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Chapter 12.1
They ran through the forest, silence claimed them. Nobody spoke.
She was running on a fast pace, not breaking a sweat. She couldn't let her children get hurt. She knew, she didn't love them like a good mother should. But still. They were her children, her blood.
"We need to get moving faster.", she told the others, who nodded. She saw Tenten having trouble to keep up. Her still sore legs seemed to hold her back.
After another hour of running, they rested.
"It's too dark to go on further.", she heard Sasuke call out for them.
"Hai." , they all flopped down on the ground.
Sakura and Ino seemed to be exhausted, they were already asleep. She personally was wide awake, she couldn't close one eye. She wasn't as tired as the others, so she went for a walk.
Sasuke, Neji, Shikamaru, Tenten and Naruto sent her an asking look, she only shook her head.
Hinata was walking through the forest, getting to a small clearing. She leaned her head down on a branch, taking deep breaths, feeling the blood pulsating through her veins. Hinata clenched her hands into a fist, banging it against the bark, slowly small tears slipped through her eyes, it hurt. Her fist hurt badly, but she didn't stop, instead, she was stopped by a hand.
Naruto's hand.
"How cliché.", she laughed, not a real laugh, Naruto's face was serious.
"We need to talk.", he told her, she nodded understandingly.
They sat down on a small cliff near the clearing.
"We used to be friends.", Naruto started, laughing without any humour.
"Yes.", she answered.
"Sakura didn't even look at me.", Naruto's gaze narrowed.
"I was so happy as I saw her smile, the day I brought Sasuke back.", Hinata nodded.
"Why did you leave?", he asked her finally.
"Everything started as we went to Tsunade-sama, we had a strange kind of stomach flu, you know, it was a bad case back then, everyone had it.", she smiled lightly, he nodded.
"So, we went to Tsunade-sama as soon as we got rid of it and requested a mission, but this mission sent us to a country, which still held this flu. She told us a traveller had come by and brought a pill, which should give us a resistance against this flu.", she looked at him, he nodded again, mentioning for her to continue.
"Tsunade told us about the pill, she said that she had examined it, so we thought it would be safe. We took it and after that we took off to the mission, as expected, we didn't get the flu again. The day after was the Jonin-party…", Hinata was interrupted by him.
"And why did you leave? This explains nothing.", he raised an eyebrow, Hinata shot him a look that told him: patience.
"The Jonin-party.", she began again.
"Do you remember? You talked to me the whole time, we talked the whole night. You got me drinks till I was drunk and home and then, I rather not want to talk about it, but I know I have to. Naruto we had sex, the next day, I was woken up by Sakura and Ino, they told me to look outside, there was you, talking about a bet, you held my bra in your hands. How do you think it looked like? Naruto I was hurt.", she told him to stop, because he was already opening his mouth again.
"Then, we went on a mission, because we couldn't face you. It just hurt too much because we loved you, we only gave you our innocence because we thought you'd love us back."
She swallowed the tears which welled up in her eyes.
"So, after this mission we wanted to talk to you, but you already had your new girlfriends, don't deny it, we saw it, then we left again for a mission. We got sick and first shrugged it off, but it got worse so we let Tsunade check-up on us, with the result that we were pregnant. We requested to leave, because we thought it would be for the best.
We were happy in the Tea-village at first, but then someone came after us, first, they went after our children, they wanted to kill them at first, but after a time, they tried to capture them. We were forced to return because we were severally wounded and out of chakra, not able to protect our children anymore. While we were living with you, we tried hard not to let you find out who the fathers are, because we were afraid you'd push us aside. Also I have to say, I was afraid you'd laugh at me, or you'd call me off. We didn't want to talk to you, hell, we didn't even want to be near you, because it hurt.
Then, after a while Sakura found out about the pills, because it was kind of strange that we all got pregnant with twins. The pill was divided into 2 parts, one with male genes, the other one with female, Tsunade had no chance in finding out about it in the short time she examined them.
