This is crap. I wrote this like half a year ago. I'm just going to update with all I've written (a lot), but be sure to check out my rewrite of this, called Doctor's Silence! It makes so much more sense.
As Tori walked outside, she could feel the breeze on her face and the gray puffy clouds rolling in. A storm was brewing. They had to go, fast, but Tori could see no car.
"Uh, Mrs. Song? I don't see a-"
"We're not taking a car. We are taking my vortex manipulator."
"Your… what?"
"Nevermind. Put your hand on my hand that's on the watch thing."
"Okay…" Tori did as she was told and put her hand on Mrs. Song's hand. Suddenly, they weren't at the orphanage anymore. "I don't think we're in Kansas anymore Toto…"
"Where the heck are we?"
"My prison cell."
"Prison? You are in prison?"
"For a misunderstanding. I was… framed, you could say."
"Oh, okay. A psychopath for a foster parent. Nice," Tori said sarcastically, empathizing the nice.
"And my real name is Doctor River Song. But you can call me River or mum."
"But you're not my mother. You're just a foster parent."
"Oh, sweetie, am I?"
"What do you mean?" Tori questioned the prisoner. River laughed.
"Sweetie… the truth is, I am your real mother," River said honestly. A tear started to form.
"You're lying."
"Oh dear I'm not," River said. Tori started crying.
"You are lying! My parents abandoned me, with a piece of paper saying only Tor - October 11, 2004."
"No, it said Torrey as in the tree. But Tor as in Victoria works too, I guess."
"Er- okay than. So if your my mum, than who's my dad?" asked Tori, interested. But a part of Tori knew River Song was telling the truth.
"The bravest man I've ever met, the Doctor, who at the moment is unfindable. Untraceable, even. So we are going to see your grandparents."
"Then why'd you take us here?"
"Sweetie, to grab something that's all. Now year… 2011. Grab on." Tori did as she was told, and grasped onto the watch. Suddenly, they were back on Earth.
"Leadworth, Scotland, October 11th, 2011. Shortly after they learned the Doctor survived. Course, there's another time and place for that story. Come on! Let's go."
Tori unsurely followed her mum, but knew to trust her. River walked up to a house and rung the doorbell. A red haired woman poked her head out, beautiful and young.
"River!" she said, and hugged River. Tori watched from the sidewalk, fairly confused.
"Oh, Tori, meet Amelia Williams, your grandmother," River said. Tori stayed on the sidewalk, very confused.
"What?" Tori said.
"What?" Amy said.
"What?" a male from inside said, peeking his head out.
"Okay stupid face stop acting like your nickname," Amy growled. The male calmed down.
"Tori, that's Amy and Rory Williams. Or Pond if you prefer. They are your grandparents," explained River.
"Okay, is this a prank or something?" Tori said,unamused. "They cannot be my grandparents." River whispered something to Amy and Rory and they hugged her and nodded quickly. It was strange to watch.
"Nope, it's true," Amy said, "Welcome to the Pond family."
"Torrey Song, come here!" Rory said with laughter. "I'm Rory, but you already know that. Great to meet you!" Tori ran up the front steps and onto the porch. She shook hands with Amy and Rory.
"Nice to make your acquaintance," Tori said quietly, struggling to take in all that information.
"Is she a time…" Tori couldn't make out the rest of the words because something took over her vision.
"Torrey… do you hear the silence… Torrey… Torrey find us… Torrey… we will find you and help you… Torrey find the Silence!" a mysterious yet creepy voice overwhelmed her as she saw the image of a man in a bowtie and a fez beside a lake in a desert being shot by an astronaut. Suddenly, it disappeared and Tori was back at the Ponds' house.
"Sorry, what?" Tori said, blinking as she gained consciousness of the real world.
"Nothing…" Amy said, piping up really quickly. Tori was completely confused.
"I just saw…" Tori started, but she was unable to describe her vision. River looked at Tori, concerned.
"What was it that you saw? Tell me, Tori!" River said, seriously.
"I saw an astronaut... That's all." Tori said. River looked at Tori.
"An astronaut? Was it beside a lake?" River asked, bending down a tiny bit to get to Tori's eye level.
"I don't know- it's all a bit fuzzy," explained Tori. "Umm, Mum, when are we going to meet my father?"
"Very soon, Tori. Umm, first, mum, dad, where are you?" River pulled out a journal, bright and blue.
"Uhh, Hitler," Amy said, unsure. Rory nodded.
"Ooh, Hitler!" River said happily, "What a shame we didn't kill him though."
"Yep," laughed Amy, "and if we had, you wouldn't have grown up with those teachers asking you about him!" Amy, Rory, and River shared a laugh. Tori was still confused.
"Actually no. We just got done with dinosaurs on a spaceship," said Rory.
"What the he**?" Tori looked at River with so much confusion.
"Spoilers," River said to Tori. Tori looked at River with such confusion. Amy's giggle broke the awkward silence.
River turned to Amy and Rory. Tori was still confused. But Tori saw something. It appeared like one of those ? ゚ムᄒtypical green aliens, but tan and with no mouth. It had a suit and tie on and an utterly freakish demeanor.
Okay, so what are we doing now?" Tori asked, trying to get them to leave. She looked away from the creature, but was still freaked out by it's appearance which sent chills down her spine.
"We need to find the Doctor, and fast. I think the Silence has found Tori. That vision couldn't have been a good sign. He'll know what to do," River said to Amy and Rory.
"So where are you, River?" Amy asked River, concerned.
"Umm, nowhere important," lied River. "Nothing involving you two." River looked down at the ground, as if feeling guilty.
"What's wrong, mum" Tori asked River.
"I'll tell you when we're alone," said River quietly.
"And mum, I saw an alien, right behind you, a couple of minutes ago. It had a tan face and big long fingers, and it really creeped me out," Tori added. River's eyes were wide.
"Everyone, grab onto my wrist," River said frantically. "And fast." Tori latched onto her mother's arm, who punched something into the vortex manipulator. And boom. The four of them immediately traveled to London, but it seemed to be from maybe the 17th or 18th century. But the only problem was it seemed to be the throne room of the Monarch's castle.
Tori felt an aching back and groaned.
"Agh," she grumbled and got onto her feet.
"Oops. Wrong coordinates," River whispered. As the tumbled foursome got onto their feet, they all looked to the throne. A young woman proudly sat atop it.
"No… it can't be…" muttered River. She clasped a hand over her mouth. "Oh my God."
"What, River?" asked Amy.
"Who are you and why did you materialize in my throne room?" the Queen said. Amy gasped. So did Rory.
"Oswin. That sounds like Oswin. But how?" Rory said to Amy.
"Heaven knows," Amy said. "Your Majesty." Amy bowed, and so did River. Tori followed them as Rory too bowed.
"Do any of you know a man called the Doctor?" asked the Queen. River looked at the Queen with so much confusion, trying to make the connections.
"Doctor who?"
