This is the start of the rewrite of this story, I want your guy's thoughts on it, should I keep going with this or think or something new for the start? Please IM your thoughts.
Rewrite:
Edward Elric was not a very happy camper to say that he was would be the understatement of the year. In the months following the discovery of finding out that King Bradley was one of the humuncuil, things quickly went down the toilet, as Farther, ruler of the sins was awaken and all efforts failed to stop him. Those who escaped the nation wide transmutation circle were quickly rounded up and killed so this is why Edward wasn't happy.
He had been found by Envy and after a long battle, Envy had gotten the upper hand and had quite literal put his hand through Edward's chest and left Edward for dead thus leaving Edward in his current perdicament. He was standing infront of the gate wondering how he gotten there.
"Well, Well, look who came to see me again, gone and gotten yourself killed didn't you?" said the thousand's of voices that somehow or another blended into one. "There is a chance to do over you know, though are you willing to pay the price? Won't be satisfy with your other arm and leg what are you willing to give up in exchange?"