We finally came to the clue, that it had to have something to do with the bet and someone planned a plot against us, but we weren't sure, also, we didn't have any evidences.", she sighed.
"Finished.", she said after a while.
It grew silent between the two, they only saw darkness, it surrounded them.
"I think we should return.", he said after a while.
"Aren't you going to say something about this?", she asked him, he only shook her head, she narrowed her eyes.
"Okay ..", she said and was about to turn around as he held her hand, lowering his head he brushed his lips against hers, waiting for response. Even in the dark he could see her pearl white eyes. Her arms were pressed against her sides as she kissed him back, first, slowly, but seconds after it was more, she was hugging him, he was pressing her closer to himself, feeling her warm form against him, slowly breaking apart, he stroked her cheek with his hands, stroking back her bangs.
"The trees have ears.", he whispered and she understood.
He turned to leave. "You weren't the only one fooled.", he said, leading her away.
As they returned, they saw the others sound asleep, Naruto and Hinata just laid themselves next to the others, falling asleep on an instant.
"We should get them by tonight.", Shikamaru said, reaching for an apple he brought with him.
"Then, why don't we leave now?", Ino asked impatient.
"It's still too dark.", he told her, she slumped down again, leaning on Sakura, who was also still resting.
She woke up groggily, after rubbing her eyes - she still felt the saltiness of her tears- , she also grabbed and apple and put her sleeping back away, getting ready for the day by the river.
By dawn they jumped from tree to tree, until they could see the outlines of Otogakure.
"Byakugan.", Neji activated his Byakugan, searching for any clue of the children.
"They are south west from us.", Hinata shouted seconds later, they all wiped their heads in her direction, she only jumped ahead of them.
She was tired, sure, she slept the night before, but not really good, her mind was confused, she was confused.
Jumping over another branch, she tried to sort out her thoughts.
What was she going to do?
What could she do?
She watched Hinata and Naruto running ahead of them, Sakura, Ino, Shikamaru and Sasuke right behind them, that left Neji behind her. Nice. She felt his gaze on her back, so she just picked up pace, trying to get next to Sakura, but her legs were just too tired to do so, so Tenten just had to bear his looks, she couldn't hold her tears, which flew out of the sides of her eyes, and she knew he saw them.
Shortly after, they came to an halt.
"They entered a building ahead from us. They are still 30 minutes away, keep your guard up, it's getting rough, now that they have them, they sure don't want them to get away.", Hinata shouted.
"Hai."
Tenten noticed herself growing weaker and weaker and she decided that it was no use.
"Guys .. I'm off.", they all turned back to face her, she was panting hard. They all knew that it was a big sacrifice for the tomboy of them to give up.
"Just rest here, we'll get you back later.", Shikamaru shouted, she nodded and plopped down on a branch, still panting.
"You sure are okay?", Neji asked her, she nodded, giving him a fake smile, he frowned and jumped after the others.
Ino back flipped, as she heard a Kunai flying past her. Getting three on her own, she began attacking the enemies.
"Get ready, we're near.", she said darkly, before disappearing in the woods, fighting off the Shinobi.
"Yoruki-chan.", Sora tugged her, tears clearly to be seen in her eyes.
"Yoruki-chan.", Toru asked also, who noticed that she was longer asleep than the others.
"Let her be .. she's okay .. I think.", Takao sighed as he pulled his sisters head into his lap.
"What do you think they want?", Tori asked.
They were all sitting in a kind of cellar, they were knocked out and brought here that was all they could remember when they woke up.
"They want our power, that's clear.", Kenji said, closing his eyes, trying to ignore the pounding headache.
"But why?"
"Qui, qui mes amours. I'm after you, but not because of your strength, nor because of your bloodline limits. I can give you power. Power to protect those you love. I will train you all, but the best .. is going to get a special gift from me."
They all wiped they heads around, on a small door stood a man, he wasn't really tall, nor did he look that strong, but there was an aura around him which made him really scary, his hair was grey, he had glasses, but his eyes, they weren't normal, they looked like a snake.
