/authors note/

Ok so I'm going to do something I've never done and be as descriptive as possible because most of my fan fictions are like "first he did this then he did that and then everyone was Allah ackbar'd. The end" also sorry if there is any inaccuracy I don't watch the show

GODDAMIT IMA SKIP THE INTRODICTION I CANT FUCKING DO IT. I'LL EDIT IT LATER

Everything was fine until pinkie pie had taken a bite of the cake, she didn't know what was wrong with it but she felt... odd somehow like time had frozen and she had a minute to just think. Normally she would be weirded out by the silence but it was peaceful. she looked around and saw her friends talking around her. she wondered if they had noticed her silence, not even at the party but the past few weeks in general. She had been feeling a bit depressed for a while but It's not like she was suicidal or anything like that. She just isn't as "peppy" as she used to be. She just hoped her friends hadn't noticed, she wouldn't want them to worry about her. Plus it wasn't anything serious was it?

She snapped back into the real world for a moment to take another bite of cake. Wow that was some good cake. She wondered what was in it. Drugs maybe? Obviously she knew what drugs were, On the outside it seemed that she had no knowledge of the "real world" but she knew a lot of that sort of thing. In fact she was probably more serious than half of her other friends... on the inside of course. On the outside it's pinkie pie everyone's favorite party pony. But on the inside she was just another pony trying to- wait did someone just say her name?

"pinkie pie" twilight said for the 3rd time "hm what?" Pinkie said quickly trying to remember where she was "what are you doing?" twilight said looking concerned Pinkie pie then remembered she was at a party and she realised that she was just standing there probably looking like a fool "um I think I got a bad peice of cake I'll be right back" then she threw the cake she had into the nearest garbage can and she ran off to get another slice.

After pinkie pie had gotten another slice of cake and a beer she sat down in the corner and took a bite of the cake. Unfortunately the quiet calming feeling returned and her mind was back to thinking. She took a sip of her beer "eh it's one year. the cops can kiss my ass" she thought to herself. she just turned 20 last month and oh what a party that was. Hmm y'know maybe it was time to let her more mature side show a bit more. Yea why not? she could get a proper house, a job and maybe she could even start dating. She looked around the room at all of the ponies and she saw her friends talking in the corner. They honestly don't think she would be like this forever right? She had goals in life just like everyone else. But what were those goals? Did she have any hopes and dreams? Well she didn't know, but what she did know was that she needed another beer. Then two beers turned into 3 and three turned into 5 and before long she was too drunk to even stay awake so she just fell asleep on the floor and after everyone had left her friends took her home.

THE END

/authors note/

Wow you have no idea how long it took me to write that. my eyes are on fire right now. So yea I just need to work on the intro and the dialogue also i think the ending was kinda shit but whatever.