Oolong and turtle any happier, instead all of them began to shake in fear.
As Goku's friends speculates about the strange powers they felt, Piccolo and Goku was on their way towards Raditz and they wasn't far away until they stopped.
Goku looked much more worried and scared than before as he turned to Piccolo "Do you feel that Piccolo?"
Piccolo answers with a extremely stoned face and scared voice "Yeah, definitely! I don't know what is going on here but i feel 2 powerful beings in our direction. They appears to be much stronger than Raditz!"
Goku became stoned as well and was even more frightened "STRONGER THAN RADITZ!? You must be kidding!".
Then goku thought about what piccolo said after " Did you say that they are in our direction? Then that means they are with Raditz and gohan as well! If they are allies of Raditz then we are in far bigger trouble!"
Piccolo stared at goku still worried but managed to calm himself down and says "I don't think we should head there, not yet."
Goku looked surprised and confused at Piccolo's decision and asks "Why not?"
"Because if we did we wouldn't stand a chance against all 3 of them and we would definitely end up being killed in the process and no one would stop them from turning this planet into ashes. But honestly, i don't know what we should do now" Piccolo explained.
Goku looked puzzles as well and says" well one thing i remember that raditz said is that he is interested only in wiping out the planet's population and sell the planet so he doesn't really seem interested in destroying it."
Piccolo was thinking about what goku said and then seconds later snapped up something " i think you gave me an idea. We simply let them kill everyone on the planet including you"
Hearing that idea made Goku extremely shocked and angry at the same time "Are you out of your mind? What kind of an moronic idea is that?"
Piccolo gets annoyed at Goku's misunderstanding of the plan " You misses the point so i will explain it further. ´When you including everyone one the earth has perished by the 3 saiyans, me and kami will hide until the 3 saiyans have completed their mission and left the planet. We will wait at least 1 year until they are far away from the planet and after that i wish all of you back along with earth's population so we can begin start training before the saiyans comes back in some years again. Then we probably have bigger chance against them or even become stronger than them"
Goku looked amazed at piccolo's unexpected plan but still felt sceptical about it "not a bad idea but what if they finds the lookout? and what will you do in 1 year before wishing us back? One more thing, why do you want to wish me back or even the people of earth back?"
" I can't promise anything but i'm quite good at hide and seek. During the year i will train with Kami and Popo even though i can't stand that fools face and the only reason why i want to wish you back is because i want to kill you personally so i can complete my revenge. Also, what's the fun in ruling a planet if there is no population or life forms to rule over?''
Goku sighed at piccolo's answer " You still on that revenge thing? Sometimes, i never get you."
Meanwhile on wasteland.
The strange ship has finally landed and the door of the ship slowly opens.
Raditz along with raditz looked intense and curious on the slowly opening door. Then they suddenly sees one figure walking out. The figure appears to be some blue skinned alien with red eyes and 2 tubes on both of his cheeks, his clothes appears to be the style of a western gunslinger.
Raditz stared curiously at the alien and thought to himself "Who the heck is that? Is he Vegeta's private pilot or something? This is starting to get weird" as Raditz scanned the power level of the foreigner and came only to a power of 45 he sighed and continued "whoever that guy is, he sure is hell of a weakling. I wonder why vegeta recruited him in the first place".
Then he saw footsteps from two beings walking down from the door of the ship and raditz said to himself " it must be vegeta and Nappa" but to Raditz expectations, it wasn't them.
It was two mysterious being dressed in some form of a black cloak, the one to right appears to be average height while the other one appear to be taller than 200 cm. Both of their faces was difficult to see from long distance but Raditz could see their eyes and there was something about them that made him shake in fear. He had seen many sinister eyes in his life including Frieza's but those eyes was on a different level. "These Eyes..." starts raditz as he shakes in fear "I never seen such sinister eyes in my life. What are they? "
Even gohan felt intimidated by those Eyes and began to cover his eyes since he can't stand looking to them and tries to calm down and pretend it to be a dream "Mommy, Daddy help me! I don't want this anymore!"
Suddenly a human looking man who appears to be a prisoner walks down along with two tall guards with cape that appears to be robots.
One of the cloaked men began to speak " So this is the planet that you said he went to, Not much of a hiding place" and he later turned to the prisoner "Your information has been valuable to us and our empire. You shall receive your reward as promised.'' The cloaked man looked at the guards and gives a command ''Guards release him." The guard releases the prisoner from the cuffs and her couldn't believe he was free "Thank you so much for giving me another chance. What is my reward my lord?"
The shorter cloaked man pulled out something from his holster and responds "This, my friend" with a grin on his face as a red laser came out from it and impaled through the prisoner's chest.