"Hello, kids. My name is Orochimaru. Do you want power?", they all froze.
"We are way to weak.", Ino shouted, trying to pry of Rain shinobis which were holding her down one by one.
"We aren't.", Sasuke shouted, activating his Mangekyou Sharingan, by now, 30 Ninja's were running after them, he caught them in an illusion, sending them with a kunai seconds later into endless darkness.
In the meantime they reached the building.
"They are coming from west.", Hinata shouted, panicking.
"Get in.", Naruto pushed her inside the building.
"Maybe we should've look FIRST.", Hinata shouted as she fell and fell, and, well.. fell.
"Sorry.", Naruto's Kage Bushins held her before she could hit the ground.
"Can you see another way in?", Shikamaru asked Hinata from the opening.
"Yeah .. you have to come down too, it's right here.", the bluish haired girl shouted.
Naruto was down a second later, standing next to her.
"That was really close. If I hadn't caught you..", Hinata nodded, smiling at him in the darkness.
"How should we get down there?", Neji asked, Shikamaru sighed.
"Use your chakra.", Neji, Sakura, Sasuke went first.
"You're next Ino.", he told her, she was getting ready as they felt the first attacks coming at them, the blonde was still busy trying to cannel her chakra.
"Troublesome.", Shikamaru used a string, wrapped it around a kunai which he threw in the opposite wall.
"Hey!", Ino shouted as he grabbed her around the waist and roped down with her.
"Okay, which way?", Ino asked.
"Kind of déjà- vu?", Sakura asked, Hinata groaned.
"Byakugan.", Neji shouted.
"It's no use, the walls are full of chakra.", Hinata sighed, Neji smirked. "Maybe for you, try to look through the chakra strings with one eye, it's better, close your other one."
"You're right.", she exclaimed.
"Okay .. take the left one, I can see chakra signatures there.", Hinata shouted, getting ready to run.
"Hai."
They were running towards the ending of another long hallway, getting more and more frustrated.
"We're there.", Neji shouted.
They were entering a big hall. They just stood there, shocked. Way to many enemies, but, this wasn't the problem.
Their children stood there, glaring and Kabuto was standing behind them, grinning like a maniac.
No one moved, a Shinobi tried to attack, but Kabuto's hand stopped him from doing so.
"Now, mes amours.", Kabuto hissed, just now they noticed that it wasn't Kabuto but Orochuimaru.
"What do you want?", Sasuke hissed.
"I? You should now that at least.", he sickly smiled at him.
"Sora-chan.., little Sora-chan you go first.", he announced.
"You know who you're mother is, do you?", the little one nodded, pointing at Ino.
"And you do know who your brother is, do you?", she nodded again, Toshio walked up beside her.
"And you do know your dad, do you?", they nodded their heads.
"So, you know where your parents are .. now .. kill them."
Chapter 12.2
"Yoruki! STOP it!", Sakura screamed, her eyes widened. "Don't!"
Black and red captured her, she was chained to a cross in the middle of the road.
"Let me go!", she shouted, trying to pry her arms off.
Yoruki just stood there, doing nothing.
Slowly, she came closer, holding a kunai up to Sakura's throat, she sliced it, slightly. Blood appeared where the knife had been before.
"Okaa-san.", she said, letting the kunai fall down.
"Yoruki-chan .. please!"
"Why don't you love us?", the girl in front of her asked, the other woman's eyes widened, she shook her head, trying to get out, trying to find the right words.
"You don't have to lie.. ", the little girl assured her.
"We don't need love anymore .. just power and in order to get this .. we have to kill the people which are precious to us.. were.", she picked up the kunai, and rammed it into her side. Sakura screamed in agony.
But then, everything became a blur. She closed her eyes, opened them, and closed them again. As she opened them again, she was back in the room they were before. Sasuke held her against his chest. She could smell blood, he was wounded.
