You know that any advice would be greatly appreciated.

I do not own Pokémon, or this song

In Mays POV, I think you are getting the order.

The last one will be in 3rd person.

The song is: Mouthwash by Kate Nash.

Speech"Blah"

May's POV/Narrator Blah

SongBlah

This is an Advanceshipping story. So if you don't like, you can go away.

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Mouthwash

May is at her parents' house deep in thought

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This is my face, covered in freckles with the occasional spot and some veins.
This is my body, covered in skin, and not all of it you can see
And, this, is my mind, it goes over and over the same old lies
And, this, is my brain, it's torturous analytical thoughts make me go insane

I really miss ash. Maybe he doesn't like me anymore, I mean we have been apart for a while; he could have just fallen for someone else.

Why would he like me anymore?

What's so special about me?


And I use mouthwash
Sometimes I floss
I've got a family
And I drink cups of tea

I get a letter; I then quickly tear away the top, and read the letter he has given. My smile spreads out wide, Max then gets curious, and tries to read the letter. I quickly take the letter away from his face. My glare then sends him running away to his room. As I open the letter once more. My smile returns.


I've got nostalgic pavements
I've got familiar faces
I've got mixed-up memories
And I've got favourite places

I've been receiving mail from Ash for a while.

It almost makes being away from him.

Max has abandoned all hope of reading our letters, and my parents are getting curious as to why I am happy whenever I reads these letters but do not pursue the idea.


And I'm singing Uh-Oh on a Friday night
And I'm singing Uh-Oh Friday night and I hope every thing's going to be
alright
This is my face, I've got a thousand opinions and I've got time but no time to explain
And this is my body, and no matter how you try and disable it, yes, I'll still be
here
And, this, is my mind, and although you try to infringe you cannot confine
And, this, is my brain, and even if you try and hold me back there's nothing
that you can gain

Brock has come for a visit, and has heard the stories about when I get happy reading letters from Ash.

He then Talks to me but I am onto him. And I won't let my secret away.

The conversation stays on Ash tough, and it is hard to get him to change the subject. I think he caught me blushing once or twice when he had mentioned the times we were together in Sinnoh, and why I decided to stay with him.


Cause I use mouthwash
Sometimes I floss
I've got a family
And I drink cups of tea

I then ask Brock a personal question. "Do you have a girlfriend?" Remembering all of his failed attempts with girls. He then hangs his head down, clearly sad.

I win. A grin forms on my face.

He then decides to bring the conversation back to Ash.

He slips that Ash had been lucky about how he had some girls kiss him, two names: Bianca and Melody pop up as he talks.

He quickly closes his mouth. Realising his grave error.

I know now, Ash has been cheating on me, I am angry, furious, and


I've got nostalgic pavements
I've got familiar faces
I've got mixed-up memories
And I've got favourite places

Sad.

I go into my room; I rip up all the letters that he has given me, and sit on my bed. Letting my tears flow freely.


And I'm singing Uh-Oh on a Friday night
And I'm singing Uh-Oh on a Friday night
And I'm singing Uh-Oh on a Friday night and I hope every thing's gonna be
alright
And I'm singing Uh-Oh on a Friday night and I hope every thing's gonna be
alright

Later that day, after Brock and my parents leave, I receive another letter from Ash, with its pack of lies. I rip it up and throw it into the bin. I have had enough of him. But the pain still hurts.

The door rings. I am not in the mood for this, but open it anyway to tell the trainer that the gym isn't open and my dad has gone.

It turns out to be Drew.

He gives a rose to me, and walks in, without me having to say anything.

I close the door and turn around to him as he waits behind me.

He wouldn't cheat on me, would he?

I then get pulled deep into a kiss, I try to break free, but can't.

I hear the door open, a familiar presence coming in, but I can't break away from Drew to see.


Uh-Oh-Uh-Oh-Uh-Oh-Uh-Oh

Drew then let's go and says that he loves me. His body still over mine.

I let my hand touch the button on one of my Pokéballs, Blaziken is then released, and seeing my predicament, launches a blaze kick on the creep, throwing him outside of the house, through the now opened door.

"PISS OFF, PERVERT!" I shout out to him, and slam the door shut. Rage builds up inside of me once again, and I feel that I really need some mouthwash because my mouth is starting to smell like I've been eating grass.

I look down and see a half of a ribbon, just inside of the door.

It's not my half.

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R & R