Ok decided to post two chapters to this story
The team arrived at the scene about twenty minutes later. McGee hopped out of the back and surveyed the scene trying his best not to vomit.
His sister and her boyfriend were gone and only the other body remained since Gibbs was taking it over.
"All right McGee take pictures, Ziva sketch and Tony bag and tag Gibbs ordered then walked over to ducky and Palmer. "So this is the man that cost McGee's sister her life poor child" He sighed looking at the mans wound then looked back to Gibbs.
"How's Timothy doing jethro" He said with a worried glance. Gibbs turned and looked at his agent taking pictures and sighed. "As well as I did after my wife and daughter died, he wants revenge I see it in his eyes he misses her as I missed mine" He nodded to Ducky to keep him informed and walked away.
Palmer stood there not knowing what to say "Doctor Mallard what do I say to him how do you cheer up someone who lost the most important person in their life" he said finally sadly.
"My dear boy you just be his friend and supportive and don't act like you feel sorry for him" Ducky replied then looked back at the body getting back to work.
Now then Mr. Palmer let's focus on our dear friend here now what is your observation on how he died" He said very seriously.
Jimmy walked over and knelt down next to the doctor and concentrated on the body. After a minute he came to a small conclusion.
"I don't think the gun shot wound killed him he died when he crashed his body has a few burn marks" he stood up and walked to the front of the car opening the hood after putting on a pair of gloves "the explosion originated from this car and then made the bike blow up" he finished then stole a look at the destroyed bike and sighed.
Ducky smiled proudly his assistant was so smart. "Yes Mr. Palmer that was my conclusion also." Ducky then turned and walked off to tell Gibbs.
Tony had been listening to the entire conversation as he bagged a few items he found like a wallet and bloody towel and a stray bullet. He looked at Palmer and spoke "hey Jimmy Ducky's right we need to be supportive to Tim but we can't baby him ok"
Jimmy looked at the agent and nodded "of course Tony"
Ziva listened to them talk but then zoned out for a few seconds as she sketched the man. Then she noticed some important items lying by him.
"Hey Tony come over here I found something" she said backing out of the car.
Tony walked over to her and took her items 2 used cigarette and matchbook
"Hmm this is interesting the police said the car was reported stolen so maybe we can get some DNA and fingerprints good work Ms David" he said smiling.
McGee then came over "all right I finished taking pictures you guys find anything useful" he spoke with a tired voice.
Tony patted his shoulder "don't worry Timmy we'll figure this out" he said before walking off to report to Gibbs.
Ten minutes later they left back to NCIS.
Ok tell me what you think