Yoruki and Takao were both panting, but a determined expression was on their faces.
Neji was fighting alone against his kids, not that it would be a problem, also with the others, but they had to be careful not to harm them. Another problem was that the rest of the ninja's joint the fight. Nice. Note the sarcasm here.
"God how I hate you.", Kenji shouted, gritting his teeth.
"Why?", Neji asked, avoiding one of his punches.
"You are the reason, okaa-san never loved us.", he said, darkly.
Neji lost for a moment his concentration.
"What?!", he asked him.
"I knew all along that you're my dad, I didn't need Orochimaru to get it.", he said, darkly.
"I see.", Neji said, avoiding another Shinobi who tried to get near him.
"Tori-chan, now!", he shouted, jumping away. Several weapons were flying at him, of course, he used his defence, Neji panted, his body hadn't recovered from the fight before.
He saw ca 10 Shinobi's running towards him, he spit up blood, trying to find his balance. But before he could do anything, a shadow appeared out of nowhere, killing them. Tenten landed before him also panting.
"I just couldn't sit back.", she frowned.
"Tori-chan, Kenji-kun.", her eyes were full of hurt as she looked down to her children.
"Shut up, I don't want to hear it.", Kenji shouted, getting another Kunai and running towards her.
"I don't want to fight you.", Tenten said, lowering her Kunai.
SPLASH.
His kunai hit her stomach deeply. She did nothing, just a pained smile.
She sank down to her knees. "I didn't love you .. cough .. you reminded me too much of the guy I love .. so .. cough .. deeply. I'm sorry.", one fist was on the ground as she coughed up blood.
The red liquid splattered on Kenji's face, but it wasn't the only liquid there. He never had cried before, now the salty tears were running down his cheeks like a waterfall.
"I don't love you.. but I'll try .. to be a better mother .. and to love you .. I'm sorry...", Tenten mouthed as she knocked out her son and daughter, pressing them against herself she back flipped and landed next to Neji.
"Please ..help me ..", he just nodded, but she fell down, having trouble breathing.
"Sakura!!", he shouted, looking around, panic in his eyes.
Shikamaru appeared next to him, his son on his side, Neji raised an eyebrow.
"He's my son.", Shikamaru said. "He knew what Orochimaru was up to.", he smiled at the little boy next to him.
Flashback:
"Sora-chan .. NO .. ", Ino shouted as she saw her daughter running towards her.
"Toshio .. listen to me .. you need to calm down we were fooled, jeez, just stop now.", Shikamaru sighed as he broke free from his sons jutsu.
"We were?", Ino asked.
"Jeez .. it's not the right time!", Shikamaru dodged a kunai which was flying towards them.
"Why should I believe you?", he asked him.
"Because I'm smart.", Shikamaru's nice response was.
"Jeez .. I think Orochimaru plans something, he seems troublesome, it's troublesome to fight anyways."
Flashback end.
"This won't safe you from explaining everything to me.. jeez … troublesome.", Toshio muttered.
"Troublesome.", Shikamaru sweatdropped, "Sakura will be here soon, I sent Ino to help Sasuke out along with Sora.
"Yoruki-chan!", Sora tried to get to her friend.
"What do you want? Why aren't you fighting?", Yoruki shouted.
"We are, but we're not fighting on your side. You have to calm down. Talk to them. Your okaa-san loves you .. she just didn't realized it!"
"What do you know about my mother?", Takao shouted.
"Talk to her!", Sora kept on with it.
"I don't need to TALK!", Yoruki shouted.
"All I want is power .. power to go my OWN way.", Takao shouted.
"Takao .. you'll never be happy then .. you'll feel empty .. you need persons close to you.", Sasuke butted in, holding Sakura closer to him.
"Don't talk like you know me!", he shouted.
"I do know you .. you're like me."
"I'm not like you .."
"But you're hurting your mother the same way, I did. What makes you different?", Sasuke asked him, looking down at Sakura who fainted minutes before. "What makes you different?"