The prisoner fell on the ground with a hole through his chest and was crying in pain "P…Please have mercy on me. I beg you!". He begged as tears went through his face in sadness and fear.
The cloaked man nodded to the taller cloaked one. The tall one walked towards the heavily injured prisoner and pulled the same thing as the other one but this one was different. It had two laser looking blade on both side.
" N..no! don't kill me!...i beg you.. Pleas..." As the prisoner was about to scream the double edged laser sword has already cutted his head off, it was too late. He was dead.
Raditz was extremely stoned at was happening. He somehow feels that the man didn't deserve a death like this even if he was a weakling.
"One less jedi pest to deal with. Now we have to find our long lost nemesis., don't you agree brother?"
" Yeah brother, he better be on this planet. I will enjoy watch him beg for mercy before we slaughter him"
Raditz was too far away to be able to hear what they talked about but for one thing he is sure about is that those beings does not appear to be friendly and not the types to play with "i don't know who those people are but i should be very careful. They seems to be very powerful and i hope they don't notice me" as Raditz thought to himself while he still felt fear crawling inside his body.
The blue skinned alien began to ask the cloaked man with the average height "Maul, how will we begin our search for that worm Kenobi?".
Maul turned to the blue alien with a calm and sinister look on his face "Oh, no need to worry my dear bounty hunter. His time will come but first i need to deal with something on this place. It appears we have a presence here." then he turned to the tall and cloaked one "Don't you feel it too, savage?"
Savage looks back at his brother and responds "Yes brother, i do''.
Both of them changed the stare right towards Raditz and as fast as their eyes had contact with Raditz eyes, Raditz began to froze more in fear as his entire body shaked. He has never on his entire life been so scared and thinking about what would happen to him after he saw Maul and savage slaughter their prisoner and that made him more scared.
Maul starts walking towards the sacred saiyan and seconds later he was in front of him which shocked him. He began to shake even more as Maul keep staring at him with those sinister and cold eyes and a sweat ran down his face.
Raditz tried to get himself together and starts asking "w...w..Who are you and what do you want from me and this planet?"
" That is none of your concern. What i want from you is information"
Raditz still had the scared expression on his face but he was looking more confused at the same time "In..Information? About what?"
Maul totally ignores the question and he started moving his right hand towards Raditz's forehead. As Raditz was about to ask what he's doing he gets stunned and starts feeling pain from his read. It felt like someone tries to violently suck his brain with a powerful sweeper and it keeps sucking harder and harder. It was the most horrific pain that he has ever felt but despite the pain he could barely move and talk as he was still stunned by the weird power from the foreigners hand.
Gohan looked with horror on his face as he watching Raditz in pain and thought "What is he doing to him?".
Suddenly the man so called maul starts putting down his hand again and Raditz immediately fell on the ground strained and intimidated of what have just happened, he began to get frustrated " What...Did you just do to me? you sick bastard!"
Maul stared at Raditz with a look of disappointment and he later turned to the tall man he calls Savage, totally ignoring the saiyan's question "Its seems like this weakling doesn't know where our target is. We just have to play hide and seek to find him"
Raditz became more angry after what the foreign alien just said and starts shouting "Weakling?! Do you have any idea of who i am? I'm raditz, I belongs to a race of proud warriors called saiyans!"
Maul still had that calm and sinister face as he says "More like a race of weaklings and morons, apparently."
Raditz had it and he began to rush towards the foreign man but as fast as he landed the punch it missed him completely as he moved away with a blink of an eye. Raditz tried it one more time but this time he throws a barrage of punches as fast he could but none of punches managed to hit the foreigner.
Raditz stopped and stared with shock and fear, he couldn't believe his eyes and thought to himself "How...How can he be so fast? Not even Vegeta has that level of speed! and he is much weaker than him!". Raditz turns his scouter on and it starts reading the foreigner power until it reached an unexpected that not only shooked the saiyan but scares him as well. "It just can't be! The scouter shows now that His power level is 35,000 thousands but it said before that his power level was the same as Vegeta (16,000). What tricks is this pile of junk playing with me? Said Raditz angrily as he takes his scouter and crushes it into thousands pieces with his hand.
A bored look appeared on Maul's face as he starts asking "Are you done with your show off? I have better things to do than wasting my time with weaklings with a brain of a toddler".
Mauls last word made Raditz even more furious as he began powering up as much as he could and as he moved his left hand in the air, lightnings starts to spark around his hand and a energy ball was growing.
