Oh Gosh. Y'all are a hoot. I love your reviews! Lol everyone is confuzzled! Ok so basically I just made her transformation into a vamp a little different than the one in the books. Her body will melt so it can reform into the marble-like skin. That is why she is so hot. I will explain what happened later in the story. Oh and Edward has a bed in my fan fiction.
Brandon POV
After hearing of Bella's incident I rushed home and ran to her room.
She wasn't there so I used my hearing, which I have learned that it is more acute than other humans, to find everyone. My hearing led me to Edward's room.
Upon entering Edward's room I saw Bella on Edwards bed with her hair fanned out and sweat covering every inch of her body. Edward stood next to her with a lost and hurt expression plastered on his flawless face. Carlisle was on the other side looking between my sister and Edward. A mountain lion was in the corner of the room eyeing everyone trying to figure out what was happening. I was startled a bit when I first saw it but I then remembered that it must be Lee's doing.
"Ah, good. Brandon I need you to tell me everything you know of in your families medical history."
Should I tell him one of them was a vampire just like he is? I made my mind up in a split second when I heard Bella scream out in pain. I told Carlisle about my theories and he nodding his head turned to talk to Edward.
"The venom in her blood could have possibly over taken her. She was most likely in great stress or angered extremely, so instinct took over. The venom from the vampire parent acted on instinct once her brain registered something dear to her was in danger."
Yes, that does sound good. Let's go with that.
Edward started panicking when she broke out in another round of terrorizing screams. I walked up closer to the bed to see my beautiful sister with her back arched and mouth wide open filling the room with screams. Lovely, from what I understand my little sister will go through three torturous, unimaginable pain-filled days. Well according to Lee.
Short I know. I'm terribly sorry. I just had to get something out for y'all!