Yoruki's eyes widened, tears shot in her eyes.
"I'm not, Okaa-san told me .. to heal everyone .. even enemies .. and okaa-san isn't an enemy … she protected us.", she said, slowly walking up to her mother and father.
"I'm not..", tears slipped down her face as she hugged her parents knees.
"No .. Yoruki .. not you too. Don't you remember? She just left as you were unconscious as well as he did!", Takao shouted, glaring activating his Sharingan again.
"Onii-chan ..", Yoruki said, holding her hand out, grabbing with the other Sasuke's hand.
"Don't call me that..", he spat.
"Onii-chan!", she repeated.
"I don't want to hear it!", he shouted, holding his hands over his ears.
"ONII-CHAN!!", but before he could say another words, a stone hit his head, he fell down unconscious.
The little pink haired girl ran towards her brother, getting on her knees.
"Onii-chan, Onii-chan.. ", she whispered, a hand on her shoulder made her whirl around.
"I'll watch over him.", Sasuke smiled at her. "Do you think you could safe Tenten for us?", he asked her, she nodded.
"Come with me!", Sora shouted, bringing her to Neji and Tenten, Neji was currently covered by Shikamaru and Ino.
"Where's Sakura?", Neji asked.
"She fainted.", Yoruki said, seeing Neji narrowing his eyes.
"But I can heal her!", she said, making Neji look at her.
"You sure?", he asked, she nodded and began healing.
"I .. I need your chakra .. Neji-san.", she said, her hands shook, he lent her some.
"I can do it .. this time.", she smiled, biting her lip afterwards.
"You can do it.", Sora said, holding on her shoulder tightly.
"She lost too much blood.", Yoruki panted.
"Is she going to die?", Neji asked.
"Am I really talking to such a young girl?", he asked himself.
"No .. Sora-chan .. grab in my bag .. there will be a pill, wrapped in paper .. I need it.", she said, the blonde did what she was told.
Yoruki slipped the pill inside Tenten's mouth. "It's a blood- pill it quickens the production of erythrocytes." , Sora's and Neji's mouth hung open.
"You're good.", Neji said.
"I know ..", she stuck out her tongue as she finished healing her.
"RASENGAN!", they all wiped their heads around to look with amazement at the last family's fight.
"Kage Bushin No Jutsu!", Hina shouted, surrounded by her clones which had all activated their Byakugan.
Hinata and Naruto were fighting against the two of them and some other Ninjas. The blonde father was currently shocked by seeing his son using "his" attack, the Rasengan.
"What the hell? When did you teach him the Rasengan?!", he shouted, dodging the blow.
"Uh .. Naruto-kun .. I guess it was last year .. ", she said, kind of lost in her own battle.
"You have to stop them.", he told her, she only shook her head. "You're the only one able.", she declared.
He held a grim expression on his face, but finally he nodded.
"Toru, Hina. I know you went through way to much the past times .. but you have to trust me and your mother, we made up, please, give us another chance to make it right .. to be your true, real parents." , he asked them, they thought for a moment.
"Prove it!", Toru shouted, Hina was standing behind him, tugging on his t-shirt.
"How?", Naruto asked him, he would do everything for his son to believe him.
"Kiss okaa-san!", Hinata blushed, Naruto grinned ..the others .. held their laughs.
"No problem.", he pulled her close, kissing her full lips and smiling like an idiot.
"Oh god .. that was way too cheesy …", Toshio sighed. "Troublesome.", his father agreed.
"Wow .. Pay attention love birds.", Ino shouted as she tried to get to them, but failed, instead Toru blocked the attack from two Ninjas who tried to get to them.
They jumped back, so that they were all beside each other.
"We need to get the others out.", Sasuke shouted, referring to Yoruki, Takao, Kenji, Tori, Tenten and Sakura.
"We can't leave.", Ino said darkly, they were surrounded by enemies.
"Aw shit!", Naruto cursed, getting his children behind his back.