Maul along with his brother looked a little curious and surprised as they sensed the growing power from raditz " His power is growing and it seems he is preparing an attack, i think we should be on our guard, savage" says Maul as a evil grin appeared on his face and Savage grinned back with a response "Indeed, brother"
Raditz felt how his attack was ready and shouts "Now, Be gone!" as he fired a powerful purple beam on its way towards Maul.
Gohan looked terrified attack and took cover in the space pod as fast as he could, realizing that the attack could be very deadly and destructible.
Maul was surprised at the attack but was still calm as he watches the beam getting closer to him. Before the beam could even hit him he moved his right and towards the coming beam and did something that Raditz didn't expect.
When the beam collided with mauls hand, he began to absorb it and then mirrored the attack by firing it back at the exhausted Raditz.
"IMPOSSIBLE!" shouted Raditz and watched in horror as his own attack was boosting towards him and seconds later the attack have completely hitted him, causing a large explosion that was heard hundred miles away and scared all living things around it.
As goku and piccolo was on they way to kami's lookout as they stopped again and both of them could hear and feel the explain.
"Man, what is going on down there! Was that explosion from Raditz?!" says goku loudly as he looked towards the explosions direction with a shocked and worried face.
Piccolo looks shocked and worried as well but didn't show it much as goku does "It is and it appears that he has been badly injured by it since his energy is decreasing dramatically. Don't ask me how but i think that those two beings with him are not his allies after all. We should keep going"
Goku stared at piccolo with a serious look " You can keep going. I must go and save Gohan quickly as possible!" said goku. Piccolo stared back with a surprised and irritated look "Are you out of your mind!? They will kill you!" .
"Say what you want but unlike you, i am not a coward and i rather die than letting those monsters kill or hurt my gohan, friends or the planet. I will go there and help Gohan whatever you like it not" said Goku angrily .
" i know how it feels, Goku. But have you already forgot our..." as piccolo was about to finish his sentence, goku was already boosting away and that made Piccolo pissed. "Damn you Goku!" shouted piccolo in irritation as he was about continue his trip to kami's lookout but then he turned his look towards goku's direction and thoughts for a second. " i guess i must follow that fool. He can't save his son on his own" Piccolo said to himself and began to boost after Goku.
On Kame's house, Goku's friend heard the explosion as well and they all felt scared by it especially Oolong who ran around and screams in fear ''They have killed Goku and gohan! DOOMSDAY IS HERE!'' but then he got smashed in the head by Roshi's staff ''They aren't DEAD you moron!. It was Raditz who got hitted by his own attack. Apparently, those beings doesn't seems to be his comrades or allies at all''
Oolong scratched his head with a puzzled look on his face and ask ''How do you know that Raditz got hit by his attack?''. Krillin sighed at Oolongs annoying questions and answers them for Roshi ''Because his energy has decreased dramatically to a point that he is unable to fight or stand back on his leg which means that he is either seriously injured or just simply dead while the other two beings life energy remains untouched, that's the obvious explanation. Those mysterious beings has done something to his attack that managed to deflect it back at him.''
After hearing this explanation, Oolongs face turned from confused and scared into a happy face as he once again asks '' Does that means they are our savior? And here i thought that we were all doomed but now we are saved by strangers. I love having luck! And then he starts jump in the air as he screams ''Lets celebrate!''.
Roshi stared annoyed at Oolongs ignorance and says ''i would not celebrate if i were you, and if you think those mysterious beings are here to suddenly save us then you should think again. I can't feel anything good from them except evil''
As Roshi finished his words, Oolongs joyful face went totally downhill and he begins to complain with an sarcastic and louder voice ''Great, just great! You just have to come with bad news and wreck everything. Thank you so much, captain obvious!''.
As Roshi and Oolong were arguing, Bulma turned her stare towards the sky worried and thought for herself ''Whatever they are evil or not, i just hope that they don't have intentions to destroy earth or kill us and I hope Gohan and Goku are both alright.''
End of chapter two
Powerlevels
Maul - 35,000
Savage - Unknown but is said to have greater power than Raditz
Raditz - 1,500.
Raditz signature attack (Be Gone!) at full power - 5,600.
Gohan - 720
Goku - 416
Piccolo - 407
This is my second chapter and i hoped you liked it. as you can see i made some improvements by adding horizintal lines in the end of every scene so it would look more seperated when the next scene appears.
I also decided to skip marketing the dialogue by coloring them black since it seems pointless and makes it ridiculous as the text gets and i have now updated my previous chapter with same the same change but i left the dialogue still marked in black so you can compare and see if its better with them or without them. If you have anything to ask, feel free to do it on your Review or you can just PM me.
It works both way but i hope you enjoyed this chapter and like i said Before in my previous chapter, If you want to improve the English in the texts then just PM me, i would be very thankful and appreciated.