Hey here's one more for now
Tony had taken off in his car while Ziva and Gibbs took off to NCIS with Thomas. He only prayed he could get there in time. A tow truck and ambulance were already speeding toward the cliff so he followed quickly behind.
They got there pretty fast since they were speeding. Tony jumped out of his car and helped grab the cable off the truck. He crept carefully toward the car not wanting it to go over before he got his friend out. "Tim hold on I'm coming for you" he said attaching the hook which made the car go forward fast.
The driver in the truck then pressed the gas trying to stable the car. Tony crawled toward the back and opened the door. He had Tim halfway out when the cable broke and the car fell off the cliff.
Tim went with it but luckily his ropes snagged a part of the cliff about five feet down. He was thrown hard against the cliff making him gasp in pain.
Tony looked over fearing the worst when he saw McGee hanging and the rope breaking trying to hold his weight. He grabbed the broken cable that left quite a long rope and swung it over trying to hook it on his ropes.
He managed to get a grip after a few missed tries. He pulled hard trying to get him back on high ground. The rope broke free from its notch and the sudden jerk sent Tony falling to the edge. He fell over and grabbed the edge trying to keep himself and McGee from falling further.
Ziva had arrived just seconds later and screamed running to Tony. She grabbed him but Tony had lost all his strength and he started to lose consciousness still weak from his poison attack. He looked at the woman trying to hold on but soon felt his grip slip as she struggled against the men's combined weight.
"Tony Tim" Ziva screamed as the boys slipped out of her hands and fell down the dark deep pit. "No it's all my fault" she said falling to her knees and sobbed. "How am I going to tell the others she thought scared.
All right this is one long story I know so let me know what you think Rand R please