"Orochimaru .. what are you UP to?", Sasuke shouted, angered.
"I thought you'd never ask me Sasuke-kun.", he smiled his sickly sweet smile as the others gritted his teeth.
"You were the one who kidnapped the village girls back then.. weren't you. First you wanted revenge for your Shinobis, but then you decided to use one of our children as container for your next transfer .. right?", Shikamaru mused.
"How the heck did you figure that out?", Naruto asked, the lazy genius only rolled his eyes.
"I wasn't sure .. but I thought about it since the day Sasuke told us he had talked to Takao.", he replied.
"Well, well.. you're not for nothing the genius in Konoha.", Orochimaru said.
"But you were wrong. I never wanted revenge for my Shinobis, the reason I gave them the pill .. and the reason I blackmailed you .. it was pure hate .. I wanted revenge for the little Kunoichis who screwed up my plans on one of their missions. I was the one who released this flu first in the Hidden Village snow because I wanted to kill those brats who refused to obey.
They found out an antiseptic medicine for this kind of flu and saved the village. (1) So I longed for revenge .. a cruel revenge .. I just couldn't kill them .. no it would be too not painful .. but now .. since we're here .. together and they have their children with them and the people most precious to them .. it will be a pleasure for me to kill every single ones of you. Except for one, the one who actually survives has the chance to be my new container, so prepare yourself.", he hissed.
"Get the hell down!", Naruto shouted as he saw some more Shinobi attack.
(A/N: Since some of you didn't like such a fighing-part, I'LL just SKIP it. So don't blame .. BLAME someone else.)
They fought about another half an hour, but it looked rather bad. Ino, Neji, Shikamaru and Tenten passed out, Naruto and Sasuke were the only ones left.
One after one died from blood lost as Naruto pieced through the enemies bodies merciless.
He couldn't feel any sympathy for them, never. Slowly but surely, even his never ending chakra slipped away, he saw Sasuke falling to his knees.
If Naruto couldn't make it ..then .. who?
He got his last strength and went up on another assault, but before he could even think about killing Orochimaru, he got hit before he could sense the enemy who came out of nowhere.
The blonde slowly but surely sank down on his knees, he blinked once, twice, his vision blurred.
He had to stay awake, no one of them was able to fight, they were all down.
"Stay awake ..", he told himself, before he got hit on the head another time and this time, he fell forward into the never ending darkness of unconsciousness.
Preview:
"Baika no Jutsu!"
"Raikiri Isse!"
"Jinju Konbi Henge: Sotoro!"
"Kikaichu no Jutsu!"
"Ai to Seishun no Omote Renge!"
"Hien!"
"Jubaku Satsu!"
„Took us long enough to get here .. ", one of 8 mysterious person sighed.
"Seems like we missed our special entrance ..", another sighed.
"Well, well now…"
…
TBC
DON'T LOOK UP THE WORDS I USED UP THERE AND IF YOU KNOW .. DON'T TELL XD (Well you could tell me who you think it is .. but I think it's clear ..) –cough-
I planned to tell you the whole story in this chapter, but I kind of confused myself x) because Naruto is the only one who knows everything (because he talked with Hinata) and .. yeah .. you'll get it soon x) (sorry) ..
Actually I planned it out different but since I got 2 flames (criticism whatever you'd call it .. I won't mention any names if you want to know just read my reviews x))) ) – I decided to change it .. x) hope you'll like it this time.
(1) if you have biology: there are different forms of flu they are able to change .. somehow because of that you have to get vaccinate against it every year .. so I hope it makes sense .. they still needed the pill they got from tsuande, but they discovered an antiseptic-thing against the flu in the hidden snow village.
Only one or two chapters left .. you'll find out everything the next chapter
Aw and sorry for the last update :D lol I had some problems, 2 sleep over, some lazy mood swings and I nearly got myself into the hospital last week .. lol .. yeah .. and I nearly got hit by a car .. I'm such a klutz lol x))
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