It's kind of funny- I was wondering if the readers would remember the bit about the breath leaving Sara's lungsā¦..? I'm not going to give any hints about that though. Anyway, I was wondering if you people would remember at all because of the hook at the end with Jacob- even as the author, I almost forgot when I reread my chapter for the edit! If you want to, you might want to read the first part of the last chapter again.
As for Chabanabam, I love the honesty in your review- I can promise that some pretty juicy scenes are coming up, the next two chapters should be more of a build up- but I'd say the really good stuff is coming soon. I've been doing a great deal of story plot build ups- that's probably why it seems so slow right now.
I'd like to thank my beta Heartbroken1, who I've not been corresponding with recently, but still really value in this.
Thanks to anyone who liked my story enough to follow it into the sequel, I lost a lot of readers that way- and anyone who takes the time to let me know what they think.
Due to a really funky Internet system- you may find my chapters posted more raggedly- unfortunately this is first time I've been able to get through today! I don't know how soon I'll be able to again.
You guys rock,
MARAKPARKER
